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Sol,
I am Virginia Wolfe on Booksie.
So...what happens now?
Also I need to change my screen name on Booksie. There is no way in heaven I could measure up to Virginia Wolfe, I just liked the picture.
Thanks for your time,
Dagny smile

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I listen to the popular podcast Small Town Murders which examines a different small-town murder each episode. Yesterday I listened to episode 517-Slaughter at Bloody Ranch-Hondo New Mexico and the host referred to reference material he got from a book on Booksy. In fact, he said Booksy at least five times in that one episode.

When I say popular, I mean the hosts sell out auditoriums whenever they take their podcast on the road, so in the podcast universe, STM is a BFD. And being mentioned on STM is bigger BFD.

Just thought you should know,
dags

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Thanks Dirk.

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Dirk B. wrote:

Dagny, when you have a few moments, could I ask you to have a look at the sticky thread I'm maintaining in Premium and in Writing Tips/Site Help entitled "How to Get the Most Reviews of Your Writing"? Is there anything you'd like to see added or changed as it relates to poetry?

Dirk--

Too bad Michael Jackson left, you could've asked him about poetry. I write free verse for fun. Anyway, I'm the wrong person to ask. With all my work, I put it out there with the attitude if they read it, fine, if not, that's okay, too. I was never a fan of a lot of reviews. You get ten reviews, two of them are going to say the same thing, four of them are going to disagree with each other, and if you're lucky you'll get four reviews you can use.

The only suggestion I have for new members on how to get the most reviews of their writing is the same one I got when I joined: Post, read and review.

smile

Dirk B. wrote:

One more idea that came to mind might be contests that are open only to trial/new members, with the rest of us focused on reviewing their entries before the contest deadline.

This is a really good idea.

dags:)

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Dirk--

Thank you for clearing that up. And for letting me know what Sol is prepared to do to help this site.

Thanks again,

dags smile

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Quoting Dirk--"The best way to prevent new reviewers from reading your story is to put a BIG NOTE in the content summary for your book and/or right at the top of your initial chapter. I just did the same for "The Rise of Connor v1". I replaced the prologue with a big note that asked people not to review it as it will soon be replaced with v2. I also made all the early chapters (1-15) inactive, to further reduce the chance of anyone new accidentally reviewing it..."

How are you going to revive this site if you don't accept new reviewers?

When I joined this site there was a group of writers who made sure every new member who posted had at least three reviews. Most of them have moved on. I suggest we start giving new members at least three reviews of their work.

I know those reviews encouraged me to continue on with TNBW. I knew I needed a lot of credits because I was a writer on steroids, and I reviewed my ass off. I reviewed people that I knew wouldn't review me because of the genre I chose. I reviewed whole books because they told good stories. I think I did 1000 reviews in that first year and I received half as many reviews back.

To me it's a simple fix. You want to revive TNBW, review new members. Make them feel welcome. I know that in those early years the welcome I got from the members made me want to spread the word about the site.

dags smile

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Cool beans! Welcome back, buddy!
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Alan--
I am praying for you and your wife.
Take care,
dags smile

Dirk-
I have been on this site for 13 years and have poems, books and short stories in my portfolio. Over 200 of them, which I will have to back up.
I don't know about anyone else, but I worked fucking hard for the 2000 points I have, reading and reviewing without expecting to be reviewed back. So, I am not happy about losing those points.
Waiting for Sol...

I am not worried about the writing skills of the members of Booksie compared to mine, nor am I worried about the method of reviewing over there. I AM worried about my portfolio. It contains at least 200 pieces of work. Are our portfolios going with us? Will it stay here until we transfer it to a thumb drive? And if they are transferred to Booksie, that's a lot of data transfer.
I am worried about my banking information being transferred, too.
Also, I wish Sol would come into the thread to answer our questions and give us some idea of what HE's thinking.

Dirk B. wrote:

I'm trying to figure out the best way to show a word being stretched out by a speaker, as in: Neeever gonna happen. Technically, that changes the e sound to ie, which is not what I intend. Or is my example generally understood to be just a stretched vowel?

Thanks
Dirk

Dirk,

I think the best way to show Never being stretched out is not by writing it that way. IMO it would be more effective if you describe it. For example, "Never going to happen," Dirk said, drawing out the word never in a thin, high voice reminiscent of a distant siren.

Just a thought.

dags smile

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Doug--
I am glad, too, that you had good first responders tending to you! CHF is no joke. Praying for your continued recovery.
dags smile

Alan--
Good news indeed! Another answer to my prayers. Continued good thoughts and prayers directed your way!
dags smile

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An answer to my prayers. YAY!!!
dags smile

Alan--
I am praying for you and your wife.
Dagny

George FLC wrote:

I put Abraham Lincoln's Gettysburg address into Grammarly. Sorry, Abe. You only get a score of 85. Two -ly adverbs and 5 -ing verbs! And comma issues.

Granted there were different versions, but this one was the only one with his signature.

Opening sentence:
Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Corrected by Grammarly:
Four hundred and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation conceived in Liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

I prefer the original line. Go Abe!

In Lincoln's defense, he wrote the Gettysburg Address on the back on an envelope on the train ride there.
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Jack the Knife wrote:
Well, he’s lost me as a reader.

Jack--
It's the age-old argument: Style vs plot. Lots of authors I read have writing styles I personally can't stand, but their plots are excellent. And authors that have a great writing style but terrible plots. The trick is reading them until you can't anymore.
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Jack the Knife wrote: I just finished reading a thriller by Brad Thor, a bestselling novelist. He starts so many sentences with “ing” participles, it is painful to read. Where are the editors?

When you have a huge fan base you don't need no stinkin' editors. smile

Tyler Martin. Book reviewers.

Marylin--
I'm praying for you. If you don't believe in God, just think of them as rays of positive energy. See you when you get back.
Take care,
dags smile

Another winner? No surprise there! You're an excellent writer, who deserves all the accolades your work receives!

dags smile

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Bill--

You got this. You're going to kick heart diseases' ass!

Keep walking,

dags smile

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Wally--
You asked me a question in your reply to my review of your poem. "How do you know when to end a poem?"

  A poem ends when you say it does. And if it doesn't feel right, rewrite it until it does.

Then you asked, "Why don't more people publish poetry on this web site?"

  I don't know.

Hope this helps,

dags wink

Bill--
Thinking about you, buddy. Get back here, soon, the old place isn't the same without you...
dags smile