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I remember Jewel. I read the first 2-3 chapters and liked the start. I'd be happy to do a beta review.

I also have a finished book which I'd love some last feedback on before I get ready to publish.

I've read plenty of successful books in first person. I'd think long and hard before doing a rewrite, especially based on one rejection and one article. How do you know POV is the problem? I'd ask some reviewers first before jumping to any decision.

Congratulations! I'm going to pick up a copy. Do you want me to order from Amazon or directly from  you?

Because of the orgy of editing I've done over the last eight weeks, I've been a bit remiss in my group duties. I apologize, especially because of the priority feedback I received. I'm back online and will be reviewing away. Happy New Year!

Thanks for the recommendation!

I read that, found it very helpful to structure my thinking.

There are hard ways to write a book and easy ways. In my humble opinion, the hard way is to go in without any kind of guide and simply write what you think is good literature and a good story. Some writers will luck into success, but the vast majority will fail. It's like building a house without a blueprint or even an idea of what makes a desirable house. Sure, one in a million will get lucky, but the vast majority wind up with a wreck.

Most good stories have common elements and learning what these are allows a writer to better sculpt their writing and also go outside the lines when it is necessary. We all start to learn about the formula in grade school - beginning, middle, and end. Personally, I'd rather be told how to create a compelling story than have to learn for myself. This is all my opinion, of course, and people can write however they want. The ultimate arbiters are the readers.

I read a lot of fantasy. Tell me in plain English why I should read your book. What makes it compelling and different? Right now what you have is not doing it. It's too much to digest.

How is everyone doing with book marketing? I thought I would revisit this thread as my book gets closer to launch. Is Amazon still the only game? What about Smashwords?

I think it's a great idea. Regional writers may actually get to meet each other in person. I'm in New England. Anyone game?

One thing that I have found really helpful is when reviewers not only point out a problem but provide a potential solution. Sometimes, a reviewer with a fresh set of eyes sees possibilities that I don't. This is something that I try now to do when I provide feedback.