"How to Write Good," by Michael O'Donohue.  Best tip ever: At the end, have all the characters run over by a truck; if it's a story about truckers, have them run over by a big truck.  Never failed yet.  (Yes, it's a joke. National Lampoon. And they had an issue with spoilers and had to say "no joke" for the end of "Lonely are the Brave.")  But originally, Gene Roddenberry thought of having the series end with the Enterprise blown up. (Which wouldn't have been fatal should, as it did, the series rose from the ashes.  Heinlein, in "The Rolling Stones," had the family pay their bills by a series on subetheric TV which they finally ended by having the hero at the bottom of an ocean on Jupiter, tied up and running out of oxygen, with menacing methane monsters closing in (no, they didn't know what they were). When they had to resume the series, the hero was just about to explain how he got out of this when an alert was rung and he ran off. So, if Roddenberry had blown up the Enterprise, in the first movie, as Admiral Kirk was about to explain, there would be a red alert.

Yes, writing tips from a comedy writer and the dean of science fiction. Can get any better than that.

Seriously, I often refer to Ronald Tobias' "20 Master Plots (And How to Build Them.)" And I ignore Stephen King.

I agree with most of that, but when the title is used in lieu of the name, it should be capitalized.  As in the example, "The Secretary has informed me," as that is the equivalent of saying "Mrs. Clinton has informed me."  (Sorry for the example, but she's the only secretary of state who sticks in my mind. Well, her and Kissinger.)

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I've already accepted that the pictures I download will not perfectly fit the scene. And this has a long tradition at least in science fiction even when the artist is working for the publisher of the story. It was either Galaxy or If that first published "Skylark Duquesne," a late member of the Skylark series published in the '60s or '70s. Turns out that, except for Earth, humans go naked in the universe. Well, except for the artist who drew a scene that was, in the story, naked but not in his rendition. So Dakota will be black and white, as I suppose is only right for a half-human, half-elfin.

And I'm glad you appreciate the pictures.

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Kdot, I thought of warning people but most are not quite that bad. While I have you on the horn--Dakota is mixed race and I'm having the devil of a time finding pictures of black female soldiers.  Any suggestions? Oh, and it doesn't really matter. The pictures are to get your attention. And they seem to have, in your case.

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Come on guys, check out the new novel.  Oh and I've mastered the art of uploading pictures, and, per Kdot's suggestion, got a lot from Deviantart.  I try to make them relevant to what's going on.

Love you all,
Rachel

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Thanks, Gacela. But I figured out how to use the tNBW hosting site.

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Thanks, Doug. I figured out what I was doing wrong with the tNBW website. They didn't have a 'select' button unless you right-clicked. So far, so good.

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Kdot, Gacela, and I'm sure others, have uploaded pictures to their posts. How do you do that? I've tried the 'image' icon and got the runaround, I've tried cursing, and I'm about to say to heck with it, if you want to see the pictures of the characters, wait until its published.  Can anyone help me?

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Mariana and Kdot have uploaded pictures. I got some pictures I downloaded from Depositphotos.com.  I am having endless difficulty in uploading them. The one I did was huge and I deleted it. Others simply won't get on the post.  So what's the secret?  I've tried cursing to no avail.

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Congratulations!

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Thanks, j p. I have Kindle Unlimited, so I'll pick it up. Congratulations!

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Glad you're ok, Bill. I spent some time in Dayton, so I can relate.

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Of course a gun. Why should Barbara and Dakota have all the fun? (One of these days I'll get a sword to join in with Rhiannon's fun, but a good one's expensive and it's hard to hunt with a sword and I know of no one who's actually gotten into a sword fight.)

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Nice, Nicholas. Thanks for sharing. My main medieval city is based on Savanna, Georgia at the time of the siege, the city in England that housed the Bounty, and my own imagination. Instead of eagles coming down and eating the offal, like in Savanna, I have harpies. Harpies are more fun. My other city is a hyper-modern one based on cities like Shanghai or the capital of Saudi Arabia. But any tool in the shed, gun in the arsenal, spice on the shelf, car in the shop (you can stop me any time...)

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Gacela:  I think on the "busy" index, you are near the top. It's great that you get to travel for work. I used to travel four or five times a year, paid for by my employer. I always found some time for the sights, even if that meant yet another mall. I visited relatives in Texas one time, so I know how that feels as well.

But as they say in the Writer's Lounge, always find time for your writing. (Carry a notebook, if you have to.)

A zombie story set in Sao Jose?  I'll think about it. If Elizabeth George and Deborah Crombie can write convincing Brit novels from their cozy houses in the US, I can write about Brazil from mine.

A GP 100 is a medium-size, six-shot .357 Magnum revolver made by Ruger. It always comes up as one of the top guns in any discussion. It is known for its reliability (like it fails as often as a Sasquatch sighting is verified), accuracy (wings off gnats at 50 meters), and for being useful as a club should you run out of ammo (it's built like the proverbial tank). It is bigger than their five-shot SP101 which is more useful for concealed carry (with an ankle or garter holster or IWB its invisible and almost comfortable) and their six-shot Ruger Redhawk, always listed as No. 1 for defense against bears (you move to long guns if you need more, or you hide in a hole and toss out honey jars while shouting how you are best friends with Yogi and Smokey). I had the latter two and now I have the GP100!  I've shot about a hundred rounds so far. I get a good grouping at 11 meters and am very happy.

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Congratulations, Will!

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Thanks for asking, Suin.
I've been staggeringly busy lately between taking my spouse to the doctor, going to the doctor myself, working on flooring, doing yard work (preparing for the summer fires), and tutoring (which despite my poor application of marketing has been really good lately.) I am also letting my beta of "Exile in Elsewhen" percolate for a while. I could use reviews of it. I will get back to reviewing soon. The weather has gone from summer to spring (shouldn't it be the other way around this part of the year?) I planted a lilac bush for Rosalyn. It's been raining, so I use my scythe for mowing. I bought a GP100, which I always wanted and finally got, but the weather hasn't allowed me to practice with it. (I suppose I could break down and re-join the range, but when I'm downtown, I'm too busy for practice.) Oh, and I'm watching stuff on Acorn and Britbox.  That's about it.

CJ, better to bite off more than you can chew than to have nothing to bite off on.

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Congrats, Brett!

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I've read one story from 2nd person and even written one story from that. It's different. It's fun. And it can get published.

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CJ:  You finished your critique. It just took me a couple of weeks to get around to publishing and then, I had a lot of technical difficulties. I converted my MS into .pdf which broke my Word .pdf extension. Then, I found out I only had to do that for the print version. Since my Word was in the Cloud, it decided to play hide-and-seek. And then I made a grammatical error which made them reject my advertising at first. But it's ll up and running, with a promotion and an advertising budget and a post on FB. Yippe-yay-ki-yah.

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Whoo! Hoo! The 4th novel in the series is now on Amazon.  Yippee-yi-yo-ki-yay!

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Whoo! Hoo! The 4th novel in the series is now on Amazon.  Yippee-yay-ki-yay!

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Welcome to the site, Brett.  And Bobbie is right, go premium. (Put yourself on a Starbucks budget if you have to or collect cans and bottles for the deposit. Dumpster dive and sell what you find.) You will find the feedback invaluable. Plus you get a sense of who your audience is and worst case scenario--you have an audience.

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I've been told to write the prologue but always be sure to call it "Chapter One."  In the case of my latest book, I originally thought the story started out too slowly for new readers. Older readers would, of course, go "Yippee!" as they like the characters and their situations. Then, I changed the order of the chapters which made the first few more action-packed and exciting, introduced the character but didn't really get into the conflict. Since the prologue, excuse me, Chapter One, did, I decided to keep it. So there you are.
(Or you can split the difference and have:  Chapter One: Prologue.)

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twang.  Well, you did say the first word...