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OK, my joke is not PC.  It usually involves ethnic minorities, the other gender, etc.  It won't help to substitute "white man," as that will offend The League of White Voters.  Nor men.  I'll be hearing from Men's Rights groups.  At the risk of Ray Bradbury's firemen showing up to burn my books and delete my fires, I'm just going to say, philosophers, as a colleague of mine once said, "You can't f--t in a philosophy department without getting an argument."

There were two philsoophers out hunting during deer season.  Bear season had come and gone.  The came across tracks.  The first philosopher said, "Those are deer trcks."  The second one,said, "No, those are bear tracks."  His buddy said, "No, deer."  "Uh, uh, bear."  They kept on arguing until the train came and ran them over.  (Wah, wah, wah...)

Don't wory, John.  I only take your good suggestions.  (lol)  I'm going to be doing reviews for a while, to catch up with that, and earn enough points for these new chapters.  And I appreciate you rereading the whole book, once it's completely posted.  Love, Rhia.

There is a 3rd M/C in the book, a shadowy figure, and I wrote about her at the end of the book.  John Hamler made the excellent suggestion that I should have chapters on her throughout the book.  I just finished doing that, and realized that renumbering the chapters would be a pain.  There will be V.2 chapters which include her--they will actually be two separate chapters in one, to avoid the chore of renumbering.  If you read V.2 of these chapters, and have already read V.1, just skip to the new stuff.  This will save you a lot of work and I will  really appreciate it.  For new readers, read V.2.

The Chapters affected:  4, 6, 8, 18, 34.  Ch. 44 will be renamed.

I hope you enjoy the new character.

Love, Rhia

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I've seen comments on this book in the other topic, but I think this is best done here, under its own rubric.  There was a 3rd M/C in the book, a shadowy figure, and I wrote about her at the end of the book.  John Hamler made the excellent suggestion that I should have chapters on her throughout the book.  I just finished doing that, and realized that renumbering the chapters would be a pain.  There will be V.2 chapters which include her--they will actually be two separate chapters in one, to avoid the chore of renumbering.  If you read V.2 of these chapters, and have already read V.1, just skip to the new stuff.  This will save you a lot of work. 

The Chapters affected:  4, 6, 8, 18, 34.  Ch. 44 will be renamed.

I hope you enjoy the new character.

Love, Rhia

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Oh, you guys.  Just do as Hemingway did--start at the beginning, go to the end and stop.  He got the idea from the Red King in Alice in Wonderland, and it clearly works. lol

By the way, Gacela, what is your opinion of "Snow Crash?"  I've never read it, but feel I have, as rumor has it that Phillip Linden was inspired to create Second Life by reading it, and I'm involved with Second Life.  I do philosophy lectures there. (And they say a Ph.D. in philosophy is only good for bartending. lol).

Just heard from the managing editor of "Bewildering Stories."  He didn't give me a date, but it's scheduled for issue 705.  Going to the website, and you can find the date.

Thanks, Gacela.  Three chapters?  That shows me already that it would be helpful.  "Fasten your seatbelts; we're in for a bumpy ride." lol

Thanks, Gacela.  About what page is that in Ivanhoe?

Norm just gave me a nice suggestion, having to do with a battle fought by the Prussian King.  Boiled down to a one on one scene. This is the kind of help I need in the section of my novel on battles.  I have an MA in history, but never paid much attention to the "kings and battles" aspect, and anyway, don't want to have a military history ala Keegan and others.  I want to be more like John Reed in Reds, bringing the battles and struggle to an individual level.  Thanks, Norm, and thanks in advance to all of you helping me with the battles scene.

Gacela & CJ:  BsW doesn't pay and they sometimes even re-print.  I had a story that did pay, "The Deer Hunt" published under the nom d'plume, John Drake, that they published--actually to my surprise.  I sent it for the editor's enjoyment, thinking it was in violation of their guidelines.  (It uses a lot of swear words.)  You retain the copyright, so you can publish the stories elsewhere, although, without revisions, they probably wouldn't be accepted.  No subscription is required; you just go to the website and read.  You'll find my stuff under "Rachel Parsons, author" in the archives (I think even the John Drake one is there.)  They are semi-professional (based on their readership), encourage new writers, and are in the science fiction/fantasy/weird fiction genre.  They have no absolutes, and have published even urban mysteries, as long as they are weird ("bewildering.")  There are a lot of great writers there, and recurring series.  I've recommended it to my friends and to people in other social media forums (like FB and SL).  Except for one story, "The Gorgon," (see my tNBW bio), the evolution of Rhiannon can be seen there, as well as some other stories.  In the Gorgon, she is not just cursed to nakedness, but to absolute beauty too--so people are overwhelmed by looking at her. 

They used to have forums, like tNBW, but now just letters to the editor, and other special features.  The editor/publisher is a retired English Professor, so he often has a feature which is like an online exam on certain stories.  Just to provoke discussion and thinking about it.  I came across it as I was looking for online e-zines (I guess that's redundant).  Found it, someone who bought up the rights to Amazing, Fantastic, If, Galaxy, and a vampire magazine. 

You can trace the escalation of some characters by reading this story.  Rosalyn was a minor character at first, got her own story and was a major character toward the end of the original series.  Jeb Hardwick was premiered in one of the stories.  I would think of great titles back then too.  "I Still Wake from Nightmares."  "I draw Comfort from the Blood of my Enemies."  "One Beast That Will Not be Tamed."

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I don't find the Chicago Manual that good.  Prefer the MLA, and have been forced to use the APA.  But you're writing fiction, Randy.  Grammatical and stylistic rules should be known, but in order to (often) be broken.  Keep that in mind.  And remember, it ain't written in stone. (lol)

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Congrats, Ann!

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I can write in any genre (even international thriller, contrary to what I just IM'd Randall.  Yes, I suck at it, but I can write in it.)  A prize for every genre would get messy, but a prize for a multi-genre entry ends up like AGT, where you have jugglers, magicians, opera singers, all competing).  So I suggest people do suggest their fovorite genre, or one where they would like to stretch their wings in.  It's all in fun; it's all motivational; and $100 will not be life changing.  And--when I didn't win the last contest, I just sent my story out, and it's been accepted, with revisions.  I bring that up to show that even if you lose the contest, it's a learning experience, makes you a better writer, and can lead to success.  So any genre is fine by me, for these reasons.  Maybe we should have someone compile the suggestions and then we take a vote.

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For a context, I'd suggest that (1) the murder fit the locked room formula; (2) the judges could find the clues but only after the detective reveals the secret. So no, "Oh, I had a key..." would be allowed.  (lol)

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A locked room mystery is one where they find a dead body in a locked room, no way anyone could get into it or out of it.  Or maybe, there's one person in it, but he or she says they didn't commit the crime (and are innocent), yet, who else could have done it?  There are variations of it.  It doesn't have to literally be a locked room--it's just that no one could have killed the person, yet, he or she is clearly dead and murdered.  Agatha Christie's "The Mysterious Affairs at Style's" is perhaps one of the most famous.  Reginald Hill wrote one where it seems that the person must have committed suicide--no other explanation--yet, he did not.  I suppose in that respect, Asimov's "The Naked Sun" is one.  Only one person could have killed the victim, yet, she couldn't have killed him either.  The challenge is to have the clues as to how the murder was done clearly in the text, yet hidden, by distractors or prose, so that they don't leap out at the reader.

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Let's be more specific--not a mystery, but a locked room mystery.

Oh, thank you all so much!  ::hugs::

Randall Krzak wrote:

Many congrats!!

Thank you, Randy.  I hope your New Year is going well.

I just tell my friends to pay the 2 cents and temporarily join the group.  Yeah, click 'internet,' and you're published, but some places accept previously published work, as long as you retain the copyright.  You can always turn it into a pdf or publish it on your website, but that too is a prior publication.  Maybe send it to them in email.

A great way to start a New Year.  I have to change the ending, but I wrote a new one for it that's better anyway and allows me to re-use the character.  It's going to be published by the semi-professional e-zine, Bewildering Stories.  I'll let you know when it's scheduled.  Woo!  Hoo!  Great way to start the New Year.  (You see, things really do get better.  Oh, I know, the world is going to hell, but that's only if you don't count the dropping crime rate, the reduction in global warming since 1998, the halving of world poverty, the majority of people living in democracies for the first time in history, and the other thirteen indicators the UN uses for the state of the globe and most importantly--I'm once again publishing.)

A great way to start a New Year.  I have to change the ending, but I wrote a new one for it that's better anyway and allows me to re-use the character.  It's going to be published by the semi-professional e-zine, Bewildering Stories.  I'll let you know when it's scheduled.  Woo!  Hoo!  Great way to start the New Year.  (You see, things really do get better.  Oh, I know, the world is going to hell, but that's only if you don't count the dropping crime rate, the reduction in global warming since 1998, the halving of world poverty, the majority of people living in democracies for the first time in history, and the other thirteen indicators the UN uses for the state of the globe and most importantly--I'm once again publishing.)

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Jeanne M. Bannon wrote:

Hi folks,
I've come back to the site for the time being. I'm feeling disconnected from my close writer friends as so many have stopped writing sad I'm hoping for new connections and to rekindle old relationships. I've just uploaded the first three chapters of Incarnate, my latest work, and would appreciate some feedback. I am happy to reciprocate.


Welcome back, Jeanne.  I recall you from the Beforetime.  I'll be happy to be a reviewer, and am glad you re-start writing.  Appropro of kung fu, a friend of mine, after his 5th degree Black Belt said, "You can stop, but never quit."  (Or to put it another way--"You can check out any time you want, but you can never leave.")  I hadn't done any serious writing for about five years, and found that some of my writing buddies were gone from the site--but some were on Facebook.  Write and they weill come.  smile

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Happy New Year!  We celebrated by getting under the covers and drinking some marionberry cider.  We even missed Maria Carey's botched performance.  Hope everyone's was as good!

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jack the knife wrote:

Rhiannon, here's the link:
http://critters.org/predpoll/novelthrill.shtml At the top you can click on categories and scroll down to whatever category you want to cast a vote. You can cast one vote per e-mail address. If you want to add your book to a category, fill in the blanks and it will appear on the list of entrants shortly. In addition to voting for TNBW, you can vote in as many categories as you can, including your book and the books of other TNBW writers, including JTP and me! But the vote doesn't count until it's confirmed by return e-mail, which they'll send you.

Randy, thanks for voting for me, man!


Thanks, Jack.  Voted for you and Janet, tNBW, and Bewildering Stories, and its editor, Don Webb.

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I went to the site.  Couldn't find how to cast one's vote, even though I was a page that said that you cast votes here.  The site is partially down, due to the lack of a caretaker, but the poll was supposed to be open.  Don't see any instructions for how to vote for workshops or people.  But I would have voted for Janet, tNBW, and Bewildering Stories, and put myself in as someone to vote for.  It also said that the polls wouldn't be open until January.  Color me:  confused.  lol