Redemption

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Redemption

Status: Finished

Redemption

Book by: J.R. Geiger

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Genre: Fan Fiction

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Author’s Note: This is a work of fan fiction created for entertainment and creative expression. All characters, settings, and intellectual property referenced herein are the exclusive property of
DC Comics and Warner Bros. Entertainment. I make no claim of ownership and have no affiliation with, nor endorsed by, DC Comics or Warner Bros. Entertainment. This work is not intended for
commercial use, and no copyright infringement is intended.



Like many others, I've seen the different story lines in DC and didn't like them.



I thought I could do better. This story is a project I've been working on for a long, long time. I hope it sticks with you. It's a story about hope, redemption, family found, and family lost.



This story takes place in an alternate timeline and reality. Character ages, relationships, and events have been reimagined to explore new emotional and narrative dimensions. While the characters
remain true to their core identities, their circumstances and histories have been respectfully altered for creative purposes.

 

 

Content Summary


Author’s Note: This is a work of fan fiction created for entertainment and creative expression. All characters, settings, and intellectual property referenced herein are the exclusive property of
DC Comics and Warner Bros. Entertainment. I make no claim of ownership and have no affiliation with, nor endorsed by, DC Comics or Warner Bros. Entertainment. This work is not intended for
commercial use, and no copyright infringement is intended.



Like many others, I've seen the different story lines in DC and didn't like them.



I thought I could do better. This story is a project I've been working on for a long, long time. I hope it sticks with you. It's a story about hope, redemption, family found, and family lost.



This story takes place in an alternate timeline and reality. Character ages, relationships, and events have been reimagined to explore new emotional and narrative dimensions. While the characters
remain true to their core identities, their circumstances and histories have been respectfully altered for creative purposes.

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The stale air of the motel room clung to her like a shroud, a sickly blend of cheap disinfectant and forgotten cigarettes. It was a scent that had woven itself into the fabric of her skin, her hair, the over-sized, dingy sweatshirt she hadn’t shed in days. Outside, the midday sun fought a losing battle against the grime-caked curtains, bleeding only a weak, indifferent light into the gloom. Each breath felt shallow, a mere whisper in a body hollowed out and utterly spent.

On the scarred nightstand, a small, mismatched collection of pills lay scattered—stolen anti-anxiety meds and nameless painkillers, each a cold, smooth pebble in her palm. They promised a final, uncomplicated sleep. Gotham, the city she’d once set ablaze with laughter and chaos, felt impossibly distant, a fevered dream from another life. Here, on the forgotten side of everything, where the walls whispered secrets and sirens wailed like tired ghosts, only the biting reality of her failure remained.

The grimy mirror above the sink reflected a stranger. Not the playful, painted mask of the girl who danced on the edge of every explosion. This was just a woman, her face a road map of recent grief. Bruises bloomed, sickly purple and yellow, across her cheekbones, a split lip wept a faint, crusty line of red. Her eyes, once bright blue with manic glee, were dull, rimmed with the exhaustion of countless sleepless nights. She was a discarded toy, broken beyond repair, tossed aside when the game was over. They had told her she was nothing, and in this quiet, wretched room, with the cheap motel soap and small towels, she believed them. There was no fight left, not a flicker. She was at the bitter, scraped-out end of everything.

From the corner, a relic of a television hummed, a persistent static line flickering across the top of the screen, a low counterpoint to the crushing silence. A familiar face filled the display: Gotham’s favorite son, Bruce Wayne, sharp-suited and grave. He spoke with a quiet authority about the Thomas and Martha Wayne’s Family Shelter, his voice a measured balm, too calm for the storm in her head.

“Everyone deserves a second chance,” he said, “help if they need it.”

A sound, half-gasp, half-sob, tore from her throat. It was a crack, a fissure in the hardened shell she’d built around herself, a shell that had barely kept her upright these last weeks. The words, simple and earnest, chipped away at her cynical armor. A second chance. The idea was a fragile, terrifying bloom in her chest, so alien it almost hurt. With a trembling hand, she tilted the handful of pills over the toilet bowl. They clattered indifferently into the water, swirling, then vanishing with the flush—a final, definitive surrender to something she didn’t yet understand.

She walked towards the bed and sank to the floor, the rough carpet biting into her knees, digging into the tender skin through the thin fabric of her sweatpants. The sobs came then, not the wild, theatrical wails of her past, but deep, gut-wrenching tremors that shook her whole frame. They were the sound of something breaking free, something that had been caged, choked, for too long. Tears of utter exhaustion, of a soul finally too weary to pretend.

Could Bruce Wayne, with his polished words and limitless wealth, truly understand the depths of a fall like mine? Could he, one of Gotham’s elites, ever truly grasp the hand of the woman who had once reveled in its destruction? The questions danced in her chaotic mind, unanswered, a fragile, aching thread of hope in the desolate room.

 

***

 

The morning light, thin and tentative, found her exactly where the last vestiges of hope had left her: sprawled on the cheap carpet, a tangle of limbs and spent emotion. The rough fibers still dug into her skin, a constant reminder of the night’s unraveling. Her eyelids fluttered open, heavy with a weariness that seeped into her bones.

A million unspoken questions still swirled in her head, each one a tiny barb. Could Bruce Wayne truly understand? Could he help a woman like me? Did his words—“Everyone deserves a second chance, help if they need it”—truly extend to a person who had danced on Gotham’s graves?

Every time she had dared to trust, the betrayal had been swift and brutal, leaving behind a fresh scar.

From the window, she spied a scrappy kid, no older than ten, kicking at a can in the alley below.

A plan, fragile as a spiderweb, began to form. She fumbled for a pen and a crumpled piece of paper, her hand still trembling as she scrawled a few urgent words. With her last twenty-dollar bill clutched tight, she hurried out of the room, her movements stiff, her bare feet padding softly on the threadbare carpet of the hallway.

“Hey, kid!” Her voice was a raw croak. “Got a job for ya’. Deliver this to Bruce Wayne. At Wayne Industries. Only to him, got it? And it’s gotta be now.”

The boy’s eyes widened at the sight of the twenty, a fortune in his small world. He snatched the money and the folded note, already halfway down the alley before she could finish her instructions, a shadow darting between the dumpsters.

 

***

 

A little while later, the boy sat in the polished granite lobby of Wayne Industries, his worn sneakers scuffing the pristine surface. He watched the stream of sharp-suited adults disappear into the gleaming skyscraper, his small face a mask of determined patience.

Then, outside, a black car, sleek and silent, pulled up to the curb. Bruce Wayne. The boy recognized him from the news, from the countless times his face had been plastered across every screen in Gotham.

The boy approached the imposing reception desk, his hand clutching the crumpled note.

“I gotta see Mr. Wayne,” he mumbled, his voice barely audible in the cavernous space. “It’s really, really important.”

The receptionist, a woman with perfectly coiffed hair and a perpetually bored expression, raised an eyebrow. Just then, Bruce Wayne walked though the main entrance, an air of quiet authority surrounding him.

“Excuse me, Mr. Wayne,” the receptionist’s voice was crisp. “This young man insists on seeing you. He says its really, really important.”

Bruce paused, his gaze falling on the small, unkempt figure. The boy stepped forward, holding out the note with a grubby hand.

“A lady, she was… hurt. Pretty beat up, asked me to give this to you. Said it was onlyfor Mister Bruce Wayne.”

He watched as Bruce took the crumpled paper. As Bruce’s brow furrowed, the boy, already paid, turned and sprinted out of the building, a small, triumphant figure disappearing into the bustling city.

Bruce unfolded the note, the crumpled paper seemed to fit the rough, desperate handwriting: “Mr. Wayne… I need help. Please meet me at the old zoo at 10 tonight.”

 

***

 

Back in the hushed sanctity of his top-floor office, beyond the panoramic windows the city was a distant hum as Bruce sat at his vast mahogany desk. The once crumpled note lay flat before him. He picked it up again, his thumb tracing the hurried, almost frantic loops of the handwriting: “Mr. Wayne… I need help. Please, meet me at the gate of the old zoo at 10 tonight.”

He read the words for the tenth time, perhaps the twentieth. Each reading peeled back another layer of the mystery, yet offered no concrete answers. Who was this woman? The note was unsigned, no return address, no identifying mark. The boy had described her as “pretty beat up,” a detail that gnawed at him. Was she a victim? Or was this a carefully orchestrated ruse? The old zoo, at 10 PM. Not exactly a public, well-lit meeting place. It screamed caution, but also a profound need for secrecy. Someone was both desperate and clearly terrified.

Why me? Why Bruce Wayne, the city’s philanthropic face, and not the police? The directness of the appeal, bypassing official channels, suggested a deep distrust, or perhaps a situation so sensitive that involving the authorities was not an option. He considered the possibilities: a witness in hiding, someone escaping a dangerous situation, or even a desperate plea from a former associate of Gotham’s underworld, seeking a way out.

His mind, a relentless analytical engine, began to sift through recent events, public incidents, whispers from the city’s underbelly. Was there anyone, any known figure, who might fit the description of a “beat up” woman, someone who would reach out to me in such a manner? The urgency of “now” in the boy’s delivery, the late-night meeting, the choice of the old zoo’s gates—each detail painted a picture of someone cornered, with nowhere else to turn. He leaned back in his chair, the note clutched in his hand, the weight of the unknown pressing down upon him. Ten o’clock tonight. The clock on his desk seemed to tick louder, counting down the hours to a rendezvous that promised either a chance to help, or a plunge into peril.

 

***

 

Bruce left Wayne Enterprises and headed back to Wayne Manor, making a direct path to the Batcave. Alfred, ever perceptive, noticed his return and descended into the cavernous space. He found Bruce at the computer terminal, deep in thought, the glow of the screens illuminating his face.

Bruce held out the crumpled note.

“What do you think of this, Alfred? A boy give it to me this morning. Said a ‘beat up lady’ gave it to him and it was for my eyes only.”

Alfred took the note, his gaze softening slightly as he smoothed out the creases. He read the hurried scrawl, his expression unreadable for a moment before he looked up at Bruce.

“It could be a trap, Master Bruce,” Alfred mused, handing the note back. “But the note is addressed to you, not Batman.”

“I know. Why come to me and not the police or the shelter?” Bruce’s voice was low, tinged with a frustration born of unanswered questions.

Alfred’s gaze settled on the note once more, his expression thoughtful.

“Perhaps, Master Bruce, because you represent something different. The police operate within a rigid framework of law and procedure, which may not offer the discretion or the unique kind of help this lady believes she needs. And while the shelter offers invaluable aid, it is still an ‘official’ channel, isn’t it?” He paused, allowing his words to sink in.

“This note, delivered in such a clandestine manner, suggests this lady felt she had nowhere else to turn and deeply distrusts established systems. She is seeking an unconventional solution to what must be an unconventional problem. She sought you, Master Bruce, the man who champions second chances, the man who, perhaps, is perceived as being outside the very system she fears. She believes you are her last, besthope.”

“Why so late at night? The old zoo? Why not someplace more public?” Bruce pressed, the questions tumbling out.

Alfred considered this, his gaze distant for a moment.

“The late hour, and the choice of the zoo, Master Bruce, both speak to a profound need for secrecy. A public place, in daylight, offers visibility but also the risk of being seen by those from whom they are hiding. The old zoo at night, however, is desolate. It offers isolation and darkness, perfect for someone who cannot risk exposure. It suggests she is either in great danger or is deeply involved in something she wishes to keep hidden from the world, and especially from those who might seek to harm her.”

“I think you’re right, Alfred. And I believe Bruce Wayne needs to meet with her, not Batman. Would you get the car ready, please?”

“As you wish, Master Bruce,” Alfred replied, his gaze unwavering. “I’ll have the Bentley ready for you. And do be careful. Even when one is in a different suit, Gotham has a way of finding its shadows.”


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