Book by: J.R. Geiger
Genre: Non-Fiction
Nimrod left the settled pastures with nothing but the simple clothes (animal skins and leather) he wore, a bow carved by his own hands, and a small pack of provisions. He carried the greater weight on his heart: the solemn blessing of Noah and the mandate to fill the earth. “Be fruitful and multiply, and fill the earth” (Genesis 9:7). Faith, not ambition, measured his steps. He walked eastward, drawn to the rising sun and the vast, open stretch of the Mesopotamian plain—“The beginning of his kingdom was Babel, Erech, Accad, and Calneh, in the land of Shinar” (Genesis 10:10).
The world outside the family settlements was still raw and challenging. The memory of the Flood was fresh enough to temper human arrogance, but the practical challenges were immense. This was a time of nomadic existence, where security was fleeting and survival depended on keen eyes and tireless feet.
The Wanderer’s Path
No one recorded how many seasons Nimrod walked, nor the number of mountains he crossed. Time was measured not by calendars, but by the migration of herds and the bloom of wild grains. His days became a steady discipline of observation and gratitude. He was a silent student of the wilderness, tracking the great lions and bears that posed a threat to any settlement, and studying the routes of gazelle and wild oxen that sustained life.
Word of the mighty hunter spread quickly, carried along trade routes and by wandering shepherds. “He was a mighty hunter before the Lord; therefore it is said, ‘Like Nimrod a mighty hunter before the Lord’” (Genesis 10:9). Tales described a figure of immense physical power, yet one who moved with an unexpected gentleness. He hunted not for sport or glory, but to provide. He was an earthly shepherd, leading his small group of growing followers through the rhythm of the early post-Flood world.
The Life of the Trail
Their lives reflected the necessary simplicity of the time:
- Temporary Homes: Their dwellings were lean-to tents woven from reeds or animal skins, designed to be disassembled and packed onto the backs of donkeys within an hour. They never broke the ground with permanent foundations, remaining mindful of the Flood’s warning against overly rooted pride.
- Communal Focus: Resources were entirely shared. Meat, water, and knowledge flowed freely. “All who believed were together and had all things in common” (Acts 2:44). Nimrod, the strongest man, ate no better than the weakest child.
- The Law of the Trail: The needs of the journey dictated all decisions. If the grasses were depleted, they moved. If water ran low, they tracked the nearest oasis. Their purpose was to spread and populate, staying fluid and adapting to the expansive creation.
Nimrod never turned away a stranger, a practice of radical hospitality born from the awareness that all humanity sprang from a single Ark. “Do not neglect to show hospitality to strangers, for thereby some have entertained angels unawares” (Hebrews 13:2). He shared what little he had, and in turn, those he helped chose to follow his lead. He taught them the covenant of God, the history of the waters, and the importance of strength serving others.
He was a teacher-leader, and the small groups following him coalesced into a purposeful tribe, dedicated to the ancient faith. They were nomads, but not aimless—they were waiting for a sign to settle. Nimrod knew the time for permanent building would come, but he would not rush God’s timing. “Wait for the Lord; be strong, and let your heart take courage; wait for the Lord” (Psalm 27:14). He remembered his great-grandfather’s cautious blessing: Do not build so high that you forget the ground you stand on.
He was “a mighty hunter before the Lord,” not because he conquered men, but because he was a servant leader of the covenant, using his gifts to protect the innocent and sustain life in a difficult world. His reputation was one of faithful strength, a pure reflection of Noah’s parting words. He waited for the divine whisper to replace the physical impulse—the word that would mark the end of wandering and the beginning of building.
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hello my friend once again good writing. This is a thoughtful and well-crafted piece of historical-religious fan fiction or devotional writing that reinterprets the biblical figure Nimrod. you seem to have a good talent for writing. have you had any of your books published yet? well done stuart haha 50 words spot on lol
You went 3 words over, you're at 53. LOL
I've found if you hit 50 words spot on, you better add a few because the review doesn't register and you have to hit the back button and add a few. That's why some of my reviews get posted twice.
No books published yet. I've got a 130,000 word novel I've submitted to agency. Nov 16 is the deadline for them to "be interested". After submission, they said if I hadn't heard from them in 8 weeks, they're not interested.
Again a great piece of writing. I like how you describe a nomads lifestyle and how they work with the land not against it. I am intruiged to find out what Nimrod will do next. He is obviously looking for a suitable place to have a settlement and I am assuming the people he had with him were collected along the way.
Thank you SO much!
I researched the nomadic lifestyle of the folks in the Middle East and American Indians. I wanted it to be authentic as possible.
Some traditions still survive to this day like the hospitality belief.
Many nomadic peoples around the globe still practice the hospitality belief.
Howdy J.R.
I'm enjoying your story. :)
My question, however, is this a novel, work of fiction, or, more like a research paper that you would hand in for homework?
To me, it seems to fluctuate between the two styles. All the Scripture passages give me the sense that this is more research, as well as the titles. Now I believe you're trying to stay true to Scripture, and then weave a possible story given Scripture. The Scripture does ground the story. :) :)
For instance, The Life of the Trail: I would have Nimrod meeting people, need more characters. Who did he live with? Maybe he didn't live with anyone, but had some sort of passing relationship. As you create other characters, weave into the relationships the homes, communal focus and the law of the trail, etc.
If fiction, I think you need much more showing, rather than telling.
There's a lot of exposition here. Of course I say that, 'cause I tend to do that a lot, readers pick up on it, and then I have to revise and change a lot. :) :)
An exercise that helps me out is interviewing the characters. For instance: Nimrod, I want to write your story. What do you want people to know about you?
What are your dreams? Hopes? What do you fear? Where did you travel? Who did you meet? Who are your friends? Tell me about the ones closest to you. Who are your enemies? Tell me about them. Is there a woman in your life? Someone you're interested in? Tell me about her. What conflicts perplex and frighten you?
You say you're a teacher. What did you teach? Who were your students? Tell me about the ones you remember the most? Did anyone create problems for you? If so, what--how did you handle it?
Have him praying to God. Maybe even speaking to Noah, though Noah isn't there.
I follow Jericho Writers and take advantage of all the free stuff. I also follow Jerry Jenkins. Both have some excellent Youtube presentations.
I hope this was helpful. Ignore what isn't.
Looking forward to more--happy writing, E. :) :)
https://jerichowriters.com/how-to-plot-a-novel/
This book is pure speculation about Nimrod’s life.
Scholars have unfairly branded Nintod as a rebel against God without ANY Scriptural or historical evidence.
If he rebeled against God, scripture would have clearly stated it as it has with all who fall from the path.
Nimrod was the first king after the great flood. He was nomadic and founded many cities.
After the hreat flood, there weren't many people out in the wilderness to meet.
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