Raven's Curse

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Raven's Curse

Status: 1st Draft

Raven's Curse

Book by: C J Driftwood

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This is the sequel to my first novel posted here: Into the Fog, Dawn of the Tiger. For those who have not read the first book- the book starts off March 20th, 1936.
This story takes place 6 months later when "the tiger" breaks out of his "cage" and goes on the hunt for Kelly. He feels she is his salvation. Chief joins forces with Sergeant Moss, formally of the BOI (Bureau of Investigation) but currently working as a highway patrolman, and together they work out a plan to capture the fugitive. During the corse of their investigation, they discover this case has ties to a murder investigation they had shared thirteen years ago involving the death of young boys, a psychotic maniac and a hellish cult. The raven being their emblem.
This novel closes all the plots opened up in the first book, including a secondary appearance from mafia boss Tony Perretti and his thugs who discover Elly had been living in Middleton all along.
Chief must send his daughter to safety, however, Blackney discovers this rouse and attacks the child and her aunt on the road to Four Oaks. And if that is not enough, just as the tiger goes after his daughter, the mob lays siege to his house in the attempt to kill his bride.
And though neither was meant to be a stand alone, I'm hoping those that have not read the first, will still have a sense for what is going on.
Please be warned, violence, sex and strong language in this tale.
 
 

Content Summary

This is the sequel to my first novel posted here: Into the Fog, Dawn of the Tiger. For those who have not read the first book- the book starts off March 20th, 1936.
This story takes place 6 months later when "the tiger" breaks out of his "cage" and goes on the hunt for Kelly. He feels she is his salvation. Chief joins forces with Sergeant Moss, formally of the BOI (Bureau of Investigation) but currently working as a highway patrolman, and together they work out a plan to capture the fugitive. During the corse of their investigation, they discover this case has ties to a murder investigation they had shared thirteen years ago involving the death of young boys, a psychotic maniac and a hellish cult. The raven being their emblem.
This novel closes all the plots opened up in the first book, including a secondary appearance from mafia boss Tony Perretti and his thugs who discover Elly had been living in Middleton all along.
Chief must send his daughter to safety, however, Blackney discovers this rouse and attacks the child and her aunt on the road to Four Oaks. And if that is not enough, just as the tiger goes after his daughter, the mob lays siege to his house in the attempt to kill his bride.
And though neither was meant to be a stand alone, I'm hoping those that have not read the first, will still have a sense for what is going on.
Please be warned, violence, sex and strong language in this tale.

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Chief watched as his youngest climbed the stairs to her room. Then he turned, opened the closet, removed his jacket and hung it on a hanger.

He saw the den lights were on and knew he would find his family in there. He also knew he owed them an explanation. But how do you tell them the danger is not over? The news was bound to be splashed all over the papers in the morning. He wanted more facts. He wasn’t especially sure that there was cause for alarm. The fugitive may be re-captured tonight for all he knew. Or was that wishful thinking? 

He walked down the hallway to the back room. Elly was seated on the couch next to Maggy. Maggy had a sketchbook opened on the glass table and was sketching out dress ideas for the wedding party, as well as the bride’s dress, with Elly offering input. Joe sat in one of the leather chairs, indian style, reading the Post. They all looked up when he entered the room.

No word was spoken as he hung his hat on the rack. Nor was a sound uttered as he liberated his pipe from its stand and snatched the tobacco pouch nearby. Chief filled his pipe while still standing in front of the fireplace. He also lit it while standing. He drew in a long breath of cherry smoke then bent down, pipe secured between his teeth, and stoked the fire. Utter silence.

They waited for Chief to cross the room and settle in his favorite chair across from the fire.

Then. “Chief,” Maggy ventured. “Would you like to see what we’ve come up with so far?”

Chief nodded. Maggy brought the lists over to her father. He let her explain the purposes of the different columns, but his mind was far away. He glanced at Elly. She seemed to be elsewhere, also. Joe folded down his newspaper and stared at his father. The tension in the room was palatable.

“You gonna tell us?” Joe asked.

Chief turned to his son. “Tell you what?”

Both Maggy and Elly stared at the boy.

“What the phone call was all about?”

“Joe,” broke in Elly. “You’re father will tell you when he’s ready.”

“I’m with Joe,” Maggy said. All eyes in the room focused on her. “I mean...” she stalled, then regained her momentum,  “It seems to me that it affects us. You are putting a hold on the wedding; you’re walking around looking crazy. I think we have a right to know what we’re in for.” Maggy took a deep breath. Then she looked at her father and her expression sharpened. “You know, you can protect someone to death. If there’s something going on, we should know.”

Chief looked at her… then at Joe and finally at Elly. He drew in a deep breath of pipe smoke and let it out slowly. Stalling. He knew he was. But how do you say—?

“All right,” he conceded. He looked at them and rose from his chair and paced the room. From in front of the fire he said,  “I really don’t know what to say. I found out this evening that I don’t have control of this whole imperfect world, not even my little corner of it. And I’m finding out how much that stinks.” He drew on his pipe and glanced at Elly. “El, I’m sorry about our plans. I know you had your heart set on the end of April. I just don’t know if this matter will be cleared up by then.”

“What matter?” Maggy asked.

Chief looked at his daughter briefly before returning to Elly. “Fred Blackney escaped at five-forty-five this evening. He took out two guards in the escape.”

Elly gasped. “What?”

“They tracked him with the hounds until seven-thirty this evening,” Chief paused to draw on his pipe. The smoke was calming. Allowing him to get through the narration. But he knew after this smoke, the bourbon was next. “But they lost him. In the woods...Fred knows hounds...he’s tracked with me. He can loose dogs easily given the opportunity. He can even play them.... Hell he’s more at home in the woods than some wild animals.”

Elly’s face drained of its color. She stood from the couch and made her way over to Chief. The embrace was for strength. She understood the look in his eyes now.

“Is he coming for Kelly?” Joe asked from his chair. The question regained the adults'  attention. “Is he?”

“I don’t know. I don’t know anything.”

“But you think he might. He tried before.”

“I hope he isn’t that crazy, son. I just don’t want to take any chances.” He turned to Elly. “You see now why I need to postpone the wedding. I can’t leave my daughter. I need to be here to catch that maniac. I need to be focused.”

“Yes,” whispered Elly. “Of course I understand.”

“Well I don’t understand.”

Everybody turned to look at Maggy who was still seated on the couch. “I don’t see why you should let that...that crazy son-of-a-bitch control your life-”

“Maggy, how the hell can--”

“Chief, hear me out,” Maggy declared clipping Chief’s protest.  “First, focus all your energies on the case.  Miss Elly and I are quite capable of handling everything that has to do with the wedding. We’ll go on with the wedding as planned, and postpone the honeymoon until he’s caught.”

Chief and Elly looked at each other. Then Chief turned to his daughter.

“Chief,” Maggy continued. “Don’t you see? You two should at least be together. If nothing else, think about Kelly. There would be an extra person here to watch over her.”

“She’s right,” said Elly softly.

“I know,” retorted Chief. “Isn’t it aggravating?”

Elly smiled up at him. “Not in this instance.”

He smiled a tired smile back. “Are you sure?” he asked her after a long pause. “It seems all I can offer you is a lot of trouble.”

“I told you before I was looking forward to Trouble.” 

They both smiled at that.

“All right, Maggy. Date those suckers and get them in the mail,” Chief said to his daughter. Then he looked at Elly. “I need a drink. Care to join me?”

Elly nodded. “I guess I could use a drink.”

Chief left his bride’s side and headed to the kitchen. “Maggy,” he said over his shoulder. “Would you like to join us?”

Maggy smiled at her father. It was nice being treated as an adult. “Thank you, Chief. Sure. I’ll join you.”

Chief left the room to retrieve the bourbon from the cabinet above the icebox. On a tray he set the bourbon, ice bucket, four glasses and a bottle of Coca-Cola for Joe. He returned to the den and set the tray on the glass table. He poured three bourbons and one cola and passed them out. There was little reason for a toast so they drank without one. 

Chief sank into his chair holding his drink. What next? He drank slowly. The women, for lack of anything more cheerful to talk about, returned to the wedding plans. It was easier with a definite date. But Chief no longer heard them. His thoughts trailed to the prison break. He started planning ways to find and recapture Blackney.

He was on his second drink when he heard his child scream. He looked up. Joe who had fallen asleep beneath the paper, bolted upright. Maggy and Elly both turned towards the hallway.

Chief was out of his chair and at the bottom of the stairs before the second scream. He dashed up the steps and into his daughter’s room. The rest of his family was close behind him. Chief planted himself next to Kelly on her bed. Hoove had vacated the premises after the first scream ripped him awake.

“Kelly,” Chief whispered. His daughter was covered with sweat. Her hair was matted flat against her brow. She was shaking from terror. Blankets and nightgown were twisted tightly around her neck. He freed her as he attempted to wake her. 

“Kelly, baby,” he whispered again, trying not to terrorize her further.

“Chief!” she screamed in reply. “The tiger! It’s too bloody. Chief, help me!” She began rocking violently back and forth, the dream gripping her more securely than before.

Chief shot a look at his fiancée at the mention of the tiger. How the hell did she know?

“Kelly, honey. It’s a dream.” He couldn’t be sure she heard him. Yet he didn’t want to shout at a terrified child. He brushed her hair from her face. “Kelly, honey. Wake up–”

“Stop it!” she shouted. Her eyes flew open, but focused on nothing in the room. She sat upright. “You’re killing him!” she screamed, this time hysteria controlled heras she flogged the air.

“Kelly!” Chief shouted, this time attempting to get her attention.

She appeared to look at him, but her eyes were unfocused. “Chief!” she screamed in his face. “Stop the tiger! He’s killing Hoove!”

The terror grew and still Chief failed to wake his daughter; failed to reclaim her from the Dead Place. He fought the dream, attempting to gently shake her awake. But then her screams pierced the darkness of the room with an indescribable violence. She shook. Not trembling in terror, but shaking violently, whipping from side to side. Chief grabbed her by the shoulders. He pushed her down into the bed. Held her down to keep her from thrashing.

“Stop it! Don’t touch!”

The words broke his heart. He knew well what they meant. She had said them before, months before when reliving the terror of her first encounter with the tiger.

“Kelly! Listen to me! There is no tiger. It’s a dream, baby. Just a dream.”

Kelly’s expression became blank. Was she inside? Was it the Dead Place? Whether actual or not, all it took was her belief in it. Wasn’t that what the doctor said?

“Kelly,” Chief whispered. “Look at me. Please, baby.”

No reaction.

“Kelly, you said you trusted me. Trust me now. Look at me!”

She turned in his hands. Tears crept into her eyes as she focused on her father. “It killed Hoove,” she whispered. “It killed him, Chief.”

“No, pumpkin. It was a dream. Just a dream.” He turned to Joe. Joe understood and left to find the dog.

“Kelly, Hoover’s all right. Joe went to get him.”

“Joe can’t Daddy. He’s dead. I saw. The tiger got him. He tried to save me- but then the tiger bit his...” Kelly swallowed sharply. “It bit- bit his head off-”

“No he didn’t,” Joe said from behind Chief. “He’s right here, Kel.” 

Joe led the pup back into the room. Hoover noticed all was quiet and ran into the room and jumped onto the bed. Once there he curled up at his master’s feet.

Kelly looked at her dog. She wiped her eyes and looked again. Then she turned to her father. “I saw.”

“It was a dream, honey. Just a bad dream.”

“But it was so real, Chief. I tripped and it got me. The tiger got out. He killed people doing it too. It already had blood on its claws and in its teeth it had... meat. I saw. It’s out Chief.”

Chief looked at the floor. How the hell did she know? He heard Maggy’s words in his head, You can protect someone to death. Was it true? He turned to his youngest. She was shook something fierce. He noticed how frail she looked.  How pale and terribly frightened she was. He turned to the others. They, too, looked frightened. 

“Excuse us,” he asked and they nodded, closing the door as they went.

“Kelly, pumpkin, sit up.”

Chief waited for her to do so. Kelly sat leaning against the headrest of her bed.

“What makes you think the tiger is free?” he asked her.

“I just know it. I feel it.” Kelly’s eyes were wide and blue. The earlier tears were drying on her cheeks.

Chief sighed heavily. Telling the others was difficult– but this was going to test his strength.

“Kelly,” he said softly. She turned to look at him. “I need to tell you something. But I don’t want you to worry. I want you to know that above all else, you are safe.”

“I know, Daddy. I know you’ll be there. When it counts I mean. But you need to believe me. I saw it.”

“I know, honey. And you are right.” Chief looked at his daughter. She was still shivering. This time he was sure it was the cold and not the fright.

Chief stood after reassuring her. He crossed the room to her dresser and retrieved a fresh flannel nightgown. He helped her out of the old one and into the dry one.

“You going to be okay?” Chief asked her.

“Yessir,” was his answer, but he knew better.

“Honey, there is something I need to tell you. But I just don’t have the words.”

“It’s that bad?”

“Yes, pumpkin. It is that bad.”

Nothing prepared Chief Broden for what his daughter said next.

“Uncle Fred broke jail, didn’t he?”

Chief looked into the blue eyes. Deep in fear, but despite the fear he saw his daughter’s inner strength. It went beyond normal endurance. Her trust in him was also unnatural. It tore her free of terror. It went deep. For her sake, was it too deep? How did he expect to protect her?

“Yes,” he choked on the word.

“It’s all right, Chief. Please don’t feel so badly. It wasn’t your fault. It…well, it was supposed to be this way.”

“I don’t understand.”

“You can’t cage a tiger for very long. They get free. Especially if…”

“Especially if?”

“Don’t you see? He had help. From the bird, I mean. The bird helped him.”

“Kelly,” he said, and waited for her attention to him returned. “Listen to me, please.” He stopped. Stalled. What was it he wanted to say? He must say it in her terms. “Kelly, things shape people- environment, genetics...you know about genetics?”

She nodded.

Chief continued. “These things shape a person. Few of us are born to ourselves. Do you understand?”

“Yes, sir. I think so. It’s like the Dead Place. It holds me...moves in and takes over ‘till I have no abilities. I know what’s gonna happen, but I see myself goin’ up to the Preacher to ask the way out, knowin’ he don’t know. The Dead Place has me all right. I guess I was born to it.”

Chief stared at her for endless moments. Slight terror touched his sense of control... threatening his sense of reality. “That’s not it at all, pumpkin,” he stated quietly. “Honey, nothing holds you to this place you call the Dead Place. That’s just a label you put on your experiences at the depot. Please believe me, you were not born to this kind of terror. No one is.” Chief thought. He needed to bring the situation home for her. Give her the ability to assess the situation for what it really was. Carve out the supernatural. Give her the ability to deal with things on a level closer to reality.

“Kelly,” he started, “what would happen to a person who was raised throughout their childhood without the care and understanding of a loving parent; who spent their childhood being beaten by those who are supposed to love them no matter what. That unconditional love that exists between a parent and child was absent. All they knew was pain and loneliness?”

“They’d have to protect themselves. Build a wall between the hurt and themselves. Find the love somewhere–or... learn to live without it. Chief I can’t think of not having someone who cares. Not having you.”

“I can’t imagine life without you, pumpkin. But you see what I’m getting at? I don’t believe in pure evil. Or pure good for that matter. Life to me is an incredible array of gray. If all you know is evil, chances are, you relate to that evil. You become that evil. That is Uncle Fred. He’s no tiger. Just a man caught up in the evil practices and the abuses of his parents. By the time he was free of them, it was too late. I’m afraid the very act that did free him from them, may have been the one that cost him his sanity. I don’t think he had a clue as to what was right and what was wrong, honey. Something inside him snapped. There is no tiger. No bird. Just the horror of Uncle Fred’s past that produced the tiger you sense in him.”

“So he did get out?”

“Yes. He did.”

“Chief, I’m scared. He’s comin’ for me.”

Chief regarded his daughter. Then he leaned over and pulled her close. He hugged her. “I’m scared too,” he whispered. “There’s no way I can hide the truth from you. But I want you to fear a man, honey- not a tiger. And I promise I will catch him. No harm will come to you. I promise.”

“I know, Daddy,” she told him, “I love you too.”

Chief held her close for many minutes. Then he looked at her. He felt so tired. “How about some hot chocolate?”

 

Chief wrapped a blanket securely around his daughter and carried her down the stairs into the kitchen where they were met by the hopeful expressions of the others.

“I already put the milk on,” Elly said softly. “It will be ready in a few minutes.”

“Thank you,” Chief said and lowered Kelly into an empty chair.

“Are you all right, now, honey?” Elly asked the child.

Kelly nodded, but her eyes still held their fear.

The milk came to a boil on the stove and Chief retrieved it from the burner. He poured Kelly a mug.

“Anyone else?” he asked. “Joe? Maggy?”

They all agreed to join Kelly for a mug of chocolate in the den by the fire. Kelly sat on the sofa next to her father. She leaned into him for the added warmth and security. Hoove curled up on the floor by the fire. Chief noticed the extra attention Kelly paid to the dog. The family shared the fire until ten-thirty when Elly had to excuse herself to return across the street. Joe, who had fallen asleep earlier, also chose to go up to bed. Maggy straightened the den, then, she too, vanished up the stairs.


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