A New Start

Status: 2nd Draft

A New Start

Status: 2nd Draft

A New Start

Short Story by: pammy raff

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Genre: Historical Fiction

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The other infamous day in history. All comments welcome and appreciated.
 

 

Content Summary

The other infamous day in history. All comments welcome and appreciated.

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Submitted: July 22, 2015

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Submitted: July 22, 2015

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The apple crunched when she bit into it. No more Mcbreakfasts for her. Today not only held a gorgeous sky, but the start of her five year plan. Beginning now, she would eat organic food, exercise and meditate.

In the next instant, she saw a flash. The office fish tank shattered. Black smoke billowed furiously outside as screams came from everywhere. I'm having a nightmare, she thought, how else could airplane parts be dangling over the Xerox machine?  

Moments later, a sweating fireman stepped in, scanning the debris. He called out, "Anyone here?"  Beneath his soiled boot, an apple crunched.


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