Topic: Germ Line: Revolution - Stephen A. Carter
Part two of chapter one is posted. Looking forward to the reviews. If you haven't read part one yet, the latest version is up now.
Thank you!
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Part two of chapter one is posted. Looking forward to the reviews. If you haven't read part one yet, the latest version is up now.
Thank you!
Part three of chapter one is posted. Looking forward to the reviews. If you haven't read parts one and two yet, the latest versions are up now. This completes the.chapter, and I would love feedback on the entire chapter and how it reads as a whole, along with inline reviews of parts two and three.
Thank you!
I wonder if you might want to reconsider posting your chapters in pieces. By the time you have an entire book published on site, you're going to be stuck with a pile of pieces and an enormous number of reviews to sift through if you want to make changes, go back to your original, or just re-read to make sure you've got what you want!
You may be doing this in sections to make it easy on reviewers, to offer us the benefit of extra points, or maybe you have so much to say you just want to post it right away, but think about making things easy on yourself in the long run. You've still got a long way to go.
I am enjoying your story--keep up the good work. JP
Thank you, JP. I'm considered putting chapter 2 in its entirety. Hopefully it will be easier on the reader. I'm trying to keep up with the edits as they come in. So helpful. Chapter 2 coming soon. Thanks again for the suggestion, and for your kind words.
Chapter 1 is now divided into three chapters. Chapter 4 (what would have been the start of chapter 2) is now posted. And because I couldn't figure out the chapter system until Chapter 3, chapters 1 & 2 are separate books. Chapter 3 on will be a single book. Unless I break the book into parts. Any thoughts on that?
Why don't you just put all the chapters in one book? You can renumber the chapters however you wish. I haven't reviewed any of the chapters, but have read some and would say you are making it a bit difficult for your readers to make them bounce between "books" for the same story. And of course you would also have to bounce between them to keep the reviews straight. Just my opinion. Take care. Vern
I can't figure out how to combine books already published, Vern, but I'm digging into it. I may try to see if admin can help if I can't figure it out.
Hi Stephen,
I'll be getting back to your book soon - lots of things going on with my wife's health and a recent move into assisted living.
I simply broke the first chapter of my novel "Alabama Greene" into two chapters and posted them as Chapters One and Two. When I send the manuscript for publishing, they will be combined as one chapter. You can combine, break-up, redo chapters as you see fit when publishing time arrives. That keeps it pretty simple for me. Ie., Chapter Three, as it's posted here, will be Chapter Two when it's sent of for publication. Just a thought, FWIW. And good luck with the novel!
Alan
I can't figure out how to combine books already published, Vern, but I'm digging into it. I may try to see if admin can help if I can't figure it out.
You can't. You will have to start again, marking them as a book and then adding in the chapters. I too discovered this the hard way when I arrived. Waste of points but better now than later and it makes it much easier as you go along.
Stephen A. Carter wrote:I can't figure out how to combine books already published, Vern, but I'm digging into it. I may try to see if admin can help if I can't figure it out.
You can't. You will have to start again, marking them as a book and then adding in the chapters. I too discovered this the hard way when I arrived. Waste of points but better now than later and it makes it much easier as you go along.
No, you don't have to start again. You're not starting from scratch. You already have more than one book so choose the one with the most material and then place the chapters from any other book (copy and paste) you wish to be there and arrange the chapters in whatever order you wish. You will have to use points for adding those chapters, but that's a small price to pay for the education. It might be fun, but you don't have to learn everything by trial and error. Most answers are in the forums somewhere for the asking. Take care. Vern
of course, Vern, you're right. For some reason, I was thinking the chapters had been posted as stories, not books. My bad. Yes, take Chap one and build the other chapters into that, then make the other inactive so people don't get too confused.
I think it was because I had a story I wanted to turn into a book, with additional chapters, and was unable to do so. I had to start from scratch again.
As long as you have it classified as a "book", you will be given the chapter option to work in when adding new material. So like vern said, pick one and start adding new material as chapters. You can edit chapters at any time at no charge. So if you want to change the content in something you've already posted just for the sake of organizing it anew, choose the chapter you wish to edit, cut and paste the newly organized content and you're done.
You definitely want to do this because it not only helps you keep everything organized, but it helps the reviewer keep track too. Also, to lessen the confusion for reviewers, you should probably disable the remnants of any of the older versions once you're done moving stuff around.
Ok, I bit the bullet and combined the chapters into one book. Thank you all for the input and advice. Much appreciated!
Seems as if all the other postings, including chapters 3 & 4 have dropped from the listings. Very strange, because my last post Chapter 2 is there. Any way to get them back without points?.
By "listings", do you mean on the home page? If you publish multiple chapters in rapid succession, the home page only shows one of the chapters (either the earliest posted or the latest posted, not sure which). This is intentional functionality, otherwise everyone's home page would be filled with nothing but chapters from one person who happens to post a lot in rapid succession. When someone clicks on the one chapter listed on their home page, it takes them to the site's chapter view, where there is a pick list at the top of all active chapters that shows which chapters the reviewer has already read and which is one is next. If you published the chapters with points, then your reviewer will get points for reviewing those chapters, even though they don't all show on the home page.
I reviewed your original Chapter 1, but you apparently deleted it, along with the reviews it garnered. I never received a response from you regarding my review, even though you used some of my suggestions in the rewrite. If you want to attract and keep readers for your story, this is not the way to do it.
I reviewed your original Chapter 1, but you apparently deleted it, along with the reviews it garnered. I never received a response from you regarding my review, even though you used some of my suggestions in the rewrite. If you want to attract and keep readers for your story, this is not the way to do it.
While whinging will endear you to all...
I reviewed your original Chapter 1, but you apparently deleted it, along with the reviews it garnered. I never received a response from you regarding my review, even though you used some of my suggestions in the rewrite. If you want to attract and keep readers for your story, this is not the way to do it.
Apologies, Jack, I thought I responded. I try to respond with thanks to all the reviews, because I truly appreciate each one. I don't mark them applied until I've responded and implemented the changes, so I'm not quite sure how I missed responding to you but I do apologize. The reason yours got deleted is, I needed to combine all my chapters into one book. I deleted chapters one and two after they were combined with the other chapters because I didn't want it to be confusing to readers. Consequently all the reviews done on those first two chapters were deleted. So again, I apologize that this is delayed, but I do thank you, and I do appreciate you taking the time to not only read, but lend your thoughts as well. As you mentioned, I did use some of them and they are much appreciated. Let me know if there's anything I can do for you.
No problem, Stephen. I just wanted to make sure you knew the importance of feedback to reviewers, something new members on the site have not been aware of in the past. As I said in my review, I liked the start of your story and plan to continue with it.
Regarding the difficulty you found combining chapters in your book, another writer had a similar problem. It's easy to remedy: All you have to do is go to your profile page, click on your book, then click on + chapter. Then you paste your manuscript copy and the chapter will be added to what you've posted. If that wasn't your issue, then never mind. And you don't need to dismantle a chapter every time you make a revision in it. You can edit in situ. The original reviews will still be there, though the revision might make them irrelevant. But I don't usually read other reviews, anyway.
It's a nice reminder to reviewers of your book to see a new posted chapter in the list, but it's not essential. Good thing, since posts only last a few days before being pushed off the list by new posts. I keep a list of those books I'm reviewing, and when I don't see a new chapter posted, I go to the author's profile page, click on the book, and click on the next chapter in line.
Cheers!
Seems as if all the other postings, including chapters 3 & 4 have dropped from the listings. Very strange, because my last post Chapter 2 is there. Any way to get them back without points?.
You may be talking about the 'featured' postings. There is room for you to 'feature' only two at a time (another reason to consider consolidation). All other postings are still active, and reviewers can access them by going to your public portfolio. You can change any two you want to feature, at any time. Go to your portfolio, and 'drag' the ones you want to feature to the top two slots. This will render them visible (featured) on your home page.
Nothing ever goes away, in my experience, unless you choose to delete it. I have deleted stuff, in times past, to my chagrin. If, later on, you want to hide something, you can do that by switching it to 'inactive.' That's what I do when something is published, out of consideration for the publisher. (More about that when you're ready.)
It does take some getting used to, and some practice. Anytime you need help, just ask. We're all ready and willing--that's how we all started. JP
Thanks, JP. I appreciate all your help. I think I'm gonna like it here. The press is keeping up with all the work, and the challenge is raising the standard of my own.
Chapters 4, 5 & 6 are posted. This is the section I would call the inciting incident. In chapter 6, Stark discovers this may not be a normal case. Line & Regular Reviews are most welcome.
Thank you!
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