Congratulations!

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(11 replies, posted in Close friends)

Yes, it is!

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(1 replies, posted in Close friends)

I have an earlier version published here, only visible to me now.

Christine

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(14 replies, posted in Close friends)

Hi Gacela,
Thanks for introducing me to the group. I just posted my first chapter, so far only to this group. If this becomes a problem because people don't have the chance to get points, I'll post in other groups, too.
I described the story as being historical fiction with a touch of magic because it is set in two historical words that I researched quite well, but has magical elements, mostly related to the river. Much of what happens in the first world,  I know from growing up in the area where the story is set, and what I don't know I research. Magical realism is another way to describe the story, but that seems to create misunderstandings. Magical realism isn't fantasy. It plays out in a real historical world but has parts and episodes of magic, but isn't entirely placed in a fantasy world.
In regard to my protagonist: at the start of the story she is six years old and I try to write from POV of this age (which is different from he earlier version). That doesn't mean and can't mean I use the vocabulary of a six year old. Neither does it mean it's a children's story. The themes are related to trauma and how they affect a child. The parents are a source of this trauma, so is history and culture.  And then, a child sees the world differently, sees what grownups often have lost.
Those are things that I hope to bring out.
I'll review your chapters and the chapters of other members soon. So glad to be back.
Christine

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(18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Oh my God, Ray.  What a terrible ordeal you had to go through. Sounds like you're in the US, otherwise the financial impact wouldn't be anything that dramatic. I hope you find some relief with that, too. Thanks for filling us in and the warning. You bet, I'll stay home. Can't hear that too often. I wish you all the best, a speedy recovery most of all.
Christine

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(10 replies, posted in Close friends)

I vote for number 2 as well.

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(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

That's horrible, Bill.  I wonder how this site can be better protected. Sol, any idea?  This effects you, Bill, and everyone else on this site. But then, they published it in your name and the original title. That's strange, too. They didn't even try to hide that they stole it.
I hope, otherwise, all is well, Christine

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Talent is overrated, persistence underrated. So hang in!

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Wow! Congratulation, Marilyn.

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Congratulations! Wonderful!

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Happy Thanksgiving to you all,
I feel blessed having both of my sons living in Portland where we live.

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Hope you'll feel better soon. Much love, Christine

Thanks for sharing the link.  Not surprising that there's quite a variety of places for writers to read, write, create. For me it's often a coffeehouse, in the garden during the summer, and when no one else is at home, there. I see no problem with a corner in the bedroom, really anything can work. For me, though, I work best surrounded by the buzz of people, as long as they don't want anything from me.

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Congratulations!

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My best wishes for your wife and yourself during this difficult time. Sending you good thoughts.

Christine

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(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

That sounds scary Bill. We don't watch TV so I missed out on it. Glad you're fine. How is the cat-watching becoming to you?

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Good to hear your wife's health is improving, and your's too. Getting older isn't for sissy's as they say. I'm getting there, too, and can well relate to the concerns and especially the fears. Taking good care of yourself, eating well, exercising with whatever you can do, becomes crucial. Yet, if you can get in the right state of mind, writing can be done I believe for a long long time. Yes, keep going!

Congratulations, Randall. This is wonderful!

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Hi Bill, I've been thinking of you in the last couple of months, wondering what you're up to. That feeling of what is the point is probably a common one for most writers. How to revive the energy and motivation to go on is a huge question mark and not likely accomplished for each writer the same way. Why you write in the first place obviously plays a big role. For me, while I would like my novel get published is one goal, but not the only one. For me, writing is my daily meditation, my place of peace, that I don't want to miss. I love the research that goes along and just get torn out of ordinary thoughts and obligations. This weekend was inspiring in a different way. I took a workshop at a local writing institute on Radical Revision, and that put my mind again in a different place. I enjoyed the face-to-face interactions and the conversations during the workshop and during lunch break. Breaking out of a cycle of routine is important for me to get the creativity flowing. I hope you'll find yours.

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I do care and you'll be missed. Life has, however, many sides and many obligations. I have to tend to other obligations at this time, too. Take care and best wishes.
Christine

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Congratulations, Randall! This is wonderful. Hope you'll make it to the next round and perhaps all the way.
Christine

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Thanks, Kdot. I hear what you're saying, and I had the intention to post the entire book before I start revising. The longer I went on, though, the more I felt I need to revise now, and perhaps a drastic revision. I don't know where it will lead me. For the time being, I have to rethink what I really want to say and do with my story. The entire book has been written in a first draft, so I got some satisfaction of having come to the end. Yet, this satisfaction fades when new ideas pop up. At this time, I need to hang back, rethink, re-feel, restructure. Who knows I might be back soon, maybe later, but it's not a final goodbye.

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Thanks, Bill, Marilyn, and Randall for your support. I need to step back a bit but am actually looking forward to reimagining my story. And today, not having to work and having slept well, I feel quite inspired. Sooner or later I'll come back with another version and hopefully one that I can embrace more.

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I've decided to get back to the drawing board to refocus my story to what is essential and what I really want to say.
Thank you all for your reviews. I'll reread them all. Thanks to the feedback I've gained new insights into how I want to proeceed. It just doesn't seem to make sense to go on publishing at this point. Now that doesn't mean I'll leave the site, but I feel like I have to retreat a bit into myself and rethink and reconsider.
Again, thank you. Sooner or later I'll be back.
Christine

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So good to hear all is going so well, Bill. Also encouraging for me who sooner or later has to have the same procedure done.
Christine