I looked at the article on writing genres, but I too am confused what genre to call my novel. Both of the worlds my MC lives in are historical, but there are also fantastic elements in it as well as a love triangle. Is it literary fiction as it dwells on historical, political, societal issues? I don't dare anymore to call it magical realism as I first did as people expect a very different kind of fantasy than my story deals with. Does anyone have any suggestions?
51 2018-06-26 19:10:22
Re: Can someone help with finding one's genre? (43 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
52 2018-06-18 18:28:21
Re: Literary, schmiterary! (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Deckland, I just followed the link you provided on literary versus genre fiction. The article clarifies a lot for me. I recommend reading it, and thanks for posting.
53 2018-06-18 17:30:05
Re: Self-Doubt (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi Mark, your feelings sound all too familiar. I waited a long time before I dared to publish my chapters on this site. On the advice of a writing coach, I wrote my entire first draft to have a better idea of what I wanted to say before everyone chirps in and wants to change what I want to say.
Sometimes, I wake up with a sense of panic, realizing how worried I am about my writing. Like Bill, I do something else for a while. I've also increased the amount of exercise. That helps too. And then just keep writing and learn more about the craft of writing. I strongly believe craft and persistence are the main ingredients of successful writers. Talent, here like in many other areas (I teach math where so many myths about the subject float around) is overrated.
While I'd like to publish my book (s), I'm at the age where I want to enjoy writing. If no joy is in it I don't want to do it.
This said another issue is coming up for me. Too often I find writers who publish their first chapter harshly criticized. And when not too harsh, in much more detail than a new writer can handle. Just another thought out there.
In short, keep writing. Stick with it. And have fun!
Christine
54 2018-06-15 15:09:57
Re: Many thanks to TNBW Reviewers (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Wow! So impressive! What a motivator for the rest of us.
Christine
55 2018-06-13 23:39:38
Re: Writing dialogue (62 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Vern. At this point, I don't want to limit my publishing options. I'm just trying to learn the conventions. Those particular ones don't bother me. It was most interesting to follow this thread of posts. We can all learn from each other and support each other. Best, Christine
56 2018-06-13 15:40:08
Re: Writing dialogue (62 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I just looked at published books, national and international bestseller, in how they use dialogue tags. The books I examined are quite diverse: Natchez Burning by Greg Iles, The Time in Between by Maria Duenas, All the Light We Cannot See by Anthony Doerr. All three authors use dialogue tags sparingly, but do use words like whisper, ask and a few other descriptive words for dialogue here and there. I'll strive to provide a context to eliminate the need as much as possible, then just not worry about it.
57 2018-06-11 17:36:08
Re: Writing dialogue (62 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I agree with both of you as long as the uh's and um's don't distract too much. I liked to have the essentials summed up in a short manner, and like always get reminded of what I need to pay more attention to or plain change.
58 2018-06-11 15:28:20
Topic: Writing dialogue (62 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The New York Book Editors publish a useful blog with writing tips. Below is one on writing dialogue and the most common mistakes writers make. I thought it useful. Maybe you will too.
https://nybookeditors.com/2018/02/dont- … 79b740f759
59 2018-06-05 22:37:27
Re: The evil prologue (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
So many hard rules, and then when I look at published books, bestsellers included, they show all the things you're not supposed to do. At the moment, I read a book with the title, The Time in Between, originally written in Spanish, translated into several languages, and a bestseller in many countries. The book is about 700 pages long, a no-no. The first long chapter is written almost exclusively in narration and the following chapter got plenty paragraphs that aren't in direct scene, another big no-no. And so it goes with many other books as well. So what makes a good book and a good story?
60 2018-05-22 23:53:50
Re: Punctuation (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thank you, Marilynn, I do need this, but I have to admit it's hard for me to stay focused for more than a few paragraphs in.
61 2018-04-24 22:46:26
Re: My first novel published. (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations! Now don't drive yourself crazy with sales numbers. Good luck and much success! Christine
62 2018-04-18 23:24:00
Re: Writing courses (22 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi Sheila,
Two interesting website for further writing resources are:
NY Book Editors and Writer Unboxed. Donald Maas is one of the regular contributors on the Writer Unboxed site. He has several good books on writing out.
63 2018-04-12 02:19:45
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
How come I convinced you?
64 2018-04-11 22:18:54
Re: The Gathering Darkness (the Connor series) - Dirk B. (1,415 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'll jump right in here, if I may. Deciding on a title has probably most to do which group of readers you most want to attract. For people like me, Requiem for Heaven and Earth is more likely to get my attention than the other choices. I guess you can guess where I stand. The other question is: does the content or premise of your book change depending on which title you decide on?
65 2018-04-11 22:09:28
Re: Christine Dreier Eyes of the River (4 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks, Lynne. Looking forward to meeting you all.
66 2018-04-11 20:53:39
Re: Christine Dreier Eyes of the River (4 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks so much for the information, Dirk. Just changed the topic of my post. I'll follow your suggestions and poke around a bit to get my bearings.
Christine
67 2018-04-11 20:25:54
Topic: Christine Dreier Eyes of the River (4 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hi, I just joined the medieval fantasy/magic group. Not sure if it's the right genre. I think of my novel 'The Eyes of the River' probably best described as magical realism. It is, however, set in two historical worlds with the river being the major magical element. The world building is different from a fantasy novel, mostly based on research, personal experience in one of the worlds, and filling in what can't be researched with imagination. I'd love it if this was a right place for me and if some of you would take a look at my story, eleven chapters posted so far.
Cheers, Christine
68 2018-04-05 03:15:05
Re: The glitch? (3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Glad to hear it wasn't my laptop as I assumed, and hopefully it wasn't a malicious attack. Gave me a reason to do something else without feeling guilty.
69 2018-04-04 19:35:34
Re: Changed my mind (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Wishing you all the best Mike. Dealing with addictions isn't a quick fix. You chose what's healing for you.
Christine
70 2018-03-22 22:28:51
Re: Thank you, TNBW! (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi C.E., Sorry you have to put up with such nuisance. Hope this shall pass. Maybe take up boxing or something like that to have an outlet for your frustrations. I admire you for sharing what you're going through.
71 2018-03-21 20:52:58
Re: Welcome (15 replies, posted in Shred)
Hi, all,
I'd like to leave the Shred group. It's not my cup of tea. Is this the way to do so or is there somewhere a button or another method to do so.
Good luck for your endeavors,
Christine
72 2018-03-15 20:31:13
Re: Need help with my novella (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks for the clarification, Norm. I decided not to run the edited chapters on the site for one not to ask too much from writers by having to go through it all again in such a short period of time. At the same time, if someone decides to go back I want them to have the newer version.
73 2018-03-15 19:52:21
Re: Need help with my novella (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Norm, I started with pasting the new version of the chapter on top of the old one, then deleted the old version which was now at the bottom.
To be safe, I made sure ahead of time that all the suggestions writers had given me, were transcribed on my original manuscript. I expected all the reviews were gone, but they weren't. I just didn't want to deal with an invisible version.
74 2018-03-15 04:12:28
Re: Need help with my novella (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Actually, I just edited all seven chapters I posted on the site, carefully noted the suggested changes in my original manuscript, but the reviews didn't disappear.
75 2018-03-15 02:47:43
Re: Need help with my novella (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Mike, I should have asked you what you wanted, but just went ahead with your chapter 1 and reviewed it. Might not be at all what you want. Just toss what doesn't fit.
Christine