I've exhausted my search for synonyms that could replace Satan's Last Stand. Regardless how I word the title, Christians already know the ending and expect it to go a certain way. Satan has to lose in the end, although the Antichrist's fate and that of his followers will not go as planned. The only other title I can think of is Revenge of the Unholy Trinity. Neither title has been used before, based on a search on Amazon. Technically, this story is partly about revenge, but that's not the central theme. The Unholy Trinity (Satan, Antichrist, and False Prophet) use deception to attack the Church (events known as the Great Tribulation in Revelation), followed by the final battle against Christ on Armageddon (Mount Megiddo).
2,401 2018-02-11 15:50:26
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
2,402 2018-02-11 14:57:23
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I should add that it becomes clear during book one that all is not going as prophesied by John, Daniel, and the other prophets.
2,403 2018-02-11 14:52:50
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
This title thing is going to be the death of me. The story will ultimately come down to a battle between Satan and Christ, but with a twist: Satan has a plan that might allow him to destroy Christ, in spite of the Revelation prophecies. If Satan wins, God the Father has agreed to allow him to rule Earth forever. Satan might end up destroying the Trinity in the process.
Suggestions?
Revenge of the Unholy Trinity
Satan's Treachery
Battle for the Earth
Battle for Heaven and Earth
Satan's Final Deception
Satan's Hail Mary (just kidding)
Satan vs. God
Satan's Last Stand
Last Stand of the Unholy Trinity
Last/Final doesn't mean he will lose, just that it's the last battle in human history. Winner take all.
Thoughts?
2,404 2018-02-11 07:02:52
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Nineteen chapters of Revelation converted to notes, including the defeat of the Antichrist and the False Prophet. Satan's defeat is next. Only three chapters to go!
The bad news is that the Catholic study guide I'm using says that the defeat of Satan and his minions is a spiritual battle, not a physical one. Jesus slays the opposing armies with a sword coming out of his mouth (i.e. the word of God). They didn't convert in spite of countless disastrous warnings from God (seven seals, seven trumpets, seven woes), so I'm guessing seeing a preacher-king on a white horse isn't going to hold much sway either. Interestingly, Jesus arrives from heaven with his armies of angels and followers, yet He personally slays the armies of the world by himself. So why the show of force?
Protestant Dispensationalists interpret Revelation as involving a real battle on Armageddon, so the Catholic interpretation is rather anticlimactic, which isn't what you want at the end of a trilogy. Needs work.
P.S. New title for the book series: Satan's Last Stand. Seems like it might be an equally appealing title to Christians and non-Christians. Requiem for Heaven and Earth was a little too obscure given that many Christians don't understand the imagery behind Revelation. Some parishes don't even like to teach it out of fear of scaring Christians.
2,405 2018-02-10 00:20:54
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
The professor provided so much detail, I always assumed it was real. Coconut shells, seawater, metal strips, wire, pennies, etc.: the wire coming from the pennies leads to the positive pole of the battery. Metal strips on the other side of the coconut, lead to the negative pole of the battery.
Early in season one, Ginger regularly wore a dress made from a tarp with the words SS Minnow on it.
I own the entire series. :-)
2,406 2018-02-09 23:22:31
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Just sit right back and you'll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip
That started from this topic port aboard this tiny ship
The mate was a mighty sailing man, the skipper brave and sure
Five passengers set sail that day on a three hour tour
A three hour tour
Of course it begs the question why the Howells, Ginger, and even Maryanne brought enough clothes to dress differently for almost ever episode. Also, why did Thurston bring a trunk full of cash? Plot holes!
2,407 2018-02-09 20:13:36
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Battle Hymn of the Republic seems to have been a bad choice. The song has been playing in my head since yesterday. :-(
2,408 2018-02-09 13:37:42
Re: My new WIP novel, "The Battle for Control" (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
A tyrant named Donnell who wants to conquer the U.S.and set up a dictatorship? Does he hold military parades? :-)
2,409 2018-02-09 13:28:56
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm missing something. What's wrong with that verse, njc? Also, I did here that verse on Spotify yesterday.
K, you have to admit it's a more powerful title for attracting Christians at a glance. Requiem is, admittedly, more neutral. I made some notes overnight to see what else might work.
2,410 2018-02-09 04:43:23
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Oh, and learning the terminology of English Grammar gives you words to express your thoughts on the subject.
"I like the way it reads." :-)
2,411 2018-02-09 04:16:22
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Switched series title again. I think the latest is more powerful. I wonder how many people under thirty will get the reference to the hymn.
2,412 2018-02-08 22:17:54
Re: Just deleted my Facebook account (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I consider my time better spent on the three R's--reading, research, and writing. JP
Amen!
2,413 2018-02-08 22:17:04
Re: Just deleted my Facebook account (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I did some research, Dirk. You can "deactivate" your account insted of deleting it. THis way, you retain your account, but nobody can see or post things to you. The deactivation remains in place until you either log in and reactivate it OR use your FB credentials to log in to another site.
Bill
Thanks, Bill. I saw that, too. I decided to delete it. Of all my FB friends, there are at most six who I already interact with through this site. The remaining eighty or so friends sent me friend connections out of the blue. Most of them post stuff I don't want to see in my feed. And I despise videos that start running without waiting for me to click. I like to read, and the muted videos are a distraction, like annoying ads.
2,414 2018-02-08 17:45:50
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I read it this morning. The closest I found to a usable title was Doomed to Flames. Meh.
2,415 2018-02-08 16:48:36
Topic: Just deleted my Facebook account (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
For the second time in a few years, I've deleted my Facebook account. Is it just me, or is it a complete waste of time? All I ever see are those stupid autorun videos when I would rather read intelligent posts written by fellow authors.
Does anyone successfully use Facebook for marketing your books?
Thanks.
Dirk
2,416 2018-02-08 05:52:13
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Looks like we have a winner: Requiem for Heaven and Earth. Revelation mentions that the old heaven and the old earth pass away.
2,417 2018-02-08 05:08:47
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks, njc. I checked Foretold, Dies Irea, and other phrases from the video. They're all used, except for Chant for the Dead. Unfortunately, that's somewhat off topic.
2,418 2018-02-08 03:55:42
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Although more poetic than evil sounding, I like it better than mine.
Thanks.
Dirk
2,419 2018-02-08 03:33:03
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Apocalypse Unleashed is also taken.
2,420 2018-02-08 03:30:54
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Son of a... Eve of the Apocalypse doesn't show up under Amazon books, but it's the name of a Warcraft game.
2,421 2018-02-08 02:59:54
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Nuts. I thought of Unholy Trinity, but it's been used for ten different books.
2,422 2018-02-08 00:04:19
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks. Unfortunately none of those draw me in, especially since few people will know what the foreign words mean.
Why "eye" of the Antichrist? I should add that it's only the first book that focuses primarily on the Antichrist. After that, it's more of an ensemble, including the False Prophet, Satan, and in the 3rd book, Christ.
2,423 2018-02-07 22:02:23
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,492 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
What do y'all think of the name of my trilogy (Chronicles of the Second Coming). It's a little long/religious, but most of the best names are taken by other authors, and I don't want to duplicate them to avoid confusion. The target audience is readers of thrillers and Christians. The title "The Exorcist" was ideal for the book/movie from the 70's. It suggested a horror film with a hint of Christianity. Should I try for a title including the term "Apocalypse", which is probably more recognizable to non-Christians than the "Second Coming"?
Thanks
Dirk
2,424 2018-02-07 21:55:50
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Speaking from the perspective of a newbie, it's hard to review someone else's work and even harder when reviewing a more experienced writer. I've been giving plenty of reviews, but feel shy about doing so. We're talking here about reading and reviewing genres we maybe not so familiar with. It can be hard to fully appreciate a good story when it's not what you're used to reading, and so on. I'd figured that the point system, at least in quantitative terms has reciprocity built in. Lots of things to figure out as a newcomer.
I agree about the difficulty of trying to review more experienced writers. I often find I have little to add, except for an occasional missing comma or confusing description. I've done plenty of reviews where I find fewer than 5 things to comment on, so I don't meet the minimum to receive points. I have a bazillion points already, so that doesn't matter to me. One thing I try to do is give more reviews to experienced writers, so what I lack in quality I make up for in quantity. Granted, I accumulate lots of points, but I tell the recipients of my reviews why I do it.
2,425 2018-02-07 17:32:36
Re: Welcome (264 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome PulakK. We were just discussing new users the other day and ways to help them learn best practices for the site. You've done step one, which is to say hello. Next step is to post a new thread in the Premium group summarizing your novel(s) and asking for interested reviewers. You can subsequently use the thread for brainstorming with other members and for discussing feedback you've received. Be sure to respond to each review to acknowledge the effort of the reviewer. For inline reviews, you can even respond on a comment by comment basis, if you're so inclined. Finally, be sure to reciprocate by reviewing the works of those authors you wish to hang onto as long term reviewers. You need to review in order to accumulate points to post your own work. Don't be discouraged if you get some negative reviews. Those can be some of the most helpful. I had one reviewer years ago who told me to start over and why, so I did. The result was a much better second draft. It's your baby, though, so ignore whatever feedback you disagree with. Hope this helps.