Bzzt!
2,377 2017-10-21 14:18:36
Re: Marketing State of Vengeance - Progress Report (8 replies, posted in Marketing Your Writing)
This is good information, Jake. Thank you.
2,378 2017-10-20 03:00:21
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Check out BookBaby. They're affiliated with this site, I believe.
2,379 2017-10-18 05:05:31
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Awesome about the chapters. I'll get to those later this week.
Nuts about your long-term prognosis. Does your health plan give you access to the best hospitals/docs/treatments? Hopefully, you have more than Jersey City Medical Center. Oy!
Glad your feeling good. :-)
Dirk
2,380 2017-10-18 04:56:37
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
No rush. Yoda voice: rest, you must. It may help to tell you I'm only planning to do light edits at this point. Slap me around a little, grab the points, and go back to sleep. Seabrass's final edits are already included in most of the posted chapters, and I'm about to add K's edits, so it should be in decent shape by the time you see it. I'll take a few hours this week and update all the online chapters. Depending on how far back you're reading, I have some late changes to post.
I totally forgot about Acme (not ACME, since that'll get me sued) and Aussie as I was revising my latest chapters. I'll have to go back and see if I can find more use for them. Did you know that I once forgot to use God in an entire chapter? Had to make a chapter checklist after that, which I keep forgetting to look at. I now have five ghosts in Joseph's head, so it's going to be hard to use them all. There's particular overlap between Joseph's mother and Admiral St. James. I knew that might bite me eventually. I'd retire Admiral St. James, but she's his military advisor, which should come in handy in act IV.
I thought Roman history research was hard. Try coming up to speed on the inner workings of the Catholic Church and the Vatican (for my next book about the Antichrist). Especially with my memory. I need notes just for my notes. I've bought two books just to understand Revelation, plus Catholicism for Dummies. :-) Every time I go deep into Catholic documents (e.g., online encyclopedia, the Catechism, etc.), I need a religious dictionary. There is a large DVD set all about the Catholic Church that I will probably buy, but it's $70 used, so I'm holding off until I get over the guilt of how much I've already spent. Had to buy a Blue-Ray drive and software just to watch the damn Exorcist Anthology, which turned out to be mostly crap. If I had thought to check rottentomatoes.com first, I could have saved myself a bundle. The worst of the five films has an 11% freshness rating. I miss having access to US streaming. Netflix Canada is all we've got, and it's relatively slim pickings.
I'm now officially in act III of IV with my revisions (about 15 chapters to polish). Four months or so to completion, allowing plenty of time for Catholic research. However, after some discussions online, I decided not to publish Into the Mind of God until I return to the story (after my next book), which means probably four or more years from now. I'm hoping the Antichrist book will be more polished and make a better first publication. Marketing will be a time-consuming bitch, so I want to wait until I've done a better book.
G'night.
Dirk
2,381 2017-10-17 03:56:47
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 26, Long Live the Regent, is up. Mostly cleanup and minor edits. The epigraph is new. I also reworked the opening to get to Joseph's anguish right away, as suggested by Seabrass. Joseph now has five passengers in his head. That's probably all for this book, although it will become increasingly difficult for him to remain in control, especially in book two.
Quick, go read!
Dirk
2,382 2017-10-17 01:46:30
Re: Dialogue tags to be avoided (53 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
While it's been pounded into me from day one not to get too fancy, I would use some of the entries on the forbidden list (e.g., snapped, stammered, urged, etc.). If it conveys more information than who exactly is speaking (i.e., it does double duty), I'm all the more likely to use it. The beauty of self-publishing. I do, however, agree with the idea of not using tags when a little action will do nicely (e.g., Mary turned to Joseph. "Did you finish your essay?").
2,383 2017-10-15 21:00:50
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Maybe Sibrasso or Sibrassi instead of Leonardo?
I'd use Charles, but the Italian version is Calogero, which is too different. Or ignore the the correct translation and use Charlo.
2,384 2017-10-15 20:30:52
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I may rename Babilus Danasius (the car recyclling plant manager) to Babilus Sibrassi or something similar. Or maybe rename Leonardo, the Crazed Cabbie.
2,385 2017-10-15 20:21:18
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thanks. Shiburassu was too different from Seabrass, so I went back to Kobayashi. I'm looking for an excuse to use sea bass in the story in a meaningful way.
2,387 2017-10-07 00:59:12
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 25, Tombstone, is up. It's a cleaned up version of the House Titanus chapter from v2. The epigraph is dedicated to Janet Taylor-Perry for her assistance with the demon poisons used in the book. Alan is someone she knows. :-)
Only two more acts (16 chapters) to revise!
Quick, go read!
Dirk
2,388 2017-10-05 20:07:23
Re: Top 100 Blogs for Writers - Nominate a Blog (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Can you pay a copy of the list on this site as well?
2,389 2017-10-04 16:30:47
Re: The Colorless Dragon Thread (354 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Ancestors forgive me. I follow the enemy.
Hold tight, little one. [name] is coming for you. (In this case, [name] is the dragon referencing itself by name.)
2,390 2017-09-27 19:53:40
Re: That famous first line! (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
My first line begins with "Battle stations!" The whole first chapter (a prologue) is intended as an Indiana Jones-style opening.
2,391 2017-09-27 03:54:48
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Chapter 24, Maya Reborn, is up. It incorporates everyone's feedback from v2. Billie makes a comeback when Joseph's life goes off the rails.
Quick, go read!
Dirk
2,392 2017-09-24 22:05:46
Re: Books with just one POV? (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Now, what is your real motivation for starting this discussion?
JP
I'm aware that many classics do it. I can even think back far enough to some of them. I'm more interested in modern trends. Almost all of the books I read here and elsewhere use multiple POVs. I mentioned the genre (supernatural thriller), since I've never written one and there may be best practices to follow that differ from sci-fi, which is what I've been writing. Even the best-selling sci-fi novel of all time, Dune, which was written in the 60's, used multiple POVs.
2,393 2017-09-24 05:24:39
Re: Books with just one POV? (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yeah, it'll be third person. I haven't planned enough yet to know if I'll have a reason to get into the POV of other characters.
2,394 2017-09-24 05:11:24
Topic: Books with just one POV? (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm in the process of planning my next book, and I'm wondering how common or unusual it is to have a book written entirely from one character's POV. In this case, it's a supernatural thriller.
Thanks
Norm
2,395 2017-09-20 02:12:19
Re: Looking for self-published writers for case study (12 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This will be one heck of a useful case study. Be sure to include the Marketing Your Writing group when publishing it, so we can find it later.
One question I have is this: Is there a self-publishing entity that works like Amazon, but distributes the book in all major e-book formats, and makes the English version of the print book available for international purchase (e.g., in the US, Canada, England, Australia, etc.)?
Thanks
Dirk
2,396 2017-09-15 04:59:39
Re: Ability to categorize posts within a group? (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yes, the person initiating the thread would control the categories. I suggested text strings for the categories so that there can be multiple of them without a cumbersome interface. You simply add a text field to new forum posts (similar to subject, but for categories). Naturally, the search control on this site would have to be modified to search categories. The search control also needs to be brought out of hiding. I'll bet most people don't even know it exists.
One crude way to do this already exists, but it would require people put category keywords at the end of their subject lines (e.g., my subject - marketing). The search control already has the ability to search for keywords specifically in subject lines. Since the original poster retains the ability to change the subject line, they can always go in afterward and add/remove categories as desired or when requested.
Either way, the search control should really be made more accessible in the system. If you're in a forum, it should be one click away. Right now, you need dive down three screens to get to it. The list of groups to search in also needs to be sorted.
Either approach can then be used to categorize posts in any forum. The search control has the option to search across multiple or even all groups, so it could be made to search for a given category across groups. That way it doesn't matter if you put your posts in a specific group or in Premium.
2,397 2017-09-15 04:38:05
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
This went faster than I thought. This is the epigraph for South Haven Strikes Back (the cadet massacre). Let me know if you think it works.
Judy Wood: An update now on our ongoing coverage of the manhunt for the elusive Queen Aussie. We can now report that Realm agents executed a raid on a suspected Aussie hideout on Electronic Junction, a deep space station that is home to many sentient AIs. Unfortunately, the raid yielded little new information. Authorities found only vast quantities of discarded fried Kiwi bones, a closet full of dresses, and numerous images of roboserfs in various states of undress. To help us analyze these findings, we are joined by famed criminal profilers, Drs. Shields and Brooks. Dr. Shields, let me begin with you. What do the findings in this alleged hideout say to you about Aussie?
Dr. Shields: Well, Judy, I’m convinced that Aussie is an Australian woman with a love for fried food and a contempt for New Zealand, with a fetish for roboserf pornography. Based on the quantity of Kiwi bones found, Aussie is almost certainly morbidly obese.
Judy Wood: Dr. Brooks, do you agree?
Dr. Brooks: No. I believe Aussie is a man from New Zealand who masquerades as an Australian. He’s allergic to chicken, so he eats Kiwi. He’s killed many women and kept their dresses as trophies. Also, he works as a tailor of sentient AIs on Electronic Junction, hence the pictures.
Judy Wood: Does this raid on Electronic Junction suggest the authorities are homing in on Acme Corporation’s CEO as the mastermind of the attack on the Royal Family? She frequents that station, and her artificial body has taste buds, so she might be eating fried Kiwi for pleasure.
Dr. Shields: Preposterous! In spite of the ability of Acme’s CEO to run their company, it is beyond the ability of an AI, even a sentient one, to dream up acts of violence as a means to increase weapon sales and drive up Acme’s share price.
Dr. Brooks: I agree. The idea is laughable. AI sentience is highly overrated. And let’s not forget her safeguards against homicide.
Judy Wood: And there you have it, folks. Don’t forget, we are a public service, so please donate now to pay my pathetic salary. Anyone who gives over one hundred crowns gets a free Kiwi deep fryer delivered to your door by Mama’s Little Shipping. Operators are standing by.
— Biblical News Network, New Bethlehem
2,398 2017-09-15 04:15:28
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I have insomnia. The two entities share the same name/alias and may be the same individual (i.e., the AI/CEO of Acme). I plan to have the authorities slowly come to the conclusion that Acme's CEO is, in fact, the mastermind and begin to tighten the noose. Wait'll you see what happens to her. Right now I'm rewriting references to Aussie from act I. There's a big epigraph/news article about the manhunt for Aussie at the beginning of South Haven Strikes Back that I'll post here in my thread as soon as its rewritten. Most of the violence in the rest of the book will be tied to Aussie. I'd go long on Acme shares if I were you.
2,399 2017-09-14 22:34:40
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Following is where I'm going with Queen Aussie. She is an AI product of Acme Corporation who becomes its CEO in AD 3994 (the same year she became sentient and ejected from Admiral St. James's destroyer), and she is a suspect in all the violence committed by a galactic criminal mastermind who goes by the same name/alias. Acme share prices go up after each violent event. Slowly, the noose will tighten around her, all reported through news stories at the beginning of violent chapters. Acme's Queen Aussie doesn't show up in person until the end of the book in a surprise twist.
Following is from the modified epigraph/news story of chapter 5 (Cain's trial and execution):
A convicted felon best known by his alias Cain led the attack, but he admitted during interrogation that the real mastermind behind it was someone calling themselves Queen Aussie. Apparently, Cain and Aussie used text messages to plan the attack, thereby keeping the true identity of Aussie a secret. A Realm-wide manhunt is underway for Aussie, although authorities admit it was most likely an Imperial agent.
Interestingly, Queen Aussie is also the name of the sentient, cross-dressing AI that has run Acme Corporation since AD 3994. Acme was quick to release a statement denying that their CEO was involved. They point out that their Queen Aussie is herself an Acme product and that she has safeguards against homicide that are as reliable as any other Acme product. While that may be true, it should be noted that galaxy-wide demand for military equipment spiked after the attack, sending Acme’s share price soaring seven percent.
Naturally, Acme products are not always reliable (not sure yet how far to push that), and Acme's Aussie even admitted in the book's prologue that her safeguards against homicide overloaded after she became sentient.
Thoughts?
2,400 2017-09-14 21:59:05
Topic: Ability to categorize posts within a group? (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sol, how hard would it be to allow post authors to categorize their posts when posting to a group? Is the forum code open to modification? You have a really sophisticated search feature on the forums (still buried too deeply, in my opinion), and it would be great to be able to search for categories of information (e.g., all posts marked as marketing). Corra started a great thread today about social media marketing, but in a few months, it'll be buried. I'm aware there's a marketing group, but people don't seem to be using groups to categorize their posts, probably because Premium posts reach everyone. The categories could either be a fixed list or simple text strings. Personally, I prefer the latter.