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Not with the current draft. I'm only making minor changes at this time, but a special thank you for the work you put into that v2 review. I went to x-line and all I saw was comments with little bits of my story in between. One line had seven comments. I was able to use most of it. As Patrick Stewart said in Dune, "Gods, what a monster!"

I'm thinking about creating a separate thread for my next books but am wondering where to put it. It's a fictional telling of the Second Coming, including an attempt by the Antichrist to take over the Catholic Church. The Mysteries and Thrillers group is the natural location, but the forum there is completely dead. It's never been used. I'm inclined to continue here. Thoughts?

Welcome, Yug. I noticed you're posting your stories to the internet. If you're just writing for fun, that's fine. However, if you plan to publish these stories in the future, you won't be able to find a publisher if the content is already out there. Even if you eventually take them down from here, there may be draft copies permanently floating around for Google to find.

It must have been someone else. I never wait to edit my work. I generally edit as quickly as the reviews come in, so that I don't get the same feedback from every reviewer. In the past, I even tried to make major changes and republish them asap. I finally smartened up and settled on the idea that there would have to be more drafts.

I do that but then forget to look at it. :-)

Ryan received a $500K donation from the Koch Brothers a few days after passing tax reform.

Oh, look at that. Peace in our time.

Clark, you have fourteen reviews of three chapters in your book. Also, I know I reviewed at least one of your chapters. If you haven't already, post a new thread in Premium asking for reviewers with whom you can reciprocate. Include a description of your story and the kind of feedback you're looking for. If there are particular genres you like to read, mention that too, although that may limit who reads your book.

They forgot 'bigly'.

How about Admiral St. James, Lady Kay, and Leonardo? St. James can blow herself up on cue, Lady Kay unleashes poisons that cause people's intestines to expand at the speed of sound, and Leonardo can bring down whole buildings with just a taxi cab.

I toyed with Into the Mind as well, but the book summary immediately drags you back to God and religion. I can't figure out who my target audience is. Galaxy Tales is the series title, concluding with a book set in 7329 AD, where Joseph's religious fanatics get the ultimate revenge for the destruction of New Bethlehem.