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Hi. You'll get a broader response if you post this message in the Premium forum as well. A lot of potential readers aren't necessarily in the smaller groups.
Amateurs. :-) Try -40 in Calgary. I've lived through -50 with windchill.
Why did I move back here again?
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I just had a look at your story. It's well-written, but huge. I would split it into parts and definitely post in Premium.
Welcome to the site. I suggest posting your hello message to the Premium forum as well, since not everyone is a member of Basic. Also, you'll get more feedback if you post your story in the Premium group if you haven't already. Premium requires that you have points to post, but it also pays points to your reviewers, which is the local currency. Specify if you want inline or just regular reviews. Inline will get you better reviews, but if you're on the site for your free initial week, you'll only be able to give/receive inline reviews for that week.
Amazon routinely recommends Catholicism for Dummies for me.
Ah, but when the Sun returns to its normal output, we're screwed. Hopefully, I'll be dead by then. Y'all can deal with the fact that the Middle East will become uninhabitable. That'll make the Syrian refugee crises look like a minor migration.
Most of Canada is setting records this week, with various cities colder than Mars, the North Pole, and the South Pole. Ottawa is colder than the capital of Mongolia, Ulan Bator.
I read a science story the other day that the Sun is entering a recurring cooling period, where it gives off less heat than usual. The last time was in the 1700's, which led to a mini ice age.
O the weather outside is frightful, and the fire is so delightful...
And a (hic) happy new year.
A handful of us set up shop in the Medieval group so we can help each other flesh out ideas, or just chat. Each person creates a single running forum thread for their book(s) that the others read and respond to. Simultaneously, we review each other's chapters. Two of us are actually writing science fiction, but since Medieval is where most of my reviewers hang out, that's where I put my thread.
My next book is going to be a supernatural thriller, but the group for that has zero posts in the forum since the site went live, so I'll probably just continue with a thread in Medieval.
Naturally, when it comes time to post chapters, I include them in Premium and Science Fiction as well. I have a couple of long term readers who don't hang out in the forums.
If I need help beyond what our little clique can provide, I ask in the Premium forum.
This is not really how the site/groups were meant to be used, but it's an acceptable workaround.
I just voted for all of the above. Good luck to you all.
I can't recall if Disney is going to release The Last Jedi on Netflix or limit it to their own upcoming streaming service. I know future Star Wars films will no longer run on Netflix. Just what I need. Every entertainment company charging $10 a month for streaming. I have enough monthly expenses paying for Wi-Fi, Netflix, and Spotify.
K, is there a service in Canada like Amazon Video that allows you to rent videos for a few days and stream them? I don't mind paying $4 occasionally to see a film that I don't want to own.
That's 72 degrees below the freezing temperature of water! Reminds me of that Star Trek episode where the away team was freezing to death on a planet and the transporters were out of commission. A few dozen episodes later it turns out the Enterprise carries a shuttlecraft. That's the kind of error that would turn Star Wars fans rabid. Fortunately, they're currently busy despising The Last Jedi. It rates worse than the prequel trilogy, but will still easily top $1B before everyone realizes it sucks and stops going. And then J.J. Abrams, who never saw a movie franchise he didn't want to reboot, will destroy the final episode in the new trilogy.
Just bought my sixth ($%?&*!) book on Revelation. The first was Protestant and I need a Catholic interpretation. The second gives four major viewpoints for interpreting Revelation, but is too generic (neither entirely Catholic or Protestant). The next two are Catholic, but are incomplete and confusing. Book number five is also Catholic, is beautifully written and researched, but comes at Revelation from a less common point of view (i.e., that most of Revelation was already fulfilled in the 1st century after Christ's death and the destruction of Jerusalem in AD 70. Only events surrounding the Second Coming are left to be fulfilled. Unfortunately, many Catholic scholars think this point of view, while not incorrect, isn't mainstream. Finally (last try), I bought another highly rated book that I'm going to read over Christmas. It's no wonder there is mostly Protestant information about Revelation on the internet. Catholics can't agree on a particular interpretation. Anyway, my new novel will be based on either book five or the new one, if it's any good.
Pfft to y'all Americans. Or as Trump would spell it: Amerikansky.
amy s wrote:Meesa thinkin youza is crazy for likin Jar-Jar
I was ok with Jar Jar's speech patterns, however I found he brought excessive levity to the story. I mean the story already has tons of comedy (eg the chain of bigger fish eating each other) and here you have a main who can't sell your serious scenes.
He's like WWE Wrestler Doink the Clown who gets occasional matches to lighten the mood in longer events. But imagine you're stuck with this clown in every match. No matter how desperate or dire the match-- or emotional the foe, there's this clown standing there in the background.
Queen Aussie?
Aussie! Welcome back. As promised, you are a mass murdering robot in my book. You run Acme, Inc., a firm founded by the Professor that holds a monopoly on all tech manufacturing, including a coconut powered time machine.
However, for various reasons, I've decided not to publish the book until after I write and publish a totally different story about the rise of the Antichrist within the Catholic Church. The book summary for it is on the last page of my thread.
I never watched it thinking the Gungans are CGI. I still don't get what's wrong with his accent. Yoda couldn't get his word order right, yet no one complained.
Some of the fans say that Snoke in The Last Jedi is worse than Jar Jar. Personally, I liked Jar Jar.
Just read a whole bunch of comments from die-hard Star Wars fans about the new movie. Many despise the film. Yet the critics love it. After reading some of the spoilers, I'm with the fans. Makes me think my sci-fi story is actually pretty good. Nevertheless, I'm going to stick with my original plan not to publish it until after my next story is done. Working title for the new story is Saving Connor. I wanted to call it Rise of the Antichrist, but that title is taken, more than once.
The research is going to require many long months, especially since I can't keep anything in my head. I had to buy five books just to find two decent Catholic interpretations of Revelation, and even they don't agree.
That's quite a vacation. I'm glad you had a nice time.
Draft Book Summary:
Living in a Catholic orphanage in Rome, fourteen-year-old Connor has special gifts. He comforts the grieving, heals the sick, and casts out demons from the possessed. As the Church struggles to understand his supernatural abilities and reconcile them with accepted doctrine, priests, bishops, and cardinals in Rome are dying at an alarming rate, either by accident, suicide, or murder. Soon the Pope’s Council of Cardinal Advisors concludes the Church is being stalked by the Antichrist, and Connor becomes his main target. The Council must move swiftly to save Connor, who may be the Church’s long-awaited Christ returned in the flesh. What follows is a desperate struggle between good and evil that could decide the fate of Christendom and all of humanity with it.
Thanks, Amy, but I decided to punt on the idea of setting it in the future. Too much effort just to try and justify why the Antichrist is going after the Catholic Church. It's the Mother Church. No greater reason needed. The Omen series totally ignored 95% of Revelation. I can skip a few signs of the Second Coming, especially since no one seems to agree on which are real signs and what they mean.
However, I'm considering including a female detective in the Gendarmerie Corps of Vatican City State who investigates a series of disappearances and murders among priests, bishops, and cardinals in and around Vatican City, which is a sign of the Antichrist at work. How does Detective Amy Ess sound? There're actually only 130 people in the Corps, and, knowing the Catholic Church, they're probably all men, but what the hell. I want at least one major female character in the book. There will also be a possessed reverend mother, but she will probably only appear in one chapter.
Just finished The Exorcist (40th anniversary edition). Meh. Medically and religiously speaking, it's incredibly well researched, but the Father Karras character (a Jesuit psychiatrist) treats phenomena like mind-reading and telekinesis as facts of modern science, ruling them out as signs of Regan's possession. I'm glad those elements were left out of the movie. The prologue was a mess and the first few chapters didn't draw me in at all. The book was written in omniscient POV, with quite a bit of telling, and overuse of flashbacks. I don't mind omniscient if it's well done (e.g., Dune), but in this book, the author, William Peter Blatty, headhopped like a ping pong ball, including describing things that happen when no one is present to see them. Also, a heavy focus on excrement, vomit, and obscene masturbation involving Regan that took me out of the story. Nevertheless, none of the above got in the way of him selling 13 million copies, so what do I know? I got some useful research out of it, although I prefer the prequel, Exorcist: The Beginning, written by another author.
Now back to researching the Book of Revelation. I now have five books on interpreting Revelation, three of them written by Catholic theologians, and they all disagree wildly about the prophecies. One of the Catholic authors cites quack science about the ability of the U.S. government to use EMF-emitting technology to control our thoughts.