Chapterhouse Dune epigraph: it is possible to know so much about a subject that you become totally ignorant.
1,026 2020-09-22 03:12:42
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
1,027 2020-09-15 03:12:44
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I rediscovered in Chapterhouse that Frank Herbert used the Jews as a secret society that had survived the millennia since Old Earth. I had planned to rewrite Galaxy Tales to project Anglicans forward into the year 4017, rather than the generic Christianity I used in my previous drafts. Should be ready to start that in ten or so years. :-(
1,028 2020-09-12 00:05:12
Re: Anyone been to a movie theatre lately? (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I assume this is a remake of Dune from several years ago. That one was a big disappointment compared to the book. Perhaps with the newer technologuy, it will improve. Dune is still my favorite Sci-Fi novel -- the trilogy. Take care. Vern
It's a huge remake of the 1984 version of Dune (that was a mess), but done in two parts. Probably a budget similar to Star Wars 9. Almost every set was built rather than green-screened. The down side is that coronavirus will probably keep it from making any real money, which means they may never do part two. Like you, I didn't care for the miniseries on the SyFy channel, although their miniseries of Dune Messiah/Children of Dune was pretty good, with James McAvoy as Leto II and Alice Krige (aka the Borg Queen) as Lady Jessica.
1,029 2020-09-10 19:14:31
Re: Anyone been to a movie theatre lately? (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
A drive-in? Aren't those from the 1900's? ;-)
1,030 2020-09-09 21:52:52
Re: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Replace stranger with strangler. It still looks wrong in caps. :-)
1,031 2020-09-09 17:53:23
Re: Anyone been to a movie theatre lately? (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I saw Lord of the Rings and the end of the Skywalker Saga in the theater, and thought Dune would be my last film in a theater. Given the increasing evidence for long-term damage from Covid-19 and the fact that I visit a care home regularly, I'll have to wait for it to come out on DVD. I had forgotten there's a small theater in my building. Close enough.
1,032 2020-09-09 17:33:36
Re: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
An example from the Chicago Manual of Style: "Hello, stranger." Not a title, so no caps.
Much obliged, Everyone. ;-)
1,033 2020-09-09 15:27:01
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Kill me now.
1,034 2020-09-09 13:03:04
Re: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I was wondering if anyone would object to capitalizing teacher and boss in direct address as I've never seen those terms (and similar ones) capitalized before. I'm wearing out the E key on my keyboard switching back and forth. :-)
1,035 2020-09-09 03:52:55
Topic: Anyone been to a movie theatre lately? (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The Dune teaser trailer dropped today and the official trailer comes out tomorrow. I'm dying to see that film (it's the best-selling sci-fi novel of all time), but I'm very hesitant about going (in December). A friend of mine said, where he is, they run at about 25% capacity and people wear masks. I suspect a lot of people lower those masks to eat popcorn, though. Although Canada was very compliant with all the quarantine rules, we've had a number of people take stupid risks since the economy began to reopen, primarily by going to events involving large groups, minimal distancing, and too few masks.
Does anyone still go to the movies?
1,036 2020-09-09 00:35:49
Re: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, JP. I'm glad to see there is so much agreement on this subject. Caps it is.
1,037 2020-09-08 03:30:35
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Just finished watching The Forest on Netflix, a six-part French miniseries. I wouldn't have watched it if I'd known it involved rape and murder of teenage girls (not shown), but I forced myself to finish it. What a great mystery story. There were so many secrets hidden by townsfolk that kept the viewer guessing who did what to whom. The ending was excellent. And the soundtrack added to the tension throughout. It'll be interesting to see if the police case in my second act can come close to something that well-wrtten. Technically, I'm going for something more like Angels & Demons, so it doesn't need to be as intricate a web as the miniseries.
1,038 2020-09-08 02:50:00
Re: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Vern. Since I show emphasis using italics in my book, I think I'm best off with italicized lowercase. As Dagny pointed out, it's not a title.
English grammar? What's that?
Much obliged.
Dirk
1,039 2020-09-07 12:48:53
Re: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thank you, Dagny. That makes sense.
1,040 2020-09-06 21:56:41
Re: Just saying hi (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome, Marcus. I think you'll find the site very useful.
Feel free to reach out if you have any questions.
Dirk
1,041 2020-09-06 20:54:44
Topic: Capitalize exorcist in direct address? (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm just editing my chapters, and one of my reviewers suggested that exorcist should lowercase in the following sentence:
“Where is your God now, Exorcist?”
Which is correct? If the person were addressing a priest, the word Father would be capitalized. An exorcist is simply a priest with specialized training and duties. I should add that the person being addressed is not actually a real exorcist. The demon addressing him is using the term derisively, hence the italics.
Thanks
Dirk
1,042 2020-09-06 03:05:41
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Just finished Heretics of Dune. Pretty good overall. Three books to go, then It's off to the Foundation series. Haven't read that in decades, and I'm pretty sure I only read the original trilogy, not the whole series. When I browse suggested books on Kindle, I realize I've already read many of the classic sci-fi novels from my teens. For the most part, I only remember the titles.
Isaac Asimov was once asked what he would do if he was told he only had a year to live. His answer: write faster! :-)
1,043 2020-09-03 03:21:10
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Milano, Marino, Moretti, Michel(Angelo), Maria. Time to update my names bible before I use any more names with an M. And I've lost count of the number of names I have that end in o.
1,044 2020-08-30 16:44:06
Re: A fairly unique story (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Dagny. I'll add it to my list. I like short episodes, as I'm easily bored. You've probably heard of Thirteen Reasons Why. The first season is about thirteen reasons why a teenage girl killed herself. It's intense. I had to watch episodes be of Friends in between. Season four includes some of the best acting I've ever seen. The lead actor, Dylan Minette, plays a teenager in his final year of high school who begins to fall apart mentally because of all the s--t he's gone through in high school.
1,045 2020-08-28 18:02:42
Re: A fairly unique story (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
It's available in Canada. I live in Calgary. I agree about content problems, though. Since I no longer own a TV or have cable, I keep paying for Netflix. I just started a new series called The Forest. French with English subtitles, but the story is good so far. It's a mystery set in a small French town. As often as not, I rent a movie from Google. Just watched Terminator 2 again after many years. The liquid metal Terminator was awesome.
1,046 2020-08-25 22:51:01
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I need a name for the team that Campagna and De Rosa are leading. I threw in a dedicated forensics unit to scrape demons off the pavement. I'm considering the Alpha-Omega unit.
1,047 2020-08-25 22:43:45
Re: etc (68 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You should post that to Premium. It's really interesting. Older readers like thrillers and religious books. I better write faster before they all die off.
1,048 2020-08-22 05:37:38
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I decided to keep reading until the end of the Dune series timeline, including the final two books written by BH/KA. I recall not particularly liking their two books, but I'm enjoying Heretics of Dune more than I remember. I also liked Chapterhouse on past reads. 3.75 books to go. Also good progress on plotting the investigation of Connor's history by Inspector Campana. I originally thought I would spread it out over many chapters, but I'm now wondering if I should roll most of it into one focused chapter, albeit with a lot of minor scenes as Campana bounces from location to location in her search, something like a Law & Order episode.
1,049 2020-08-17 03:15:42
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
And Leto is history. I think I'm going to take a breather from Dune and skip to the Foundation series.
1,050 2020-08-14 09:32:50
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,461 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I study the writing technique from these masters, even if the story is boring.