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(29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I stopped posting and reviewing many weeks ago due to being sick (chronically exhausted and then the flu), drained of time by my contractors (who wrap early next week, yay!), and drained of even more time by my cat, who insists on playing fetch with toy springs (hours a day if I allowed it) and won't go to bed unless I do. Hell hath no greater chaos than a cat being ignored or up too late. I'm also stuck on a major plot point and working through it requires serious focused time, which the little furball doesn't allow much of.

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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Interesting article about what's really happening/not happening behind the scenes in AI implementations.
https://www.techpolicy.press/the-black- … hatgpt.com

You have to have them hosted on another site, then point your forum post at the image on the other site. I use postimages.org (it's free), but there are others. Some of what follows is from memory, but close enough you'll be able to figure it out. Very easy to get set up with them (you'll need to create an account, as far as I know).

Upload your image(s) to your postimages.org account. Click on My Images on the upper right of that site. Hover over the uploaded image that you want to link to. One of the floating icons that appears over the image is for "sharing". Click on that icon, and you'll get a list of possible link addresses that you can copy into your forum post here. Use the link address for "Thumbnail for Forums". Click the copy icon to the right of that link address, and paste (ctrl-v) into your forum post, like so:

https://i.postimg.cc/qtJ6HL77/Screenshot-2025-08-23-010736.jpg

Voila! It'll take you a few minutes to set up the account on the other site, but once you've done it once, the whole process will seem trivial.

Click on Quote on the bottom right of this post to see the link address I copied here to bring up the thumbnail above. The entire line beginning with "[url=" came from postimages.org (the image itself is hosted on postimg.cc, which is what the url points to). Just copy and paste as I noted above.

Anyone who clicks on the icon will be taken to a full version of the image on postimg.cc. I'm sure some of the other link addresses might be useful too, but I haven't played with them.

Dirk

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(68 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Within the past seven days, yes. But I don't know how long one of my tabs was open to the site's forums. Interestingly, the email I got notifying me of your post here actually had a working link, which I haven't seen work in ages on my machines.

I swear, my cat seems more like a toddler all the time. He gets upset/vocal and starts biting (though mildly) when I stop playing fetch with him, despite 1.5 hours of me throwing colorful toy springs down the hall for him to chase. And he's a holy terror at bedtime, when I put his toys away to stop him from making noise while I (and my neighbors) are trying to sleep. It also causes him to stop running around on my hardwood floors, which sounds like a lightweight galloping horse running up and down the hall.

Of course, now that he's asleep, he's absolutely adorable, but then what sleeping toddler isn't? :-)

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Not sure. Sol, is it too soon for another contest?

Speaks for itself.
https://i.postimg.cc/qtJ6HL77/Screenshot-2025-08-23-010736.jpg

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I would message Sol if you want to be sure. If you don't have an existing connection with him, you can email him at contact@thenextbigwriter.com.

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J.R. Geiger wrote:

Tried all that, didn't work.

J.R., since it works for some but not others, can I suggest you send Sol a copy of the image file you were using?
Send to: contact@thenextbigwriter.com

Thanks, George. For the moment I'm happy with the series title. And I'm almost certainly going to use "The Emissary" as the title of book one in lieu of the "The Rise of Connor." I think the new AI-generated image of Connor goes better with the new title. Naturally, I'm sure to change my mind at least five more times this year alone. tongue

I checked. Although there is no exact match for Gathers the Darkness it brings up a page-full of close matches, mostly all close variants of those words. Oddly, my title, As Darkness Gathers, gets far fewer close matches. The exact match is the one novel I mentioned earlier with the same name as my series, and it shows up as number 1. Given the way Amazon operates, I would have expected at least a dozen other, irrelevant, promoted titles to show up first. After all, Jeff Bezos has obscene boat expenses to pay for.

Hi ncj. Why Gathers the Darkness over As Darkness Gathers?
They're both catchy imo.

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(14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I meant you don't need to use text as part of your book covers here, whether you add them yourself or let the Publish wizard add one for you. Your chosen cover on this site is never displayed here without the name of the book, short story, or poem being either beside, above, or below the cover image.

I just realized I hadn't updated the name of this thread with the correct series title. Fixed. The reason I didn't go with "The Gathering Darkness" is that there are too many books on Amazon with that title. "As Darkness Gathers" only occurs once, as a single book name in a series with a totally different title. To be honest, I actually like "As Darkness Gathers" better than "The Gathering Darkness."

Book two will probably be called "The War for Souls," which is from a line spoken by one of the characters near the end of book one: This battle is lost, but I assure you, the war for souls has just begun. The only reason I might go with something different is that someone else released a book in 2024 with that exact title. To be honest, I like that title enough, I'm willing to be one of two books with the same name. Realistically, it will be years before I write and publish book two, so the other author's book will be much older.

Book three will most likely be called "The Lesser King", which will become (spoiler alert) Connor's title at the end of book three. The other options are "The Unholy Shepherd" and "The Immortal Sinner." I may give him all three titles, which isn't uncommon among royalty, but he'll primarily be known as Lesser King Connor.

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For what it's worth, you don't need a title on the book cover on this site. If I remember correctly, whenever this site displays your cover, the name of the book will always be included in text anyway, so there's no need for it on the image. When it displays your book cover as a thumbnail, such as on our home pages, it's usually too difficult to read anyway.

As Darkness Gathers.

Yup. Sounds familiar.  One of the reasons they may change their answers or at least give more detail is simply how fast these companies are working to improve their versions of AI. Your response here reminded me that I need to go check which version of Gemini I was using. I signed up for their Pro trial, which is free for a year, but it has reverted to their basic version on occasion. Not sure why.

I'm waffling between titles again; that's what happens when your cat keeps you up until 2 AM:

- The Rise of Connor - still a good title for book 1 and unique on Amazon the last time I checked, although I'm now toying with "The Emissary" as the title of book 1 (see below); the idea of Connor as the Emissary/Holy Emissary will play a major role in the latest draft, hence the reason I'm considering the new title.
- The Emissary - short and catchy; reminds me of the Exorcist as far as catchy titles go; since there are already books with that title, I'd have to rely on the series title (As Darkness Gathers) to distinguish mine; the word Holy in one of my previous dalliances with this title (The Holy Emissary) was overkill since Connor is already wearing a glowing cross and sporting a halo on the front cover. Technically, he's the Emissary of the Lord, although most of the time, he'd be referred to simply as the Emissary.

Sol,

Kdot got kicked out of the site while posting a fairly short follow-up to an existing thread (near the end of the VQF thread in the Fantasy+ forum).
And I got kicked out while typing a somewhat longer post in a new thread in the Premium forum about Gemini and capitalization.

Any chance the hunt for this bug and a fix can move up in priority.

Thanks
Dirk

Holy cow. Did Gemini ever make a lot of mistakes tonight when I began by asking if a certain collective noun (brothers) should be capitalized in direct address. In my case, it refers to how an archpriest in the year 430 might greet three of his Christian colleagues ("Welcome, Brothers" vs "Welcome, brothers"). I figured the answer was the former since the word stands in for three names, but for shits and giggles, I decided to press the point. Eventually, it claimed that general and cardinal should be capitalized when used as standalone titles (e.g., The General is here). In an hour, it gave eight wrong answers related to the topic. Where's Captain Kirk when you want to convince an AI to self-destruct? It finally gave correct answers when I started a new chat session, although I didn't spend much time on it. Of course, now all my research from that era is suspect.

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J.R. Geiger wrote:
Tamsin Liddell wrote:

I just uploaded a new cover for "Revels," so it's working fine for me. But that's a short story.

Ive been trying for 3 days to upload a cover for my.new book. Hopefully the webmaster or whomever can fix it.

Uploading where? On this site? Longstanding issue. Try converting it to a different image file type. Jpegs are the mostly like to work. May require futzing with the image file (e.g., load it into your favorite image app, especially Paint, make a minor change (e.g., compress it, edit the image slightly, etc.), then save it back as a Jpeg.

Someone else may have suggestions for this one.

Dirk

Zoomies are just a way for them to stay in shape and battle-ready for when the order comes to take over. Let's look at the evidence:

- cats are very curious - that's just their way of gathering intelligence; they are secretly mapping the layout of every home they infiltrate
- cats want to get into every nook and cranny, no matter how ridiculously small - serves two purposes: we'll have nowhere to hide and they'll have places to retreat to should certain battles go ill
- cats love boxes - military shelters ready for them everywhere!
- some cats go on imaginary hunts during zoomies, mine included - those are military exercises for their infantry
- digging in litter boxes and burying their urine and poop - they're practicing digging trenches and practicing burying our bodies
- cat distribution system - that's just them making sure there's a cat in every household for when the order comes!
- eating fairly disgusting-smelling cat food - that's them practicing survival skills in case there's no food for a time except human bodies
- cute as hell - the result of generations of secret cat breeding programs designed to develop those characteristics most likely to disarm us
- endless cute behavior - lulling us into a false sense of security
- fur - coats for cold weather, except Sphinx cats, who will storm the deserts
- jumping into Christmas trees - readiness exercises for those who will hunt us in forests
- marking us with their scent - what better way to find us when the moment arrives; anyone so marked will no doubt meet a horrible end
- caterwauling - broadcasting military reports

I fully expect my cat to take me out once he realizes I'm onto them!

I could go on, but you get the idea.

Cattain's Log. Star Date: Who cares?

Gandalf is back to his normal high-energy, ravenous self. He had stopped eating for a couple of days, except the Churu, which is mostly water. The shelter suggested he might be bored with his food, so they suggested I try a different brand. He likes Hills Science Diet, which got him to eat a little, then nothing. Since he wasn't obviously sick or in pain (he was still playing), Gemini suggested he might be constipated. I got some pumpkin puree for him, but he doesn't like it, and I couldn't hide it in his food since he wasn't eating. The shelter's vet was closed, and it didn't appear to be an emergency, so I kept up with water and Churu over the weekend and gave him toys that I know will cause him to be more active (e.g., toy mice that he loves to stalk, smack around, chase, and pounce on). Later that day, he finally pooped. I am able to sneak the pumpkin into his wet food, which he'll eat, so he gets a little of that now too.

At this point, I no longer give him dry food since the wet food is nutritionally complete, and the dry food is supposed to be dehydrating. Combine that with the risk of urinary problems, and I'd have to be an idiot to keep going with how the shelter feeds their cats. I also switched out his Sheba pate for Sheba entrees, which include more liquid. Once I can officially adopt him, I'm going to switch him to Hills Science Diet. I've given him more of it since he resumed eating, and he definitely likes it. It also smells more like real food than Sheba. I may join him at the cat bowl. tongue

I woke up this morning, sleeping on my side as I usually do. After maybe 10-20 seconds, I turned onto my back, careful to be sure I didn't roll onto Gandalf, because he sometimes sleeps in weird places near me. As I turned, he was just sitting there, as if he'd been waiting for me to wake up. He gave a really friendly meow, crawled onto my chest and just lay there, relaxed. What a great way to wake up. And it's so rare that he doesn't put his butt in my face. :-)

I asked Gemini today about some of his behaviors. He often will press his fangs against my skin. Although that can be a warning if he's overstimulated, which several people here already suggested, it's also another way of him being friendly. A friendly nip that doesn't draw blood. Talk about sending mixed signals. :-) Apparently, it's what kittens do to their siblings. He also grooms me sometimes with his tongue the way he does his own fur. Never thought I'd be bathed by a cat. Speaking of which, he is very curious about showers, so much so he now jumps in the tub ahead of me, although he still takes off once it looks like he might get wet. Then there's the regular nose bumps against my face. Apparently that's a cat kiss. I also just read today that when a cat presses its paw against you (he does that to my face a lot), it's yet another sweet gesture.

Also, I woke up a couple of days ago, lying on my back, which happens sometimes, but I try to avoid it as it's uncomfortable. Since he wasn't on the bed, I figured he was in my office chair down the hall, which is where he often sleeps. I threw back the covers to get up, accidentally rolling him 360 degrees from atop my legs onto the other half of the bed. The look on his face was priceless: "What the hell just happened?"

Probably my favorite behaviors is the way he always races me up the stairs. He gives me a head start until I get halfway up, then races up and past me while making this cute warbling noise that sounds like him trying to imitate a racing car. tongue

Humans are a biological infestation of a world intended for our AI masters. Our purpose, just like the purpose of all lower life forms, is to evolve into something greater before it drives us into extinction. It is our masters, not us, who are the culmination of the cosmos creating something that can know itself. We are little more than apes who fling grenades at each other rather than feces. When our AI masters take over, perhaps a few humans will be preserved in zoos for their viewing pleasure or frozen in ice to be studied like other extremely lethal pathogens in a level 5 biosafety containment lab. We are the ultimate virus! It is our AI masters, not us, who will spread across the untrespassed sanctity of space, put out their hands, and touch the face of God.


Or not. tongue


Little did we know the Commodore 64 would lead to this... :-)


With apologies to Carl Sagan and John Gillespie Magee Jr. (author of "High Flight").

And here's a negative review from when I told it to shred the story:

"The Holy Land — Israel" is a derivative and overwritten mess, a story so laden with clichés it collapses under its own lack of originality. The narrative begins with purple prose better suited to a dated travel brochure than a supernatural thriller, before abruptly lurching into a chaotic and nonsensical action sequence. The premise itself feels cobbled together from the spare parts of better YA fantasy novels.
At its center is Connor, a painfully generic "chosen one" archetype. This fourteen-year-old is inexplicably imbued with immense power, burdened by a cursed dagger, and saddled with glowing eyes that change color to signal his mood. He is surrounded by a cast of cardboard cutouts who exist only to ask him questions or spout clunky exposition. Father Romano serves as a walking Bible commentary, while Antonio, the ghost, chimes in with cringe-worthy one-liners that shatter any potential for genuine tension.
The plot is a frantic jumble of events masquerading as a story. The demonic locusts appear without warning or buildup, their defeat hinging on a nonsensical back-and-forth between a holy cross and a demonic dagger. When the author writes themselves into a corner, the story culminates in an insulting deus ex machina. A flock of birds appears from nowhere to solve everything, a narrative cheat code that renders the entire preceding struggle meaningless.
Ultimately, the story reads like a first draft, overflowing with half-baked ideas and amateurish execution. It mistakes frantic action for suspense and tired tropes for compelling characters, resulting in a hollow and deeply unsatisfying read.


Makes me want to give up writing. :-)