Thanks everybody! These are all good comments. I don't want to put in too many because it would be annoying, but I need a few.
2 2015-10-29 17:21:38
Topic: Sneezing (5 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
When reading, do you prefer to read:
Phoebe sneezed.
OR
"Ah-ah-choo!"
I use both in my story, but what is your take? I need comments/suggestions/experiences.
3 2015-10-18 16:14:22
Re: Feedback (5 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Scenario 1: Yes, it's plausible, by why only have 'one' steamy romance? How and why is the international guy to meet the local sheriff?
Scenario 2: Yes this works too, but that's a lot of kids to be moving around with. Are they moving in a camper pretending to be highly religious? That could make it more interesting and delay any physically intimate moments (when the campers rocking don't come knocking).
4 2015-10-15 21:30:00
Re: New member? Introduce yourself! (59 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Glad to have you join us, Saina! This is a great place to start because we can learn a lot from others mistakes. Begin posting, review others works, and participate in the discussions.
5 2015-09-17 15:41:45
Re: I can't finish novels anymore ... is it just me?! (12 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
There is no cure, BUT I've found that paying into Kindle Unlimited (KU) I can read without guilt of having paid for horrible books. The way Amazon set up the payment to the authors is percentage based (they only get paid for the pages read). I love this! Hopefully it will force writers to create quality work. Since I bought into KU, I've started hundreds of books that I've turned back in after only reading the first chapter (some made it to chapter 3 before I was disgruntled). I've also found some fabulous authors and read all their books. Since joining KU, I'm hooked and wont read any books that don't participate. The funny thing is that I can tolerate grammar issues easier than I can idiocy. It really ticks me off when the hero/heroine is too stupid to live - makes me want to kill them off. There is a huge self published listing of authors whoes work is not worth reading past the first chapter and it gives self published authors a bad rap.
6 2015-08-20 18:56:06
Re: sex and good grammar (5 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Laughing really hard! Love this!!!
7 2015-08-18 19:58:38
Re: emotional scenes (62 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This is what great stories are made of. The hard part is ensuring that what is in your head actually makes it to the paper, otherwise, the moment will be wasted on the reader. Writing what you actually think and reading what you actually wrote, not what you think you wrote (the mind loves to play tricks on us all). That's one of the great things about TNBW is that you get the reader effect.
8 2015-08-02 14:10:41
Re: Things guys notice first (5 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Let's twist this to what do women notice first about a guy. Here's my summary:
1. looks (dress sense, grooming, body, skin, hair, eyes) - yes, women take in all this at once
2. smile (teeth),
3. demeanor (mannerisms),
4. accent (voice),
5. posture,
6. smell,
7. who he's with
http://www.uncoverdiscover.com/facts/th … pression1/
http://thoughtcatalog.com/alice-l-carte … -admit-to/
9 2015-08-01 13:18:26
Re: Harlequin's So You Think You Can Write Contest hosted on Wattpad (6 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Yes, this is an annual contest. There are a good number of RWA (Romance Writers of America) chapters that have contest annually that use publishers and agents as the final judges, too. I organized one for my local chapter this year and the editors requested submits from the top two in each category. Submitting through contest is a great way to gauge response to your story without the pressure of directly submitting to an editor or agent. Plus, usually only the first few chapters are sent which gives you time to work on the remainder of the book while you wait.
11 2015-07-31 15:16:43
Re: POV slip or not? (13 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
I have a dialogue between two characters: Admiral Windsor, the POV character, and Admiral Gaius Lupus, her deadly nemesis.
Windsor saw Lupus bristle at the use of his first name. She suppressed an urge to smile.
Dirk
Consider: Windsor suppressed the urge to smile at having ruffled Lupus feathers... or some other such statement...
12 2015-07-28 17:55:39
Topic: Looking for an Editor or Agent (0 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Here is a listing of editors and agents looking for submissions. Read through carefully and make sure your manuscript fits what they are looking for before submitting. Good luck!!
13 2015-07-28 13:00:24
Re: American English vs Other countries (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Bahahaha! I'm laughing my head off! Thanks for the entertainment.
14 2015-07-22 20:45:14
Re: I'm no longer active BUT... (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
How sad to see you go, Ingrid. Your stories are awesome. Thanks for pointing me towards TNBW!
Philisha
15 2015-07-10 19:46:37
Re: #askELJames (13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Janet Taylor-Perry, please share more of the disturbing erotica. We could all use the learning lesson.
16 2015-07-10 19:39:34
Re: Read a good book again for a change! :) (1 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I read a good one that had a twist at the end I didn't see coming. The author did well on the whole story and I couldn't put it down. Saving Evangeline by Nancy Cain. It's a paranormal but well worth the read.
17 2015-06-29 13:40:42
Re: Catfights in romance - good idea or a bad idea? (10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I stumbled on a Jerry Springer show this weekend ... Philisha's idea is way better!
OMG, Janet! I can't believe you stumbled on that show! Talk about a train wreck that could be the basis for many a dark romance.
18 2015-06-28 01:53:06
Re: Northern Skies - Janet! (520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I would think that if James is left in charge, there would be others that could be sent to take messages. OR if the journey there and back is easily made in a few hours, he could do it himself. Depends on location and timing.
19 2015-06-28 01:49:16
Re: What is happening?! (8 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Hi Janet!
Glad the move went well. I know that it had to be stressful and I'm glad that you're still on TNBW. I've taken a hiatus as well and have really missed having time to read, review, and participate in groups. I started reading published stories and it's become an obsession that I need to break. I like to consider it research because less than half of what I've read was of a print quality - more authors need to join this site and learn grammar, proofing, etc... Glad to hear others are having lags in their writing too.
Philisha
20 2015-06-28 01:42:39
Re: Catfights in romance - good idea or a bad idea? (10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Personally I think it depends on the story. I've read some 'dark' romance, light romance, heavy romance, and it could possibly fit, especially in the 'dark' romance. Let me define what I mean by 'dark.' It's not the color of skin but the emotion evoked. Recently I read a story, Three Two One by JA Huss, that focused on a girl who'd been kidnapped into the slave trade and had to be reconditioned to understand it was wrong. It was a romance and very dark. So, if there is a cat fight in a story, I'm sure it would help build to the emotional peak/change of the protagonist. The goal is to take the main character and somewhere have a pivotal point in their life that they have to overcome. The more emotion the better, but don't make the main character someone that the reader hates - there has to be some redeeming qualities or mystery to keep the reader going.
I've read stories where there were mild cat fights that mostly involved throwing food, pillows, mud, or something equally harmless where in the end they fall down in laughter after they've screamed it all out. The more ridiculous the items thrown, the more gripping it all is when the meat of the argument is reached. Take for example the pivotal point from Steele Magnolia's. When they're in the graveyard screaming at each other and someone pushes Wheeza forward and says, 'use her as a punching bag, we've all wanted to hit her.' The instant flop from heartbreaking emotion to laughter is something people never forget and will make your story memorable.
All in all, only have what you need to tell the story without fluff and filler to meet a word count quota. There is no right or wrong as long as it pushes the story forward instead of taking it to left field.
21 2015-06-12 20:48:58
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Having the most recent comments be where the link to the thread takes us would be greatly appreciated. Especially for some of those topics that go on for multiple pages. If the whole thread could be collapsed by commenter that would help as well, similar to how how Google groups or Yahoo groups can collapse a thread to show each individual as a line line, allowing the individual to collapse or expand.
22 2015-05-31 14:22:46
Re: How much truth do you put into your writing? (8 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
That sounds like a Clint Eastwood line, Mike. Or was that Jack Nicholson? Anyway, There is always a person that I either know or see that helps me create a character. I have to get out of my head and into theirs to write, otherwise, all my heroines would be me.
23 2015-05-31 14:10:39
Re: How much truth do you put into your writing? (2 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I always put parts of me and my experience into my stories. It might be subtle attitude, thoughts, or things that have happened. Or maybe someone's pissed me off and they're the next person in the story I kill. Writing can be therapeutic because the story builds within my mind and until I put it on page, I cant enjoy others company. When I struggle emotionally or physically, I put it on paper as though its a story because it helps me solve it. Whether or not it makes it into one of my manuscripts is yet to be seen.
The father character in Earthly Force is a picture of my dad, he is the character. By using him as the example, I could build his voice, appearance, mannerisms, even down to what he drives. To create the dialogue between the brothers in EF, I observed how my husband and his friends poke at each other all the time. Though still fictional on all levels, because paranormal can't be real, the story pulls in real personalities and hopefully grabs the reader. I love to see real things/occurrences in life and ask 'What if?' Some of the best science fiction/paranormal makes me question could it be real? Look at Stephen King's writing: Pet Cemetery was enough of a perverted truth to make one wonder if it could be real; Greenmile; The Shining; and on and on. All of those made me wonder. Though my writing is in no comparison to Kings, I use his style as inspiration for my writing.
24 2015-05-18 17:15:56
Re: Essential Elements of Writing Crime (5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Definitely the characters and how they build the story, shaping our thoughts about the environment. Something as simple as a perceived mystery that turns out to be quite simple, or a complex mystery with lots of twist and turns - either works great as long as the main characters pull me into the story instead of thinking they are too stupid to live while chanting for the villain.
25 2015-05-18 17:12:05
Re: Northern Skies - Janet! (520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Glad you're back to posting again! You've made some really good changes to your manuscript. Stepping back, reading others work, then picking up the MS again really does work. I'm stuck in semi-edit mode and haven't moved forward yet.