Hope they find the problem njc and you're back to your old self again!
And just for you, I should have the next chapter up in a moment. But don't worry about reviewing unless you're really up to it and have nothing better to do!
Hope they find the problem njc and you're back to your old self again!
And just for you, I should have the next chapter up in a moment. But don't worry about reviewing unless you're really up to it and have nothing better to do!
Janet, I added "mate" to the chapter, as you suggested. It's hilarious. I only use it once at the end when the AI is pissed off about the lack of respect. It says: Listen, Mate, I've asked you repeatedly to refer to me as Queen Aussie...
You're my hero! I think that spot is perfect!
Sounds about right. Although where I'm at, there's only one queen, Queen Aussie!
Mmm, I like the idea of Windsor giving him some spine, it also seems to tie in well with the rest of the story. So there's one vote for that option for what it's worth!
How many words Dirk?
that would be like trying to ignore the sun
Or a thorn in your shoe?
Awh K, I'm just giving you crap because I like you!
Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:I've left additional comments on your replies Dirk. I ignored K of course!
Thanks, Janet.
For the comments or for ignoring the sun?!
No probs! Hope I'm helping more than anything else.
Duct tape *which is two words, but clearly no one is counting*
I've left additional comments on your replies Dirk. I ignored K of course!
O shit. njc, I hope you get better soon! I was also home last week for three days with a cold which is also because I've been working to many hours and weekends, but you sound really serious.
Don't worry about us - we'll be here. You just get better.
I was just thinking, I normally hesitate to advice this, but in your case, I think it will capture the Australian culture that Brain embraces with such enthusiasm perfectly - you need to work one "mate" in there, i.e. replace an "Admiral, please call me Aussie" with "Mate, call me Aussie" if that makes sense.
I'm very happy to know I'll, I mean, Aussie will be back!
Jangaroo is very original though!
*waves like a wanker*
Looking forward to chapter 2. I hope I'll be able to keep up this time around.
Norm d'Plume wrote:Tick tock. I don't see Charles writing cameos for you. Unless you're Abbix. She's in deep Bantha poodoo.
Actually, I think she's deep in the bantha, without a banthyscape.
I'm almost out of the bantha!
Amy and njc are next!
LOL
Christian pig killer? I might be able use that. And don't think I'm kidding. :-)
You never kid!
Praise the Lord and pass the ham around the table?
LOL Amy!!!
ps - at least I don't have to stand on my head, sure my screen and fingers are on fire from all the scrolling, but 'tis a small price to pay.
I've always accessed it from the home page and scrolling down. Be gentle, I'm old and do thing my way!
It wasn't easy to choose but I have promised him to look at Max as soon as it was done. The guy writing cameos is top of the list this weekend!
I have no problem
I'm still planning the rest of v3.
I'm still planning reviewing v3. I'm reviewing something for Charles first, and then I'll get back to normal again with the rest of you.
Does anyone know what happens in the following scenario: if I review someone, and they respond, and I go back into the review to leave more feedback, will they be notified about the additional comments? It's my impression the system doesn't support that. Correct?
You have to let them know, the system doesn't, no. I think I'm going to get a lot of surprises when I go back and re-read my reviews to start revising.
How was that, Janet? Did I get everybody?
*snorts Diet Coke*
*make note not to drink and read*
*cleans keyboard*
You made my day! And yep, you're still doing a speech at my second wedding. Since that isn't going well (good news for Mr. C - I think), I think I should start preparing you for Plan B - writing my speeches as an award winning famous Romance with a capital R author.
I think you have everybody. Rebecca has been quiet in the forums lately, but she's still alive because she continues to review my writing making brilliant suggestions. That's why Plan B is a definite go - all you guys gives me great ideas and I'm going to look so good. That's also why you'd have to write my speeches - I need to keep up the farce.
Did you 'off' the first husband, or just planning ahead? ;-)
Never hurts to be prepared!
You've come to the right place! Everyone has their own strengths when it comes to reviewing writing. This is definitely a good group to belong to.
Just a quick bit of TNBW advice. We tend to reciprocate. Sometimes there's a miss or two, but for most, if you review someone's writing, they will return the favour and that's how it all begins.
If you need any pointers, just let us know!
Hey Akhere! Welcome!
AMMMYYYYYYYY!!!! It's time for another team Medieval synopsis of who's who?!
*jumps up and down*
Amy is so doing a speech at my second wedding!
Who are the rest of you who don't pipe up in here? I need new cannon fodder. List:
a) Your name/wip
b) Favourite genre
c) First character ever written and their modus operandi
I've been pretty absent these days because work, so I can just as well introduce myself.
a) Janet and my WIP is NorthernSkies (without a space because BAD google)
b) ROMANCE!!!!! Historical Romance specifically
c) Catherine - she cares about other people and gets into trouble when she doesn't stop and think before helping others
ps - you guys are crazy!