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(107 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

A mystery in which the body is found in a room locked on the inside, or by extension, any impossible mystery.  Example: A magician enters a cabinet on stage.  The cabinet opens; the magician is gone ... and does not reappear.  Instead, he is found later hanging in the machinery above the stage.  (One of Joseph Commings's mysteries.)

The locked-room mystery has an entry in Wikipedia.  The first two Henry Merrivale stories were locked room (The Plague Court Murders and The White Priory Murder).  Here's a compilation: https://www.amazon.com/Mammoth-Locked-M … ocked+room

A fair number of Edward Hoch's Sam Hawthorne mysteries are of the locked-room variety.

Completed reviews of A Cartel's Revenge, Chs 3&4.

Oops.  Your Profile page 'features' the other version.  Future reviews will be on A-O .

Completed reviews of Matt's Kruges, Chs 6&7

Anent the review reply: Tell us, either in the flashback or the chapter before, why the bracelet has survived this long.

Your last chapter has two obvious flaws.  First, the wrong title.  It should be =The Beginning=.  Second, you need some hint that the story goes on.  More in the review.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Qeeted.

I think that the original 'Jaylene falling' section could be made into a ninety-word prologue, perhaps italicized, for Dictates.  Kha waking and the brief discussion can serve as the opening of Mandates (followed by Kha's letter to Anver).  Acts needs only a few words to tie Kha's condition to surviving the disaster at Earthwound.

Sadly, we'll need Leia's ghost.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

'twirped' ?

Added a comment on Ch54.

Edit:  Ch55, too.

Edit:  I've been thinking about the connections between your B1, B2, and B3 for the reader starting them in whatever order.  Opening two of them at Earthwound and Acts with Anver trying to figure out how to save Kha will help the reader move from book to book.  You should also have a canonical order for the first three.

https://www.google.com/amp/s/madgeniusc … your-muse/
https://madgeniusclub.com/2016/12/20/li … our-muse2/

Hydroplane, into pier.

Landing Ship, Dock?

Regarding your comment on the last review: that was your muse.  (Google 'Myrtle the Muse')

That last scene is almost Tolkienesque in its drama, though I don't think Profesor T. would have resorted to the cliffhanger.

Finished two-part review on Jube's new Chapter 15.

Got 'em.  Quick read has me thinking fast execution and uneven pacing, but I'll give them a better look a little late.

The system is multilayered, like mechanics above chemistry above nuclear physics.  Only not quite that.

The costs aren't inherent.  This is another aspect of The Covenant.  When that first sorcerer-king exposed the Voids and allowed the sorcerous Elements to flow from them in great quantity, he set the stage for Hobbsian chaos of a nuclear kind.  But the concentration of knowledge held this back.  That was broken, more or less, with the Sundering, and bounds set on the use of sorcerous power with The Covenant, which also divided sorcerers from other people to a degree.

And that is about to come undone, helped by people who crave freedom from their bounds, and by people who don't believe anything bad could happen.

So: Sanderson is right.  But what if someone breaks the rules?

And there are dangers of handling more power than you can use.  Melayne's going to flirt with disaster trying to find her old strength.

Reviewed CJD's Chapter 61.

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

This infection was ER material, period.  You're not going to find IV bags of antibiotics at anything smaller.

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I'm on the mend, K, and scheduled for discharge after breakfast.  I need to verify that the ID specialist wrote the extra three days on the prescription.

Giacomo Giammatteo has a self-publishing info website, http://nomistakespublishing.com/ (and a book to sell).  Looks like good details.  (I read one of his novels.  Not bad.  Not quite the style for me, but good, interesting character work.  I can imagine some people I know being followers.)

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Short report:

Last Sunday night I got hit by chills and fever again.  They were mostly over by the end of Monday, but I was in no shape to go anywhere, even though I could see another leg infection starting.  It was late afternoon Tuesday by the time I could get out, and the hospital's ER was recovering from a wave of admissions.  At about 22:40 antibiotics were prescribed, IV.  Unfortunately, I'm a very hard vein stick.  They got the two sets of culture bottles and four other vials, but setting an IV required finding a vein angel on duty.

That took until almost 01:30.  By 03:00 the exhausted staff was getting the place back in order--but I hadn't gotten my antibiotics.  I raised a gentle fuss (the staff had worked over 8 hours without a break) and got the first bag around 03:40--five hours after I got into the ED proper.  And my leg was five hours worse.  The change was very visible.

I spent my first day waiting for a bed in an overflow room down the hall from Emergency, sharing a couple of hall bathrooms with Pediatric Emergency.

The first time I went to use one I walked in on a woman with her kid.  She hadn't locked the door.  Then I found the WC's misinstalled, so that my private parts dangled in the water when I used them.  They were both the same way.  I have to wonder if men ever use those bathrooms--or are meant to.

In that busy room I didn't get much sleep.  I got a bed upstairs just before dinner.  Since then I've been sharing a room with a very noisy fellow (awake, asleep, and in between) and so got no sleep Wednesday night.  I've mostly caught up now.  (Maybe, just maybe, the fellow's fever just broke for good.)

I put my chances of discharge tomorrow at a bit over 50%.  I'm supposed to get a quick check by a vascular surgeon, and that could keep me in too, until it's too late to get the discharge paperwork through.  (Nobody wants to cause a delay but nobody knows what's waiting on them.  Management is denied the right incentives.  If people start lawyering up and refusing to pay for the extra day, management might get the right incentives.  I don't believe our current system with insurance gives that right incentive.)

I have a promise from the Infectious Diseases specialist of three extra days on top of the oral antibiotic they'll discharge me with, to be set aside and stockpiled so I have something to take right away when chills and fever strike again.  We don't expect it to completely block an infection, but to give me time to get in so that a quick round of IV treatment will cover it.

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I've been tied up by things, things that involved a great deal of hurry-up-and-wait and may involve more.  But I'll try to get some reviews done in the next 36 hours.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Norm d'Plume wrote:

I looked up bigly. It's a word! My theory is that Trump, really a Democrat, is actually brilliant and putting on a reality show while secretly destroying the Republican Party.

Or maybe Trump is sick of seeing politicians get away with things that Even Trump Would Go To Jail For?  Then this is his revenge on the whole hideous mutant strain?

Jeez, Trump the Shark, will ya?