I'm guessing Solar deleted it. i can't see it unless I click on the notification email.
26 2016-09-13 14:14:17
Re: Disappearing and strange review (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
27 2016-09-12 21:57:43
Re: Disappearing and strange review (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
No, this was on chapter 3....and I'm pretty sure you didn't write this review :
it is good to read. the discussion are in details. you can easily make out what the author wants to communicate. but it has too many discussion. every points need not to told. like sure, looking forward to see you. it can be just put in by saying just at affarmation and move on. every dicussion is streched to make it look big. at one point you feel bored to read every line and read the answer which is sure. it could have been put in much better way. none the less good effort in writing the book.
28 2016-09-12 13:05:32
Topic: Disappearing and strange review (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I got an email saying I had an inline review. When I came to the site I didn't have anything new. There isn't one there although my statistics say there is one. So I clicked on the email link and then could access the review. It was very strange and made no sense. Plus there were no inline comments.
Bimmy
29 2016-09-11 01:20:14
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:
bimmy wrote:There. I fixed it for ya'll!
Bimmy
No!!!! LOL This fixes absolutely nothing!!! No way I'm touching that, not even with a long pole.
Haha!!!
My husband walked in after I had googled "sexy fat men". He's seriously concerned about me now. Lol!
Bimmy
30 2016-09-10 23:05:10
Re: Not Authorized (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I deleted that because I couldn't get the link to worn I posted in the topic. Sorry!
Bimmy
31 2016-09-10 19:12:02
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
There. I fixed it for ya'll!
Bimmy
32 2016-09-10 15:40:32
Re: describing a character's looks (4 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
I think it's fine. The problem comes when you have two or three or more descriptions like that in a row in your first chapter and it starts feeling kind of like reading a list. So doing it once at a great time is no big deal. Just be aware of where similar descriptionsituation are and space them out or use different means.
Bimmy
33 2016-09-10 15:36:04
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Well...even if you don't review me girls...at least I made you. ...umm...smile.
Lol!
Bimmy
34 2016-09-10 14:48:53
Re: I can't sleep because. ... (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I don't know. I'm better now. Finally got to the chiropractor.
Bimmy
35 2016-09-09 19:09:56
Re: I can't sleep because. ... (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
OH! I can sit and type fine. I just can't sleep well. Yeah...I'm too young for this kind of back pain. Chiropractor helps bunches!!
Bimmy
36 2016-09-09 13:01:14
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Such a lovely place
37 2016-09-09 12:59:10
Re: I can't sleep because. ... (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Lol! That's cute! We call them "hell a bays" sometimes.
38 2016-09-08 18:59:01
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Agro tourism
39 2016-09-08 16:51:31
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Thanks Janet! If you don't mind straight romance we can reciprocate! I don't want to be a burden though if you're overextended.
Bimmy
40 2016-09-08 16:49:33
Re: I can't sleep because. ... (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Tirz....I was dreaming about writing. I couldn't control it! Lol!
41 2016-09-08 12:36:56
Re: I can't sleep because. ... (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
They're round....they roll....but it takes a bit to get then moving. Lol!
42 2016-09-08 09:48:41
Topic: I can't sleep because. ... (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I hurt my back unloading twenty, 700lb round bales by hand on Saturday. My medication wore off and I keep dreaming I'm writing and trying to incorporate back pain into my MC and it's not working. So I'm writing and erasing, writing and erasing until I wake up in frustration and pain...find a semi comfortable position, go to sleep and repeat.
Fun night.
Bimmy
43 2016-09-08 09:42:00
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:
Just went to add Aidon Ice to my reading list ... so far, A+ for the cover!
Lol!
44 2016-09-08 09:40:58
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Janet (AJ) Reid wrote:
Hey Bimmy
I'm still around! LOL But I'm maxed out at the moment, with life and work I'm not even getting to the reviews I owe never mind taking on new work. BUT ..... I know that you've done a heap of very helpful reviews on my first draft, so I do owe you. All I can promise is to put you on the list, because I agree, apart from enjoying what you're reading/reviewing, it's also helpful to have eyes go over your writing that knows the genre. Not saying I'm an expert, but I've been reading Romance novels most of my life, so I have a few decades worth of material to go by and it should help. So yeah, practice patience while I work through the long list of reviews I owe, but I'll really try to get to you as soon as possible.
And welcome back! You've been missed!
Janet xx
Hey Girl!
I saw you post the other day how busy you were so I didn't even go back to your story thinking you wouldn't even see it. When you're ready I'd love to look at it again!
Bimmy
45 2016-09-08 02:54:10
Re: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Hey Karin,
I'll read anything! I just don't want people who don't enjoy non fantasy romance to feel obligated. Nothing worse than having to read something you hate. Trust me....I judged a romance novel competition this summer. The only rule being you have to finish the whOle thing. Lol! I'll take a look at yours too!
Thanks!
Bimmy
46 2016-09-08 01:15:02
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Wood pecker
47 2016-09-07 16:21:32
Topic: Who to review? (25 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Hey guys!
I'm posting my contemporary romance novel here. Right now it's called Aidon Ice...probably going to change that.
Anyway, as most of my network is mired in scifi or fantasy, and I've been out for a long while, I'd like to gain some romance focused folks. IE...I'm not getting return critiques. LOL! Who has a romance novel they would like me to look at? I'm there!
Bimmy
48 2016-09-06 17:17:34
Re: Potential spammer (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
njc wrote:
bimmy wrote:I feel left out. Am I not important enough to be spammed?
Bimmy
Well, they'll spam ya when you're trying to be so good
They'll spam ya just a-like they said they would
They'll spam ya when you're tryin' to go home
Then they'll spam ya when you're there all alone
But I would not feel so all alone
Everybody must get spamed.
Hahahaha!!!
49 2016-09-06 16:44:15
Re: Potential spammer (20 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I feel left out. Am I not important enough to be spammed?
Bimmy
50 2016-09-06 03:04:23
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Madonna
