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(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

I love children's books too! I've just read The Spiderwick Chronicles and found them amazing!

You're lovely, Sol! Thanks for the hard work. Don't pay attention to those who say the site is difficult to understand, or cumbersome, or that stuff. It's awesome!

Kiss,

Gacela.

453

(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Welcome back!

454

(44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

I must say that I do find the inline reviews quite valuable. As I stated before, they point at specific parts of the story much better than the regular reviews. It actually depends on which type of feedback you're looking for. If you're looking for general comments, the inline review is not for you. However, for those looking for comments indicating where the story is weak, which phrases need to be reworded to work better, which word usage is not fitting the story, etc., the inline review comes quite useful.

As a reviewer I find it amazing. I can make the comments while I'm reading, which I think is better for the author because then I'm giving my first impressions, much in the way in which the reader would feel it, rather than making the comments after reading the whole chapter, and even after reading what other reviewers commented, thus biasing my own judgement. Because at the end of the inline review there's a place where I can still  make a "regular" review adding general comments, I find the inline reviews quite useful, both when I give or receive them.

Clicking on each  comment afterwards to check each one is no biggie. It's not that you have to click every word of the Enciclopaedia Britannica!

Kiss

Gacela.

455

(44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

I think that the benefit of the in line review belongs to the one being reviewed. From my standpoint, in line reviews are more detailed, because they point exactly to the lines/words that have a problem/issue/require polishing. So, the final benefit is for the one being reviewed, who must pay for such benefit. I'm not sure which is the benefit for the reviewer (it's only more work, which doesn't mean I dislike providing them, I'm only stating facts).

I agree with Temple. Somebody who has been a free member since about 8-9 years ago is biased and will always ask for more free benefits using crafty arguments. This is not a free editing service. I wonder if there are people of that sort around here.

Kiss,

Gacela.

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(44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

Norm:

You need to keep something under the sleeve or else nobody would be interested in becoming a premium member. What should be done is that, in a piece of work is published by a non-premium writer, inline reviews must be blocked for such piece.

Kiss,

Gacela.

Dear all:

Men Are Like Cars, my short story winner of the 2013 TNBW contest "Make us laugh" has just been published in Smashwords for free. I'd appreciate very much if any of you are so kind to download it and leave a comment--if you enjoy it, of course. My main interest is to start building a name before I self-publish my novel Amber Eyes which is still in the process of being workshoped here.

Hope the link works. If not, please copy and paste it in your browser's window.

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/509552

It will be soon available in Amazon too. As soon as it is, I'll post the link. This short story will always be available for free.

Kiss,

Gacela

458

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Ready, set...

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol:

I know this idea might have quite a low priority because it's only a nice to have, and I'm sure that not all authors will take advantage of it. However, for the ones like Norm d'Plume, Karin Rita and yours truly, it'd be very helpful to have some way to mark those reviews which we've already gone through and incorporate/dump in our novel.

The old site had nothing of the sort, so it's not that I'm asking to  bring back to life something dead and buried.  It's one of the enhancement that make the current TNBW so XXI century and useful to its authors.

Would it be possible to add a little, inconspicuous check mark both to regular and in-line review?

You know I belong to the group who thinks that the current site is awesome and prefer it over the old one. Pleeease?

Kiss,

Gacela.

460

(61 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Some advantages of the points system (according to my personal experience):

1. Because you need to points to post, you are forced to review. So, the points system encourages reviewing. Of course, you may prefer to review the work of those authors who have reciprocated you, or with whom you regularly reciprocate. The latter can be done without the points system, so somebody may assume points are useless. Please, bear with me.

2. According to SOL's secret formula, you receive less points for reviewing than the ones you need to post. E.g., if posting 1000 words costs 5 points, you only receive 1.5 for reviewing a work 1000 words long. The proportion is not exact because only SOL has access to his top secret formula, but you've got the idea. My personal belief is that when you review you get one fifth of the points you need to publish, give or take. It may seem unfair, but the result is positive because, for every chapter you publish, you need to review from three to four chapters/short stories/poems. I.e., the points system encourages wider reviewing.

If the system pay the points 1 to 1, you'd only need to review 1 chapter more or less your chapter's length to to publish yours. If there were no points, you'd only review one chapter of some fellow writer and wait until she would review one of your chapters in exchange. Any of these two methods encourage less reviewing.

3. If you don't have enough points to publish your next chapter, and if you've already reviewed all the work/the work you like of the authors you regularly reciprocate with, the points systems forces you to review anybody else's work, whether they reciprocate or not. If they don't reciprocate, you may never review their work again, but not necessarily. If you need points, you may continue reviewing only because you need the points, or because you've just  bumped into a story you like. You might have never started this sort of "fishing"--looking for random stories to review--if the point system do not exist (Why for? Unless you specifically want to look for something new. Without points you can publish, then review your friends' work, and sit until one of them reciprocates). Once again, the points system encourages reviewing. 

I'm sure people will say that there are many authors publishing without points who are receiving reviews. I'm also sure that there are authors in the points system receiving no reviews. It means that neither system--points or no points--guarantees anything. However, it's my belief that the points system encourages reviews because of the above reasons.

Kiss,

Gacela

461

(2 replies, posted in Young Adult Writers)

Merry Christmas to all of you! My best wishes that all your wishes become true, and that hard times may be the prelude to happier days.

Kiss,

Gacela.

462

(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I like it. I bookshelf the works of the authors I'm reading and it's easy to access them. Even if I miss when the author posted a new chapter, once or twice a week, or even everyday, I can browse my bookshelf and check whether new chapters have been published. Once I'm done with the book, I can always remove it from my bookshelf.

Kiss

Gacela

463

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

1000 words should be enough for a comment pertaining a single line in the chapter. If anybody writes 10 comments 1000 words long each, they would end with a comments way longer than the chapter itself!


Kiss,

Gacela.

464

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

You made me laugh John, really laugh!

Kiss

Gacela

465

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Dear all:

Some time has passed since the new site was launched. So far, I think all of us have had enough time to "taste" the new site. Many people have reported bugs, complained, and compared it to the old one. To all of them Sol has answered fast and solved everything he could. Not everyone can be pleased, but I think none has grounds to keep complaining. It took some time to learn to navigate the new site, but, being fair, it was no biggie.

In witness whereof... I want to take some time to recognise Sol's great work. From my standpoint, this new site is way better than the old one. It's easier to communicate and easier to manage our work, there are new capabilities, it looks and feels more like a XXI century site than an old non-GUI webpage, and lots more. Sol struggled a lot at first, but he was fast correcting the bugs and listening to suggestions, adopting many of them very fast.

Sol, you've done an amazing job! Kudos for that. This new site is way too cool. I'm enjoying it much more than the other one and it's easier for me to link with other writers. It's helping me a lot improving my writing. Well, TNBW always had, but the new and improved site is helping me even more.

Well done, Sol!

Kiss,

Gacela.

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(41 replies, posted in Young Adult Writers)

Dean penang:

It seems you're already a very experienced self-publisher. Of course, your books are awesome, which also helps a lot, but it also helps your marketing knowledge.

Kiss,

Gacela.

467

(61 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Temple Wang:

I don't think this bloke Charles drinks Chivas. Maybe some cheap, methanol-rich bourbon produced by a moonshiner, but not Scotch! Not even within a dialogue tag.

Kiss,

Gacela.

468

(61 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

That's what I'm saying. Without the points, people only post and do not reciprocate.

Kiss,

Gacela.

469

(61 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

The problem is that, without the points system, there may be little motivation to read other people's work. I mean, the point system forces you to earn the points by reviewing other people's work before you're able to publish yours. Without the points, you can publish whatever you want and sit until somebody decides to check your work. So, you're not reviewing anybody else's work and nobody else may be reviewing your work, which would kill the site.

I rather prefer the points system. Let's see how many reviews do the people posting for free receive. The site used to work based on reciprocity, measured by the points system. Without reciprocity, nobody would be interested in somebody else's work.

Kiss,

Gacela.

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

By the way, I also liked the part where it indicates the last works published by my connections. If somebody asks to remove that part, don't pay attention. I have those writers as my connections for a reason, so if any of them publishes anything, I want to be able to realise it immediately and also to be able to access their content in a fast an easier way. Good feature.

Kiss,

Gacela

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN:

Thanks a lot for this upgrade. The images are nice and it actually appeals to have book covers, but they were way to big. Now they are the right size. Also, I think is good to have the flavour of the old site where you had a list of everything that had been recently published, while keeping the new taste.

Well done, I think all of us will appreciate this change. Also, thanks for fixing the point but. My heart lost a beat the first time I saw it said I had only 0.82 points when I had about 8. I had to go to the points tab from the menu to check that I still had the rest of them.

Kiss,

Gacela

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(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'd say it all depends on the type of novel you're writing. TNBW supports up to 5000 words, but how long are your chapters have nothing to do with the site your workshoping it in. YA novel Maximus Ride chapters are in average, 500 to 700 words long.

I'd say that short chapters are easy for any reader, as long as they are not so short that the action seems interrupted.

Interesting topic... I think there no standard.

Kiss

Gacela

473

(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thanks! You're lovely!

Kiss,

Gacela

474

(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Dears:

Apologies for not being a computer-savvy girl. Can anybody teach me how to upload images to the forums?

Kiss,

Gacela

475

(51 replies, posted in HodgePodge)

Leerme check how to do it and I'll upload an image. The resemblance is outstanding. Tintin is not a dog. He's a character painted but Herge. He's a young reporter.

Kiss,

Gacela.