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Hi Jube!
In the last version of this website there was a mandatory limit of 5,000 words, in other words, the site wouldn't let you post more than that. I experimented to see if that was still the case and ended up posting a super-long chapter of my own.
Personally, as a reviewer, I like the long chapters. You get twice the points while while only having to do one review.
Actually the real reason I like the long chapters it allows me to get into rhythm with the author's style. You get more information on the plot arc to comment on. And a better feel for the characters. It's hard to comment on chapters that are cut in half because of space- as a reviewer you don't know if it was intentional or not. You might get comments like,  you need a better chapter hook, etc.
The inline feature lets you save your comments and work on it through as many sittings as you need, so if pressed for time, I just finish later. 
That said, I have become mindful of chapter length, and do end up breaking chapters up where it may make sense to do so, even though the final novel will have the chapters differently structured.

I, too, have issues with commas. Also learned the pause rule, which has shown itself to be arbitrary. I find that Jack the Knife is well versed and follow his advice.

Reviewed Stefanie's Day of Darkness, Ch 2

Completed Jube's 'The World Of Phyries' chapter one.

I think naming the characters depends on their use, also.
We never learn the names of the red-shirted officers destined to die in Star-Trek. I don't think you need to give your non-essential throw-away characters names, even if they are speaking. However you still need to identify them. You could use their position, or rank if military, or job title. Keeping them in the background, thusly, the reader infers they are non-essential and can keep their focus on the main characters.

Got ya. Some people are very rigid when it comes to POV. When I was growing up- there was this thing known as Omniscient POV and I've tried using it on this site and been dinged. Sometime you need to switch POV so the reader gets a better sense of what is going on in all the character's minds without making the storyline huge.
Slow build- not a problem- I have that going on with my first book- I love complicated storylines and multiple plot arcs. I think it makes things more interesting. Slow builds draw the reader into the story, action bludgeons the reader over the head. Either way works for me.
I don't know why anyone would have an issue with either a single main character or multiple- that seems odd to me.
Punctuation is not my strong suit, so I'll probably not comment on that much.
I'll give your story a go tomorrow on my lunch hour. Looking forward to it.
CJ

Hi Jube,
1. Wow, great outline, sounds like a workable plan. Looking forward to getting started.
2. How did you know I suck at poetry?
3. So glad Ann is joining. She's a thoughtful and consistent reviewer.
Thanks for putting this together.
CJ

Thanks Jube!
I'm glad to be invited. And just so you know, I will only start a novel at the beginning. Sometimes they go to print before I finish reviewing them, usually when I'm late to the party. I'm slow. Though the new inline reviewing has helped with that, immensely.
Looking forward to working with you all.
CJ

Don't be too sure. I do labeling for the swimming pool industry and years ago we had to add to our precautionary statements to, add the product to a bucket of water and stir with a wooden spoon to dilute because a consumer put the calcium hypochlorite in a blender to mix and blew up her house.
I think she sued.

personally, and though I know the rules, I have problems with comma usage.

Hi SoIN-
I am joining late, please don't hold that against me. I've been writing since college- More years than I care to admit. Nothing published- been working on a book series, for years. I've had creative writing courses in college, but I was an art major and took up Graphic Design as a profession. The writing fell off to the way side. But I so enjoy it. It relaxes me. I think I am more than guilty of those common mistakes, and would love to improve my writing. So here I am. I don't know if I can catch up- but I will try.

(1) What type of writing (romance, horror, science fiction, etc.) do you like to do?: I'm not sure. I like complicated plot fiction. I like to lead the reader in one direction then blindside him. I like mysteries, suspense and stories of the supernatural.
(2) When did you start writing? Since 5th grade.
(3) Who are a couple of your favorite authors? Liked Stephen Kink until he wrote Pet Cemetery and It. Like Nelson DeMille, John Connolly, Micheal Connolly, John Sanford, Lee Child, and the dynamic duo both together and apart, Lincoln Child and Douglas Preston.
(4) What's a fun or quirky fact about you? I'm a dog loving liberal.

CJ

I think I got a review from Alex. Though mine differed from yours- so its not all cut and paste.
Here's what she said to me:
I like your hard work. I too am a writer and write short stories and blogs and I have a blog page with all my work. I know it is hard to compete with so many people doing the exact same thing, but if its your passion it doesn't matter. Keep up your dreams.

Inspirational, though not so helpful.
CJ