I've been corrected. I've got a month? Whoopee! My deadline was the end of this month! Bad planning got me ahead of the game!
1,377 2015-04-28 19:16:45
Re: MEDICAL ADVICE NEEDED (4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Contest ends May first, doesn't it? That gives us both three days to submit.
1,378 2015-04-28 18:49:39
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Oh, for the love of paper. Here is how you get them. Just pour a smudge of gas on you while pumping gas into the car and go home for the FM meeting. Guaranteed to make your day more interesting. (KIDDING!)
1,379 2015-04-28 12:58:57
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
He is busy moving books and throwing out paper because of stupid health inspectors who make rules based on the lowest common denominator. Give him a break, ya weenie.
1,380 2015-04-28 06:08:46
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Sigh. That boy never gives up. All it takes is a lull in the conversation and he says something like that to kick the hornet's nest...
1,381 2015-04-28 04:12:45
Re: MEDICAL ADVICE NEEDED (4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Just saw this. Sorry it took so long for me to get to you. The delay would depend on the timing of the overdose. Found this on Drugs.com. I would aim for a 'sleeping pill' that would have existed back then. I chose Valium (This only becaume available in 1985, but it is a good example of what you need to know to answer this question) Here is the duration of onset that I think you are looking for. Note that a heavy meal (with fat in it) delays the onset and causes the peak efffect to be more than an hour longer. Hope this helped.
After oral administration >90% of diazepam (valium) is absorbed and the average time to achieve peak plasma concentrations is 1 – 1.5 hours with a range of 0.25 to 2.5 hours. Absorption is delayed and decreased when administered with a moderate fat meal. In the presence of food mean lag times are approximately 45 minutes as compared with 15 minutes when fasting. There is also an increase in the average time to achieve peak concentrations to about 2.5 hours in the presence of food as compared with 1.25 hours when fasting.
To answer your question, it is absolutely possible that she could 'walk away in the morning' as long as the pills had worn off and she was alert enough to pass the doc's inspection. Since she has a tolerance already (you said she is addicted to these pills) this may be what saves her. She wakes up after the murder (the Valium has worn off during the night) and she isn't due for a dose until she goes to sleep that night, then it makes sense that someone trying to kill her would give a too-small dose that only makes her sleepy but doesn't kill.
Here is info on barbituates available in 1950's. Found this on the National Institute of Health website.
Amobarbital, butabarbital, pentobarbital and secobarbital are used as sedatives and hypnotics and not as anticonvulsants. These and several other barbiturates were introduced into medical use in the United States in the 1950s as sedatives, hypnotics (short term treatment of insomnia) and preanesthetic agents. They are now rarely used, having been largely replaced by more effective and better tolerated sedatives and hypnotics such as the benzodiazepines and benzodiazepine receptor agonists. Amobarbital (am" oh bar' bi tal) and butabarbital (bue' ta bar' bi tal) are currently available, but only as solutions for parenteral administration, being used largely as preanesthetic agents. Secobarbital is available as a 100 mg capsule generically and under the brand name Seconal. Pentobarbital is no longer available in the United States. Current indications for the barbiturates include short term treatment of insomnia and as a preanesthetic agent. The recommended dose of secobarbital in adults is 100 mg at bedtime or 200 to 300 mg 1 to 2 hours before surgery. Barbiturates that are no longer available in the United States include butalbital, mephobarbital, methohexital and pentobarbital. Secobarbital is classified as a Schedule II substance, indicating that it has definite potential for physical and psychological dependence and abuse. Frequent side effects include drowsiness, sedation, hypotension, nausea, headache and skin rash.
In other words, I don't think you went over the top on this at all.
FYI, I'm still fighting to finish my submission for the contest. I've got more than half of the story finished but (go figure) I'm stalling to a halt on the crime. I don't think I'd make a very good criminal :-) I keep thinking of things that might happen and then change the plan. Either way, I've given myself a deadline and plan to get that stinker up on the contest page within three days.
It may come down to the wire. Or the eleventh hour, But (I think I can, I think I can...) I'll see what I can do to wrangle this stinker into shape in time :-)
1,382 2015-04-27 13:43:22
Topic: The Winner (9 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
To all who dared to craft something and throw it into this competition, I cheer for you. It took a lotta time, energy, and belief in yourselves to do this. In that, you're all winners. That said, you all want to know who won the right to buy $50 worth of beer.
Here was how I judged this:
1) Novel use of power (5 pts)
2) Risk to character. I didn't think a person should exceed their abilities to make a magnificent power moment without risking a loss of control. This meant that I stalled out on a few entries were about a magnificent power moment that occurred/ affected the MC (in other words, the villain was the one using the excessive power) . If I couldn't be in the head of the true action, I didn't know what powers were being used or if there was risk to the villain. (5 pts)
3) Good use of action vs passive verbs. (Ex: rolled/ looked/ rose/ needed/ patting vs sprouted/ flicked/ grazing/ unravelled/spattering) In this case, the second example got a higher score.(5 pts)
\
4) Great flow. I wanted to be able to read it through without halting. To give myself perspective, I scored all the entries and then took the weekend off for distance. Then I reread the top four entries and scored them a second time (without looking at the previous scorecard) The gaps in my comprehension really popped the second time. (5 pts)
5) Good visual description. I wanted to 'see' the combat without questioning the effects. This tied into the action verbs. (Didn't expect this, but it did.) If a character teleported, I wanted a bit of wordage about how it looked/ felt. If a blast of energy was fired, I wanted to know the peripheral damage and what the effects were. It didn't have to be a huge amount of description, but the short stories that made the top four had a lot more effects listed with their action verbs.
6) Entertainment. This was purely subjective and gave me a chance to rank the top four pieces in my personal order of preference. Which one did I like the best? Which stories made me want to read on? (5 pts)
(Max possible points were 30)
That is what I learned from this as the judge. (Deep bow to all of you) Thank you for giving me the honor of reading your works and letting me study them.
The winner is Adrien Lankford, who wrote, "Rosebud Lives."
All my best to everyone.
A
1,383 2015-04-24 05:05:16
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Missing Copper. Gotcha:-) I've been working a ton of shifts, but should have a bit more time open up soon. Hopefully sooner than later!
1,384 2015-04-23 12:15:46
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hey folks, the contest is officially closed. I've got my trusty rubric and all I need is a bit of time. I work tonight and then I have the weekend off. I'll be snuggling up with your characters and a glass of Guinness (in a nod
to certain Irish wives). And should complete the judging by Monday at the latest. I always guess long so that I look like a miracle worker.
1,385 2015-04-22 23:10:40
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You like to chew your beer?
1,386 2015-04-22 19:35:55
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Down to the wire folks. A board who's getting aboard!
Who is the lucky fool who gets to live the dream and see how much beer $50 will buy? The contest closes tonight! Good luck to all!
1,387 2015-04-21 09:21:44
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Wonderful trivia, but I'm wondering if Book Gardens Florist rents out any apartments (grumble). Face it, the insulation for the place would be spectacular.
1,388 2015-04-21 03:03:06
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I wonder what their landlords say to th "Book Garden FLorists' and their pile of books and possible fire hazards. Are they really making you get rid of books?
Your landlords need to be cooked in their own juices and roasted slowly over a low fire.
1,389 2015-04-20 08:34:00
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Simple solution. Narrow down the work area (stay an optimist and tell yourself that you are starting to minimize the board for your mom's actual device) THen store it under your bed and slide it out to work on it.
1,390 2015-04-20 08:31:36
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
(In whining voice that imitates your landlord)
"But it has wires everywhere! And blinky lights! And a knight who says, Ni!"
(Glares suspiciously)
"Is this mechanical thingy interfering with anyone's cable TV signal?"
(In my opinion, the state has decided that electronic who-ja-wizzats can lead to fire because some chowder-head managed to shut down the grid while figuring out how to make the perfect toaster. Blame Tesla :-)
A
1,391 2015-04-20 04:30:58
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I suggest moving the lab to your bedroom, telling him that you've dismantled it, and then moving it back the next day. (I realize this is clearly a huge undertaking, so take this as tongue in cheek and realize I'm only half serious. However, having a set of locks changed and keeping your frigging landlord out of the apartment from now on seems like a stellar idea. Either that, or find a new apartment for 100 bucks more a month (the cost you would have to apply to the storage locker). That way, the landlord gets what he wants but loses the best renter that he's ever had. Lose-lose. The perfect revenge. Served cold, just for the sake of it.
The other alternative is to flood the basement and give him something else to worry about. All you need is a hose hooked to a sink. Just kidding, but it's a nice thought. You can't fix that kind of ignorance.
A
I remember when my dad was kept from installing a ham radio tower in the back yard because the old lady next door thought it interfered with her television signal.
1,392 2015-04-18 23:14:50
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
:-)
Gotcha. Oh, forgot to ask. Now that you have a drivers licence, what other adventures have you had?
(Googling Jacob's creek as I tap my foot and debate my options)
1,393 2015-04-18 09:14:44
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Janet,
Tell me the name of the vinter again. I've perused the wine section of the local store and have enough selections that I don't dare picking at random. I want to get the kind that has the Janet-seal-of-approval.
1,394 2015-04-18 08:43:45
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Good point there.
Oh, for the Cop Shop mystery contest, JP said that I can write in any time period, as long as there is a double cross involved. You're going to get some backstory on Katerin :-) Just thought I would taunt you a bit so you'll nag me to finish writing what I have in my head. :-)
1,395 2015-04-15 04:19:53
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I entered the poem contest just for chuckles. I figured I'd see how much beer $50 will buy.
Enter something, ya weenie. Quit thinking of statistics and lets see some wordage!
1,396 2015-04-12 11:10:41
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
And the competition rallies and runs toward the finish line!
1,397 2015-04-10 13:37:32
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
How often do you disagree with me? Hmmmm? Ya old coot!
1,398 2015-04-10 10:43:07
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Point taken. I changed the word to scrimmage.
1,399 2015-04-10 09:06:29
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Techincally, a melee is what you have after the line of battle (or other proper order) has broken down.
You're correct on this. There is a golden five or ten minutes before one or the other side will dominate a medieval-style combat and break through the wall. When my friends use this term though, I just use 'chaos' as a synonym, but a more proper word would be 'free-for-all.'
Adrian joins the fray! Welcome to our home! Put up your feet! Stay a while! Join us in throwing popcorn at the computer screen!
1,400 2015-04-09 10:19:09
Re: Contest! (74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
A heater shield is the shoulder-to-knee (or ankle) shield that is shaped like the bottom of a flat iron so that it covers most of the body. This is in contrast to the kite shield (eventually evolved to a flat top to look over and a point at the bottom) Both can be lifted over the shoulder so that they covers the head of the person bracing the shield. Your arm is through straps (also called enarmes) along the midsection of the shield, allowing two points of contact so it is harder to knock the shield to the side and hit the person who is wielding the shield.
http://medieval.stormthecastle.com/medieval-shields.htm
As to the rest, I'll integrate the suggestions wholesale. Thanks!
A