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The thing is, Vern, I'd have to check too many places.  And people can only join six groups on this new site. So adding a group just for my book would probably complicate things for me, and not garner many members.

This here group of Podgers has some of my regular (and, of course, beloved!) reviewers, and the people who know me from the old site have gotta know Hamler and I have continued our conversation here. So they'll know how to find me. Plus we've got quickees (good grief, someone must've had a rough night to have come up with that name!) and PMs.

So having this thread on Genesis in this group is working fine for me now, for the moment anyway...

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Thanks so much, Sol.

I see someone started another thread about tablet bugs. I use my MacBook for writing and posting, but often move to my iPad just about everything else. (Tied at the hip, so to speak). Since so many of us use mobile devices, Id like to suggest more mobile-friendly interface after this huge round of site enhancements is done and things settle down a bit...

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Hi Sol, thanks for smoothing so many bumps so quickly.

I use Apple iOS.

I've noticed that there seems to be about a 1/2 to 1 hour delay between when I receive notice that I've gotten a review, and when I can actually read it.

Also, I think someone else mentioned this last week, but I have this issue: when typing in the big comment window to post or reply to a review, my cursor bounces up to the top when I hit 'return.' I've gotten around this by continuing on the same line, and adding the line spacing afterward. Probably a coding glitch somewhere (?). No bouncing elsewhere on the site, so that's good. smile

Thanks again.

Thank you, Sol!
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Water Cooler
Hardcore Downtime
Word Warriors

Or any combo of the above. Anything that isn't behind a pile of poo or an O2 mask. roll

The 6-group limit kinda sucks. I've invited a few folks, e.g., Ms Simi - all you need to do is click!

Which begs the question, Vern: What are YOU reading?! smile

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So we're stuck with HodgePodge, is that what you're saying?

Sheesh.

You need to change the cover image, at least.  roll

On the old site, Simisez pasted a link to horrible sex scenes by great writers in my Hanler thread. I think I'll bring it on over here!

I wish there were a 'like' button! wink

What does a moderator do? I have no idea....

I'm reading Baghdad Express: A Gulf War Memoir, by Joel Turnipseed. Next up will be Leap Into Darkness: Seven Years On The Run In Wartime Europe, by Leo Bretholz

You asked, so here's my list, organized by why I like them:


Contradiction in words, often indirect : e,g., hot/cold; west/east; woman/man; pleasure/pain; happy/sad; nurture/destroy; life/death; pride/shame)

*It's hot as hell in Martirio, but the papers on the porch are icy with the news.
Vernon God Little by DBC Pierre.
*The sun sets in the west (just about everyone knows that), but Sunset Towers faced east.
The Westing Game by Ellen Raskin
*The Miss Lonelyhearts of the New York Post-Dispatch (Are you in trouble?—Do-you-need-advice?—Write-to-Miss-Lonelyhearts-and-she-will-help-you) sat at his desk and stared at a piece of white cardboard.
Miss Lonelyhearts by Nathanael West
*It was a pleasure to burn.
Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury.
*You will rejoice to hear that no disaster has accompanied the commencement of an enterprise which you have regarded with such evil forebodings.
Frankenstein by Mary Shelley


Immediate conflict ahead:
(Violence/ injustice)

*Through the fence, between the curling flower spaces, I could see them hitting.
The Sound and The Fury by William Faulkner
*There was a hand in the darkness, and it held a knife.
The Graveyard Book by Neil Gaiman
*Tyler gets me a job as a waiter, after that Tyler's pushing a gun in my mouth and saying, the first step to eternal life is you have to die.
Fight Club by Chuck Palahniuk
*Amergo Bonasera sat in New York Criminal Court Number 3 and waited for justice; vengeance on the men who had so cruelly hurt his daughter, who had tried to dishonor her.
The Godfather by Mario Puzo
*The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.
The Dark Tower: The Gunslinger by Stephen King
*I heard the mailman approach my office door, half an hour earlier than usual. He didn't sound right. His footsteps fell more heavily, jauntily, and he whistled. A new guy. He whistled his way to my office door, then fell silent for a moment. Then he laughed.
Storm Front by Jim Butcher


Makes you ask 'why?' Or 'what happens next?' 
(Unexpected, unusual, unconventional):

*First of all, it was October, a rare month for boys.
Something Wicked This Way Comes by Ray Bradbury
*Someone must have slandered Josef K., for one morning, without having done anything truly wrong, he was arrested.
The Trial by Franz Kafka.
*I did two things on my seventy-fifth birthday. I visited my wife's grave. Then I joined the army.
Old Man's War by John Scalzi
*Kidnapping children is never a good idea; all the same, sometimes it has to be done.
Island of the Aunts by Eva Ibbotson
*We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold.
Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas by Hunter S. Thompson
*The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault.
Blood Rites by Jim Butcher


Bizarre:

*In my earliest memory, my grandfather is as bald as a stone and he takes me to see the tigers.
The Tiger's Wife by Téa Obreht.
*'Take my camel, dear,' said my aunt Dot, as she climbed down from this animal on her return from High Mass.
The Towers of Trebizond by Rose Macaulay.
*Jasper Maskelyne was drinking a glass of razor blades when the war began.
The War Magician by David Fisher
*It was love at first sight. The first time Yossarian saw the chaplain he fell madly in love with him.
Catch-22 by Joseph Heller.


Promises a great story:

*Not every 13-year-old girl is accused of murder, brought to trial, and found guilty.
The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle by Avi
*1801 – I have just returned from a visit to my landlord – the solitary neighbour that I shall be troubled with.
Wuthering Heights, by Emily Brontë
*Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice.
One Hundred Years of Solitude by Gabriel García Márquez.
*The terror, which would not end for another twenty-eight years - if it ever did end - began, so far as I know or can tell, with a boat made from a sheet of newspaper floating down a gutter swollen with rain.
IT by Stephen King
*This time there would be no witnesses.
Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency, by Douglas Adams
*It was a diamond all right, shining in the grass half a dozen feet from the blue brick wall.
The Dain Curse, by Dashiell Hammett


Unexpected truism:

*It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen
*Ships at a distance have every man's wish on board.
Their Eyes Were Watching God by Zora Neale Hurston
*Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.
Anna Karenina by Leo Tolstoy.
*The world is what it is; men who are nothing, who allow themselves to become nothing, have no place in it.
A Bend in the River, by V.S. Naipaul
*Under certain circumstances there are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea.
The Portrait of a Lady by Henry James
*The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents.
The Call of Cthulhu, by H. P. Lovecraft
*All children, except one, grow up.
Peter Pan by J. M. Barrie


Unique attitude or voice:
*I am a sick man… I am a spiteful man. I am an unpleasant man. I think my liver is diseased.
Notes from Underground by Fyodor Dostoevsky
*If I am out of my mind, it's all right with me thought Moses Herzog.
Herzog by Saul Bellow
*That's good thinking there, Cool Breeze.
The Electric Kool-Aid Acid Test by Tom Wolfe
*You better not never tell nobody but God.
The Color Purple by Alice Walker
*If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you'll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don't feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth.
The Catcher in the Rye by J. D. Salinger.
*The story so far: In the beginning, the universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move.
The Restaurant at the End of the Universe by Douglas Adams
*Mother died today. Or, maybe, yesterday; I can't be sure.
The Stranger by Albert Camus

K, thanks for the head's up! smile

Sol, I just edited ch 9 Genesis last nights based on the reviews I'd received, and got hit with more credits. I thought this was going to stop.

Please let us know when it will stop, and whether the charges for editing will be reversed. My total assessed charges so far, in the new site, are starting to add up...

Thanks.

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Revised it, after considering yiur review comments. I was charged more credits for editing (grrrrr, thought Sol was going to stop that), but I don't know if you'll get additional points to re-review...

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Sol, I have trouble finding my new reviews quickly. How about either a red flag or X next to new unread reviews (inline or regular notwithstanding), so we know something is waiting for us, and similarly, a notification that a review response has been given?

You've done a wonderful job with the new site, btw. Please accept our suggestions as compliments, since we all come here so much, and wouldn't have so much to say if we didn't care so much! smile

Now, where are my fwc script review credits?!
smile

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Linda and Vern,

Thanks so much to both of you for the excellent and detailed comments. Working on them in a few minutes, now that I'm rested up from last night's marathon.

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Yes, I'd added Stephen King's On Writing, Turow's Presumed Innocent, Cynthia Voight's Homecoming...

The glitch dumped them. Or maybe Stephen King was being a bad sport? smile

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K, Vern,

We can blame it on the Henny. wink

I've just posted ch 9 of Genesis. I'd love your comments. Bald-faced request, here. I pulled an all-nighter (my usual m.o. when I'm actually in the zone), so i'm hoping it was worth losing sleep over...

Any Podgers wanna stop on by ch 9 and tell me whatcha thinkin?

Thanksssss....!

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Vern:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfjtpp90lu8

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Great, that makes sense, Sol.

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This is a very nice feature.

However, using it seems a bit clunky right now.

On goodreads, you can simply tap the Amazon link to add it, without copying and pasting the ISBN.

Also, there seems to be a glitch - I added books to my recommended shelf, but only five books appear,;when I re-added them, I received a message that they had already been added, but they still don't appear.

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John? John?!

Listen up, boy, you're gonna have a revolt on your hands!

The Mousketeers aren't happy...!

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Ditto to Janet's, Linda's, Don's, njc' sand K's comments.

Also, Sol, please let me know whether I'm getting credit for my review of fwc's script as requested earlier.

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I saw your announcement, Linda, congrats again! You got the dreaded first draft done, yay! Me, I'm relieved when I get through a goddamn sentence!

When I messed with ch 8, I thought about doing a version 2. But I wondered if that would confuse people re which to read, and it sure confused me re points.

I'm not pleased to be hit with editing points, when people don't get anything to re-read the edited version, and I'm not pleased that inline reviews get the same points as a general review.

And I agree with John that 'Helping Make it You' is a very awkward slogan for tnbw (it had the same byline before).

Still the site is pretty smooth sailing for its first few days up. I liked your wish list post btw.