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Okey dokey, I revised and slowed down ch 9. Then split the end of it off to make that ch 10.

How ya like me now?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Muu7FxdCG4U

Vern, this is how to insert images (from my earlier post):

This is what you do is after typing this part just like this: [img=PunBB bbcode]You insert the web address with no space after that last close bracket.
Then, right after the web address, without inserting a space, you type this:[/img]

Seabrass, I tried finding the post-review additions/changes you told me about but I couldn't. Probably doing something wrong....

I think Sol expanded the list of groups to ten.

Also, if it's a forum thread under tnbw Premium, it wouldn't allow for individual sub-threads for particular pieces and quite honestly, I'm getting barraged with emails for the threads I subscribed to on the big preemie thread...I think this is the cleanest way to do this.

Of course, as in everything else, I could be totally wrong!

Your fourth choice is Young Frankenstein, Vern! You knew that, right?

Pick one!!!

They WERE lame. No question about it.

Yeah, I thought about the flashback thing and weaving it into the adult narrative, but it seemed like I'd be going back and forth too much. I didn't like the idea of it, to be honest.

When I read books that overload on flashback, I usually lack a sense of continuity. I like being grounded. Call me boring, just don't call me Ishmael...

I don't wanna rip your book, I want to read it. the WHOLE thing. I get soooo mad at you for not keeping up your chapters and for moving around all over the place. I mean, like Mother of Antagony, the fuk was that?! You told me you have a vision for the book, so for Chrissake lemme see it!

Which reminds me, have you read Heinlein yet?

I added a bit to ch 9 btw. I'm grateful for your reactions, seriously. Assuming you're somewhat sober when you tell me whatcha think.

Now, what happened with the band?

I think you're just annoyed that this new format won't allow us to clearly and definitively out-paginate, out-view, and outnumber any other thread in the site. Me too, actually!

Thing is, our old thread was on the writing feedback forum, and while that's where we started for, like, the first few posts, we know what happened. I bet we pissed off a few people, or at least irritated them enough to simply... Ignore us. Ouch.

So I started the new feedback group tonight on this new site to be just that, while you and I can continue to carry on publicly but without bumping into the straight writerly stuff. Which is why this discussion of ch 9 would actually do quite nicely over there, while our riffs on the music scene and hard times and good times too would rightly stay here.

Which kinda reminds me of this:
http://youtu.be/ISSdegFQj-A

And that, of course, brings me to this:
http://youtu.be/JR7BcfVuwc8

Hmm. Maybe you and I should just stay put over here after all. I'm as much out of control as you are!

Yes, Vern, that's what I had in mind when creating the group. When I finish reviewing a chapter, I rarely revisit it unless the writer asks me to, and then I don't read the reviews that followed mine. Hopefully this group will pick up that slack, akin to the Additional Feedback threads of yore...

Can't set up a group without weird codes popping up
Window pane doesn't scroll
Cursor bounces to the top
Can't edit content of chapters
Time lag from when a review comes in to when I can actually see it
No pop up on home page re reviews received (love this feature on my MacBook, btw!)

Not trying to add to your already significant chores