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(2 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

My favorite American mystery/crime author, John Sanford, added another novel to his Virgil Flowers series and it's one of his best. These novels are a master class in crime writing and this one is no exception. I recommend all of Sandford's novels, and I reallllllly like this one. If you're an animal lover it's hard to read, but if you get by the disturbing parts at the end will make you stand up and cheer. So, if you want to curl up with a book and have a really good time, the subtle humor will have you laughing out loud, BUY THIS BOOK!

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(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I really tried to like this rant about a poorly made burrito, but I just couldn't. And the only reason I mentioned that I didn't like it is to illustrate the point there is little humor in a stream of insults over a very tiny thing like the way your burrito is made. This was pretty hateful and left me wondering if the writer had an anger issue. While you want people to laugh at your humor you don't want them thinking you need therapy.

Arron Sorkin wrote the Oscar winning script Social Network. He also wrote for the TV shows Sports Night, The West Wing. He's teaching an online script writing class for 90 dollars, which I think is an affordable price for an online class.
Anyway here's the link for those interested:
https://www.masterclass.com/classes/aar … odBM8Clw#/

I didn't scroll down the ad when I wrote this, but have done so see that James Patterson also teaches a course in writing also for 90 dollars.

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
jack the knife wrote:

FYI re Doubleday/Knopf accepting unsolicited manuscripts - it doesn't. Agents only, dudes. It's on their website.

Still trying to prove Darwin wrong, are you?

http://knopfdoubleday.com/contact-us/

FOR KNOPF ONLY — Knopf usually only accepts manuscripts submitted by an agent. There is an excellent listing of literary agents in a book called The Writer’s Market, which you should be able to find in a local bookstore, from an online retailer, or a library. You can also visit their Web site at www.writersdigest.com for more information. If you still want to give us a try, though, even with that caveat, please send a sample of your work, 25-50 pages, and a stamped, self-addressed envelope, to THE EDITORS / Knopf / 1745 Broadway / New York, NY 10019. It will be reviewed with other unsolicited work. Allow approximately 9 months for a response. Please also be aware that we are unable to accept manuscripts submitted via email.

That's an ad for The Writer's Market.

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(9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

jack the knife wrote:

You (and my brother-in-law) dodged that bullet, Nathan. We got a day of soaking rain, but we're drying up now. Sunday and Monday will be sunny (and hot again!).

Nathan reminded me to congratulate you for publishing WTRC...I'm sorry I forgot, I just take for granted you'll have a publisher for everything you write... tongue

(Congratulations for the publication of yet another well written thriller!)

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jack the knife wrote:

For those who have been reading WTRC but have not finished it, no need to leave reviews. The MS has been through the editing process at the publisher, so I can't make changes now even if I wanted to. smile But I'll leave the novel on site for a while longer to let current readers finish it if they want.

Thank you Jack, I am soooo sorry I'm so slow...but I want to finish it! AND please stay safe...Hermine is on its way:(

Well done you guys!
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Night surrenders to glorious dawn.

jack the knife wrote:

Philosophically, NJC, you propose an unequal debate. And that's precisely why Trump is as popular as he is. All he has to do is rant one-liners, and his opponents have to come up with reasoned arguments why what he says is false? One side has to do all the itemizing? Charles made statements, not backed up by argument at all, and you maintain that Vern's dismissal of them is intellectual laziness. You also suggest there are arguments Charles COULD have made to support his rhetoric, that we should all UNDERSTAND that, and to dismiss them is to lose the argument - IF THERE WAS ONE. But he didn't make the case, only insisted it to be true. Who's the lazy one? I say it's he who spouts unannotated invective. But TNBW is hardly the place for such discussions, in my view. An Op-Ed page of the newspaper would be more appropriate.

I agree with Jack. Word salads will not stop terrorists. Proving one religion is worse than another will not stop terrorism. The only thing that I think will help is treating everyone with dignity irrespective of their religion, race, gender or sexual orientation.

AFTER JACK THE KNIFE, JOHN SANDFORD.

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I am glad you brought this up. I have been struggling with depression for almost a year and have let many reviews go unanswered. Please know if you reviewed my work, I do appreciate every one. I am so far behind I don't know if I'll ever catch up. I apologize if it caused anyone any distress.
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What I really appreciate about Shakespeare is how he conveyed eternal truths in a few words:

"What's in a name? That which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet."

This passage from Romeo and Juliette suggested to the reader, amid the backdrop of tragedy, that is not one's name but one 's character that defines them.

"This above all: to thine own self be true,
And it must follow, as the night the day,
Thou canst not then be false to any man."

In this speech Polonius gives his children advice parents would be wise to offer today, the only way to navigate society without getting yourself into too much trouble is to never pretend to be someone you're not.

"Brevity is the soul of wit."

This is my favorite, one I use in writing everyday. Even though having Polonius say this in the middle of a long speech was Shakespeare's idea of a joke, any editor, publisher, or agent will tell you if you can't sum up your plot in a few words it's not a good plot. To take it a step further, intelligence does not require long passages of rhetoric to get its point across.

No matter how often I read these quotes, even though they were written almost 500 years ago, I am amazed that they are still applicable today. Thanks, Bill!

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(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

My publisher uncapitalized Mother in my Ronan manuscript. If that helps.

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SolN wrote:

Without a word limit, it is conceivable that someone could submit a whole novel. And as someone with nearly 2000 credits, I think it could easily be paid for.
Just sayin.

I'd say three chapters that are as long as an entire novel probably isn't the strongest start. I don't think such an entry would have much of a chance.

Thank you, SolN for that clarification.

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Without a word limit, it is conceivable that someone could submit a whole novel. And as someone with nearly 2000 credits, I think it could easily be paid for.

Just sayin.

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Watch this video and Soul Pancake in conjunction with Purina Puppy Chow will donate 1 pound of dog food to a shelter. The video is awfully cute and might even make you smile. What have you got to lose? Go ahead, click it!!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJoE_lNQdHU

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#PowerOfPuppies

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Having been inspired to write a poem by these illustrations I thought I would share them with you. Not only are they brilliant pieces of art, they tickle your imagination, daring you to tell the story behind the paintings.

So...click the link and be inspired:

http://www.booooooom.com/2016/03/28/ill … zeen-chin/

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(27 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

You're so welcome! And thanks for all of your support, too! Did you like my picture? Bear grabbed my phone and took a selfie... smile

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(27 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I bought my copy...left you a review. smile

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(3 replies, posted in Fight Club)

I'm with you, JP, I am disappointed in the tenor of the campaigns this year. I wish to God we could just keep Obama. I think Hillary, Bernie and Kasich are the only sane candidates running, but they aren't exciting enough to command the airtime the others do. I will vote but am not going to be upset if who I vote for doesn't win. Whomever gets in is going to make the next 4 years interesting.

Then I see Trump speaking at one of his rallies and I wonder if this is how it felt in the 1930s and could my apathy bring about a terrible step backward for our nation. I don't know. All I have is faith that God will protect us with the checks and balances our founders put in place to keep tyrants reined in should they reach the White House.

And I agree with you, JLMo's article is a must read!!!

dags:)

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(27 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

YAY!!!!

Congratulations, buddy!

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

These confessions reminds us why we write:

http://www.buzzfeed.com/ariannarebolini … bsKGGdWyLv

I really relate to confession #23!!! smile

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Just watch...I guarantee you'll laugh.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pO_mlZ … AGh4u91pEk

dag smile

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Another pallet cleanser after yet ANOTHER debate...I mean, really, on both sides do we really need more debates?...but I digress...:

http://www.esquire.com/news-politics/vi … r-tuesday/

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btw..."Texas, Diet Texas, and Snow Texas."  Is exactly how Texans feel about Oklahoma and Alaska.

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

After watching all the serious nonsense that is our electoral process in the United States, we all need this:

http://www.buzzfeed.com/andyneuenschwan … ipyLL6v10p

My favorite...Dog 911.