I agree that Omniscient POV can be done well. I've just read The Bad Seed by William March, written in 1954 in which this POV is so seamless you don't even notice it. You can get it for Kindle. Very good writing, the plot more interesting than the movie.
351 2015-07-03 05:30:08
Re: Using Third Person Omniscient POV (26 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
352 2015-07-03 02:34:57
Re: #askELJames (13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Anne Rice will always be the Vampire Queen in my heart.
353 2015-07-02 05:44:26
Re: #askELJames (13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
And absolutely, censorship should not be even considered. But when you say the public is speaking loud and clear, I say a 100 million books sold and a solid fan-base is as good, if not a better counter-argument ...
I'm talking about the rational public..lol...and pandering to youth with forbidden subjects will always create a fan base, even if the writing is not that good.
Just ask Stephanie Meyers.
Don't misunderstand, I think it's great they've made a lot of money with their brand of literature. It's just not something I would do.
354 2015-07-02 04:13:17
Re: #askELJames (13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I have read none of EL James and I'm not going to because I had a roommate who had a dominate relationship with a man. Only she wasn't the one being abused. She wouldn't beat her submissive, (a tiny balding older man, who shook whenever someone looked his way), but she would humiliate him verbally, never let him touch her and made him sleep on the floor at the end of her bed. AND he PAID her for this. I only saw him coming and going, but heard in great detail about their sessions from my roommate. She thought it was funny, I thought it was terribly sad.
I'm sure there's S and M relationships that are perfectly lovely, but I bet more of them are like the one I witnessed. I know you're going to say it was consensual, that the man must have been getting something out of it or he wouldn't have paid. Maybe you're right, but heroin makes you feel good and addicts think they're getting something out of the drug, too.
I don't support censorship because I feel the public will let an author know when they've gone too far, and I wouldn't want someone else to tell me what I could write. It sounds like to me that in the matter of Grey, the public is speaking loud and clear....
355 2015-06-29 23:40:42
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
dagnee wrote:My WiFi is fine. This is the only site I have trouble loading, so that's why I asked. Sometimes even refreshing the connection doesn't work, and the problem seems to be getting worse.
There can be interactions between the way the message is framed for transfer over the network and the network itself. A network that transmits one site without difficulty can gag on another site, a site which runs fine on most networks.
Networks are immensely complicated. For self-flagelatory fun and edification you can look up the RFC's (protocol design documents) on the site of the IETF (Internet Engineering Task Force), assuming that the FCC and the UN have not forcibly wrested technical control away from the engineers who make it all work.
Postscript: Just for giggles, here's the index page. Thirty seconds of eye-glazing reading of titles is probably enough for any sane sophant.
Postpostscript: Here's one for those who are into (mental) pain.
Thanks NJC That's what I wanted to know.
356 2015-06-29 21:38:45
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
dagnee wrote:I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE AN ANSWER EVEN IF IT'S JUST THAT YOU DON'T KNOW. IT'S A PAIN IN THE ASS WHEN I AM ON MY KINDLE AND HAVE TO WAIT AS IF I AM USING DAIL UP ONLY TO GET A TIMED OUT MESSAGE. I USE MY KINDLE A LOT.
Dagnee, when your Kindle hangs and you're about to restart the wifi, have you tried first accessing the wifi from another device?
Dirk
My WiFi is fine. This is the only site I have trouble loading, so that's why I asked. Sometimes even refreshing the connection doesn't work, and the problem seems to be getting worse.
357 2015-06-29 21:34:05
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
dagnee wrote:... IT'S A PAIN IN THE ASS WHEN I AM ON MY KINDLE AND HAVE TO WAIT AS IF I AM USING DAIL UP ONLY TO GET A TIMED OUT MESSAGE. I USE MY KINDLE A LOT.
Can you try it with different carriers? Are you using public WiFi or an access point from a carrier wired/fibered to your home or workplace? Every clue you can gather is valuable.
Network problems in general are a PitA, especially because few computer systems are designed to help you find where the network problem is--and most networks hide rather than helping. Good network diagnosticians earn the beaucoup bucks.
This is the only site I'm having trouble loading.
358 2015-06-29 19:19:57
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thank you!
359 2015-06-29 16:32:49
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE AN ANSWER EVEN IF IT'S JUST THAT YOU DON'T KNOW. IT'S A PAIN IN THE ASS WHEN I AM ON MY KINDLE AND HAVE TO WAIT AS IF I AM USING DAIL UP ONLY TO GET A TIMED OUT MESSAGE. I USE MY KINDLE A LOT.
360 2015-06-29 06:52:56
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I am having a lot of trouble with the site timing out on my kindle. I have to refresh my wifi several times a visit. Is it the site or the Kindle?
361 2015-06-26 20:05:33
Re: Build it and they will come...sorta (6 replies, posted in Fight Club)
dags--nice to know you're trying to keep us lined up. I just finished teasing Charles f bell on the site forum, so I'm guilty as charged. It's just that sometimes I can't resist puncturing a pompous balloon when I see it, because it amuses me. But the amusement doesn't hold up when I think about taking the fight outside, or to Fight Club. Too much effort involved. I'll be happy to go a few rounds with someone who starts a fight here, though. JP
JP.
I just read your post and I agree with you. I really hate to wade through 'word salads' full of a lot of words with little to no informational value. Now, undoubtedly, the writer of such long missives will come back and tell you didn't understand what they wrote, even though what they wrote was only understandable by them. They congratulate themselves on being ununderstandable, convinced they are the smartest person in the room. When in reality, they are narcissist in love with their own written voice. To me, writing is communication and what good is writing something so vast and convoluted that no one understands it? To me that's not communication, that's mind masturbation and an attempt to appear to be smarter than you are.
In the thread I mentioned and you've just posted in, the idea of fate and predestination are just that, ideas. There's no basis in fact to justify their existence. There is not one person who can say for sure that they know their fate, or that they were predestined to be in the place they are now. That's why it's a FICTIONAL literary device.
As for you teasing Charles, I am just as guilty, posting a whole article about World Net Daily and how they make up news items with a right wing agenda, then post them as if they were true. I tried to refrain from getting involved, but I have three biracial grandchildren and when I saw NJC quoting lies as truth simply because Travon Martin was black, I couldn't let it go unchallenged.
I built this group based on free speech and I think, as more threads are shut down, more posts pulled, the TNBW community will find their way here.
362 2015-06-26 16:57:00
Topic: Build it and they will come...sorta (6 replies, posted in Fight Club)
There was a raging debate in the main group about substance abuse that morphed into revisiting the Trayvon Martin case and other right-wing set your hair on fire issues in a thread about medical marijuana. It got shut down. Now those same opponents are thrashing it out in the main group over predestination/fate/destiny. Calling names, insulting each other's intelligence. It's only a matter of time before one or both go too far and SolN shuts that thread down, too. Which is unfortunate for the thread is one of the few about writing in that group.
I invited one of the opponents to come here and fight no holds barred, no thread closure, no post pulling. And I got nothing in response. Which is what I pretty much expected. Why go to a group with only eleven members to slug out your disagreement when you can do it in front of the whole TNBW community?
When the new site opened and I saw groups I wondered how the community was going to stay close. I opposed the group idea until SolN explained that this is a writing group and not a social one. Then groups made sense. It also made sense to me to start a group where disagreements would be settled, hurt feelings vented and people could voice their opinion and not be invalidated by having their posts pulled or threads closed.
I'm keeping this group open, even if the membership dwindles to nothing as a safe haven for free speech, and I'll keep inviting people here because even though we're a community of writers, we are also people with different view points that should be respected no matter how they're expressed.
363 2015-06-26 03:14:34
Re: How are "new" posts calculated? (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
After you have read it, it disappears.
Thanks for explaining that. I wondered why some posts only showed up for a few minutes while others stayed forever!
364 2015-06-24 23:32:16
Re: fate/destiny in fiction (83 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
As most of you know I approach life from by belief in God though his Son Christ. Having said that, fate and predestined life is purely perspective. As Dags says, we can only know our fate by following our heart (conscience) and then looking back. If I had made different choices in life, I would physically be in a different place now. For instance I was destined to be very wealthy, I missed that only by a million or so. We have free will to do as we please. God would have us be guided by his Word and his Spirit. When we finally face him He will say "I knew that."
Mike
Mike,
I think that's what I'm trying to say. You have choices, and each choice changes your destiny/fate. It's a work in progress.
But, as I mentioned before, that doesn't make the best fantasy/syfy story. In fact in fiction your character's fate/destiny IS preordained by YOU. In my soon to be published novel, Ronan Island, in the original plot, Skip was supposed to die of a broken heart, lending credence to his wife's insistence that she was an Irish seal fairy. THEN the character Nichole came along and pleaded with me to let him live, she'd loved him since tenth grade. I held Skip's destiny in my hands, and chose to let him live.
365 2015-06-24 18:45:43
Re: I've left the building... (33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This is the other side. We could stay off topic and match articles on both sides of this issue or just let this boy rest in peace.
Right Wing Site World Net Daily Spreads Misinformation About Trayvon Martin
Reno Berkeley
A week has come and gone since George Zimmerman was acquitted in the shooting death of 17-year-old Trayvon Martin. A week is a long time by media standards, but due to the remarkable nature of the case, controversy about the verdict continues. Conservative pundits insist on perpetuating an image of a violent, drug addled young man who viciously attacked a dedicated neighborhood watch volunteer.
We will never know both sides of the story, as there were no witnesses to the altercation leading up to Martin's death. All we know is George Zimmerman's account, and also Rachel Jeantel's testimony about her phone conversation with her close friend just moments before the fatal gunshot.
And yet, the politics of character assassination continue, driven by rumor, speculation and an unwavering need to paint Zimmerman as a hero who made an honest mistake. So-called political doyens have even gone so far as to espouse completely unsupported claims regarding Martin's penchant for drug use.
One such pundit is Andrea Shea King of World Net Daily (WND). WND is a conservative news website that reports on such things as a 900-year-old prophecy of Jesus' return and how legalizing gay marriage will inevitably lead the way to government-sanctioned pedophilia.
Ms. King's report is no less preposterous. In her opinion piece, 'It Wasn't Just Skittles Trayvon Was Carrying,' she claims that Trayvon was a hardened drug user, whose addiction was so severe that he sustained liver damage. King even provides a helpful link to the autopsy report done by the medical examiner in Daytona Beach, Florida.
On the first page of the autopsy report, the cause of death is concluded to be a shotgun wound. Manner of death is listed as homicide and is signed by Dr. Shiping Bao, the doctor who testified during the trial. Upon researching the claim that Martin had a drug problem, I found no evidence of this in the autopsy report, although Ms. King claims it is there.
She references another conservative blog, The Conservative Treehouse, as being a reliable source for information about the victim's drug use. She writes:
"Among its reports, Trayvon Martin’s drug use, explaining how the Skittles and Arizona Watermelon Fruit Juice Cocktail drink he carried that night are ingredients that, when mixed with dextromethorphan (DXM) cough syrup, create “Lean”, a concocted high which can cause psychosis and aggression over the longer term. According to the autopsy report, Martin’s liver showed damage consistent with DXM abuse."
This last sentence I emphasized for a reason. It is because DXM ,or 'lean', is mentioned nowhere in the 20 pages of information on the Martin's autopsy report. On pages four and five, Bao lists the conditions in detail of the body organs, including the liver. On page six his reports lists the condition of the liver as having "no diagnostic abnormalities."
Yet King and the rest of her conservative compatriots would have the world believe that his liver was damaged because he was a drug addict. The only kernel of truth to this -- and it is a stretch -- is that a trace amount of THC was found in his system. The amount specifically was 400 times less than necessary to be intoxicated. No other drugs were found in his system. None.
Marijuana can stay in the system for up to three months, depending on the method and frequency of use. This gives one a completely different vision of the high school student. Because the amount found in his system was so minute, the last time he ingested it could have been weeks prior to the shooting.
The misinformation in King's story can only be described as egregious, for it appepears that she did not bother to read the Bao's autopsy report. If she did and reported Martin as having a drug problem, then she has committed libel against a boy who can no longer defend his own character.
The question, therefore, is why is Andrea Shea King willing to spread such gross misinformation? Are she and her conservative colleagues are incapable of detatching themselves from their preconceived biases and rationally analyze their own information? Perhaps she will come forward with an explanation as to why she is perpetuating the myth of the violent junkie.
Regardless of whether Trayvon Martin threw the first punch on that fateful night, he does not deserve to have his name continually dragged through the mud.
366 2015-06-24 12:12:26
Re: fate/destiny in fiction (83 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I don't believe in fate or destiny being preordained. I think you can only know you destiny/fate looking back over your life when approaching the end of it.
But doesn't make a good story and so I think this is your fictional tale and you are God in that regard and can create the world in whatever way that pleases you.
367 2015-06-24 05:54:07
Re: I've left the building... (33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Max, latest data condensed:
Medical marijuana is currently legal in 23 U.S. states and the District of Columbia. From state to state, marijuana is approved for a variety of conditions, including but not limited to epilepsy, arthritis, nausea, amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (ALS), multiple sclerosis, cancer, glaucoma, Crohn’s disease, chronic pain, and post traumatic stress disorder (PTSD).
“States recommend use for 20 to 30 conditions when many of those conditions have little or no evidence,” says Kevin P. Hill, MD, MHS, assistant professor of psychiatry at Harvard Medical School and director of the Substance Abuse Consultation Service at McLean Hospital in Belmont, Massachusetts. “There’s a tremendous need for evidence-based guidance on medical marijuana, and I can tell you from speaking both nationally and internationally that physicians and patients alike are clamoring for practical advice,” Hill, the author of Marijuana: The Unbiased Truth about the World’s Most Popular Weed, tells Yahoo Health.
A series of studies and articles published today in JAMA offer some answers to questions that have been on the minds of doctors, legislators, and the public: What conditions or symptoms can medical marijuana help relieve, and to what extent? What are the side effects, and how common and serious are they? And what does this mean for patients suffering from chronic conditions, and for the doctors treating them?
Research Supports Some Uses of Medical Marijuana
One of the studies released today is the most comprehensive analysis of research on medical uses for cannabinoids (the active chemical compounds in marijuana) to date. It included 79 different trials, collectively involving more than 6,400 participants. In addition, all of the studies included in the analysis were randomized controlled trials (the gold standard of research quality) that compared cannabinoids with a placebo (sugar pill), usual care, or no treatment.
It’s important to note that most of the studies in the analysis did not ask patients to inhale marijuana, which contains more than 60 different cannabinoids. Instead, participants took cannabinoid medications, which deliver one or two of the chemicals. Dronabinol, for example, is a synthetic form of THC (tetrahydrocannabinol) that has been approved by the U.S. Food and Drug Administration for chemotherapy-related nausea and vomiting and to help underweight AIDS patients gain weight.
“We only identified two studies on inhaled marijuana which might be a reflection of the legal status,” says study author Penny F. Whiting, PhD, senior research fellow at the University of Bristol in the UK. “In addition, it is easier to control the dose when studying synthetic drugs than to herbal plants that are administered by inhalation.”
Most of the research has been conducted on only a few conditions, with mixed results:
Nausea and vomiting from chemotherapy: Twenty-eight studies in total assessed the effects of cannabinoids on nausea and vomiting. Researchers were able to pool the data from three of them, and found that a significantly greater proportion of patients using cannabinoids experienced complete relief from their symptoms. Overall, 47 percent of participants taking cannabinoids said their nausea and vomiting went away, versus 20 percent of the placebo group.
“Although for some indications we had a relatively large number of studies, it was only possible to combine results for a small proportion of these for a small number of reported outcomes,” Whiting tells Yahoo Health. “This was because studies reported a wide variety of different outcomes, measured in different ways, and did not report the appropriate statistical results to allow us to include them in our meta-analysis.”
Chronic pain: Twenty-eight studies assessed cannabinoids for chronic pain due to conditions such as cancer, diabetes-related nerve damage, and fibromyalgia. Researchers were able to combine the data from eight of the trials, and found that cannabinoids significantly improved pain in a greater proportion of patients compared to a placebo. Participants also reported less subjective pain, on average, with the cannabinoids. The analysis concluded that there is “moderate-quality evidence” to support the use of cannabinoids for chronic pain.
Spasticity from multiple sclerosis or paraplegia: Fourteen studies examined the effects of cannabinoids on spasticity, a symptom of multiple sclerosis characterized by tightness and involuntary muscle movement. The analysis found that compared to a placebo, cannabinoids were associated with greater improvement in spasticity symptoms. However, the results were not statistically significant, meaning they could be due to chance.
Appetite stimulation in HIV/AIDS: Four studies looked at how cannabinoids affect weight gain in people with HIV/AIDS; all of them used the FDA-approved drug dronabinol (synthetic THC). The review concluded that there was some evidence that dronabinol is associated with increase in weight versus a placebo.
Limitations Highlight the Need for More Research
The review found little to no evidence for the use of cannabinoids in glaucoma, sleep disorders, Tourette syndrome, and social anxiety disorder. The studies on these conditions have all been small, Whiting explains. “This means that the studies may not have had enough power to detect differences between groups,” she says. “Further large, robust randomized studies should be conducted, especially in areas for which our comprehensive systematic review found no or very little evidence.”
Hill also makes the point that there are more than 60 different cannabinoids in marijuana, and research has studied only a handful of them. (Only two cannabinoid medications are approved by the FDA.) “There could be medical conditions for which a plant itself, with a combination of 60-plus cannabinoids, will outperform those two cannabinoids that we have,” he says.
“It’s very likely that we’re going to have new cannabinoids approved by the FDA within the next few years” for chronic pain, spasticity, and neuropathic pain, Hill says. “But right now because there are only two cannabinoids available, there is a place for medical marijuana.”
Side Effects Widespread, Some Serious
More than 80 percent of participants taking cannabinoids experienced one or more side effects, Whiting says. That’s compared to 62 percent in the control group. “Most of the side effects were mild,” such as dry mouth and drowsiness, Whiting says. About 6 percent of those in the cannabinoids group, however, reported serious side effects, such as vomiting or hallucination. (So did 4 percent of the people in the control group.)
“If you’re someone who is using marijuana daily over a long period of time, then we worry about addiction, cognitive difficulties, or worsening anxiety or depression. Those are the main concerns,” Hill says. “The reality is, if you’re going to take it regularly — as most people would if they were going to use it medicinally — then there is a significant side effect profile, and it becomes a risk-benefit discussion.”
Advice for Doctors and Patients
In a separate review released today in JAMA, Hill outlines some general guidelines for doctors and patients to follow regarding medical marijuana.
First, Hill says, patients considering using marijuana for a medical purpose should research reliable information and see their primary care doctor. “There’s a difference between talking with your doctor — somebody who knows you and has a history with you — as opposed to going to a specialty medical marijuana clinic,” he says. “I think unfortunately, in some of those clinics, the doctor-patient relationship doesn’t meet the same standard that it would in regular practice.”
Namely, he says, clinics tend not to offer the same level of follow-up care, which is important with any medication that has significant side effects.
The bottom line, Hill says, is that, “We need to do more of these trials. We need to make it easier to do these trials, and we need to do them so we can see whether or not there is evidence to support the use of medical marijuana for the conditions under which people have voted for it.”
Hope this helps.
Good luck, dags
368 2015-06-23 19:36:57
Re: How much truth do you put into your writing? (12 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
I've tried to put as much truth into BEDLAM - THE BEGINNING, and I'm uncertain how much should be footnoted. Any recommendations? What I've footnoted thus far I want to stand as it is without any embellishment into the story. Thanks.
The last time I read a work of fiction with footnotes was a special edition of A Portrait Of The Artist As A Young Man, in which archaic Irish words were footnoted and defined.
I don't know that a fictional thriller would need footnotes, I think listing your research resources at the end would be enough. Unless I am misunderstanding your question.
369 2015-06-21 03:37:43
Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST FINALISTS (2 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Good luck to all the finalist!
370 2015-06-20 03:51:36
Re: Story Alert (7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
We have to have a resume?
This is great news...Congratulations!
371 2015-06-18 22:48:08
Re: New Blog, Mentions Ann Walters (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks Janet, for that vote of confidence!
Dags, I just sent it. There was a time when procrastination was no part what so ever of my world. Now I'm just bogged in the quicksand of life (that is a sorry excuse for lazy)
No...it's not a sorry excuse, Mrs P. I know what's going on and I'm sorry, I was just kidding you. You could have taken your time, I just wanted to let you know where you would probably check back. Will look at your blog now...
dags
372 2015-06-18 20:51:53
Re: New Blog, Mentions Ann Walters (7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
MRS P---
PLEASE get me that picture without the text on it!!! I really want to get that new cover started!
dags
373 2015-06-15 19:43:39
Re: Critique groups (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I left you a comment! Good luck with Skeleton Run!
374 2015-06-12 17:17:32
Re: Strongest Start 2015 Winners (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations!
375 2015-06-05 19:14:35
Re: COP SHOP TALK (14 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
JP...The movie was a truncated version of the Broadway play and the actors came straight from the stage to reprise their roles in the film. The film itself was made during the age of psychoanalysis when people realized that most of their problems stemmed from childhood and the book really explores the nurture vs nature argument. Now we know that it can be either or and sometimes both nature and nurture. In the book Christine knows from the beginning something is not right about Rhoda and by the end she can hardly stand to be around her.
PS It is over-acted...its my guilty pleasure!!