951

(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Tonya, I just read your prologue! It rocks. I am sooooooooooooooooo on board.

952

(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Welcome, T!

I have loads of stuff on here and you're welcome to read any and all. If you want a really good historical fiction, read Rebecca Vaughn. Note that Rebecca is dyslexic and you will see that in her writing, but her stories are more than worth helping her find her transpositions and such.

953

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

First time I've ever had this issue, so I had to rant. Thanks for the encouragement, gang.

954

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Yeah, Don it is. I went back and looked at it all. It's saying the review was like 24 words. NOT! I went ahead and did the inline anyway b/c I needed those points to post.

955

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Are we now REQUIRED to do inline reviews to get points? The two reviews I did were regular. The material was so well done, I would have had to make nothing but comments. Love this story and will read it no matter, but I'd like to know if I MUST do inlines for points.

956

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I just read two chapters of Graymartin's "Founders", one chapter for 1.42 points and one for 1.27 points, but the points are not reflected in my point count. I started out with 1.07 and the amount has not changed. What gives? I needed those points to post a new chapter of my own.

957

(2 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

And when are we supposed to read these? Writing, reviewing here, having a family, and a fulltime job sort of takes a lot of time.

958

(9 replies, posted in Literary Fiction)

"Priest's mind outpaced his eyes because he saw a sky not simply blue, but blue with tints of pink; he saw clouds floating upward in shades of white, gold, and orange; he saw yellow and white sunlight flecks dancing between the waters swell as it moved in rising crests down river to lap on the shore.  He was exultant; he was alive, as if he had just become immortal.  He was euphoric.  The pounding of his heart from the exhaustion of having climbed 130 feet and the consumption of air by his heavy breathing simply lent rhythm and pitch to his joy."

If I read this in your novel, no matter how many antagonists or protagonists or POV's, I would be intrigued. The writing itself is poetic. Write from your heart. Present your craft and lovers of this kind of beauty will respond.

BTW. I know what a shipbuilding adze is! I have watched NCIS and Jethro building his boat. smile

959

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

A new wish. Why does there have to be a 60-second wait between comments even in different groups. It's rather annoying.

960

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Maybe elimination of posting to "groups" is a good idea. Post in Premium only. Forums (aka groups) should be for discussion. JMO, and I don't want to get off topic.

961

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I want a place to make announcements that everyone can see, regardless of group affiliations. And on the home page, I'd really like to see my books on Amazon cycle through.

962

(5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

6 EST?

963

(11 replies, posted in Literary Fiction)

I find that long chapters become tedious since I, personally, like to be able to finish a chapter and not stop in the middle if I have to leave the story for some reason. It's a personal preference, but many readers today cannot concentrate for an extended period of time.

I have to agree with Temple about chapters giving a story structure. That is why my chapters all have names. The chapter title indicates something about the chapter. When I outline, I use the title with a few sentences of summary about the chapter. I think 7,000 words is a long chapter. Most of mine run around 3,000. Yet, I do not paint myself into a corner by having a preset length. I write chapters as long as it takes to cover the intended matter. I have had to go back and divide long chapters to make the material easier to read in one sitting.

If you'd like to read work with extraordinarily long chapters but worth the time, check out Charles Brass's sci-fi Ux-Blood trilogy. It has tremendous plotting and characters that become real to the reader. Even so, at 20,000 words per chapter (4 chapters), my one criticism was the chapter length. I even mentioned this in my reviews on Amazon.

964

(9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

JP, after reading the answers, I figured you got more than I would have.

965

(19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Depends on the 12-year-old, but mostly no. I think there is an age limit of 13 as well.

966

(9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Yeah, all those things JP said.

967

(16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Not to worry, Tom. I haven't clicked it yet on half of mine. Mainly b/c I won't use that info for a while. When I do, then, I'll go back and hit applied. I don't tend to go back and rewrite individual chapters. I post all then go back and begin rewrites. Just my way of doing things.

968

(9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'm glad I haven't had any of these yet. Maybe because my work is only available to my connections and groups. Several folks I'd like to read and review haven't connected, so I can't leave them honest feedback. A couple of you seem to have gotten a person who types something in Word and then copies and pastes it in your reviews. Sorry guys/gals.

969

(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Can't help. Call Sol! I haven't experienced this, so I'd be as lost as you.

970

(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Janet, The movies would have to better than the books. They were awful.

Tom, I've seen some movies that were very well acted but the story or premise was appalling--Leaving Las Vegas was for me although Nicholas Cage did a great job. This one may well be well acted and directed, but the subject is what really leaves me agog. And the fact that many young women will flock to this and see it as okay to let yourself be abused.

971

(24 replies, posted in Literary Fiction)

Couldn't agree more, Garth, that long sentences and "flowery" writing might just be a lost art. I have had those reviews that tell me to lose words and such. I've come to the realization that I will read and value all comments, but not all comments help me with my craft. I look forward to reading something from you.

972

(6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Naa, Janet. Just eat another doughnut.

973

(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Okay, after reading that review--I REFUSE TO GO SEE THIS. And I will not subject my daughter to something so encouraging of staying in a pit of hell.

974

(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

I don't have any real interest in it. But my daughter & I MIGHT catch a matinee. I refuse to pay full price to see it. I hated the books.

975

(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Out of curiosity, who plans to go see 50 Shades of Grey on Valentine's Day?