751

(13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

janet reid wrote:
Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

I couldn't get further than 2 chapters (and I didn't pay a cent for the torture). Because really, Anna is the most pathetic FMC I've had ever seen,

Janet, I have to disagree. She's the second worst. Bella--HANDS DOWN--is worse.

I didn't read one word of Twilight, but somehow I can believe you on this one.

Speaking of Twilight though. I would've thought the uproar about stalking and abuse would've been way more than FSOG. I mean, Twilight is directly aimed at a younger audience ... Or is it simply a case of FSOG coming along and picking up the target instead, leaving Meyers to get away with it?

And gotcha, it's sometimes hard to pick up on sarcasm. I have no idea how she made so much money with her writing - after two chapters, I had to check how old the author was, because it came across to me as written by a teenager for teenagers (except, given the content, it wasn't).

James has one dialogue tag--murmured. If I had read that once more, I'd have puked. And Anna only knew how to move one way--clamber.
I read all 3 books. I will admit the second was much better, so maybe she learned something. Then, I read the third, and it was so predictable, I could have written it for her & better!

As for Twilight. Well, Edward is just a latent homosexual pedophile. Bella is a whiny bitch. The only character worth anything is Jacob, and then Meyer had to go have him "imprint" on the baby????"? WTF? Child molester. After that the Indians weren't actually werewolves, but chose that form and were really shape-shifters. And the sparkling in the sun vampires--Bram Stoker is turning over in his grave. And when I read in the first book about Bella driving a 1952 Chevy truck with seat belts, I threw the book across the room. If you're going to put in something of historical significance, get it right. First, Bella was such a f***ing klutz that she couldn't have driven a car with a column shift and a clutch--any and all 1950s truck. Then, since I happen to be an old car buff and go to lots of antique and vintage car shows, the first trucks that had seat belts were 1956 FORDS!!!! I only read the drivel because I wanted to be familiar with what my students were reading.

I'm PMing you some more disturbing erotica to read.

752

(13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

I couldn't get further than 2 chapters (and I didn't pay a cent for the torture). Because really, Anna is the most pathetic FMC I've had ever seen,

Janet, I have to disagree. She's the second worst. Bella--HANDS DOWN--is worse.

753

(13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

dagnee wrote:

I have read none of EL James and I'm not going to because I had a roommate who had a dominate relationship with a man. Only she wasn't the one being abused. She wouldn't beat her submissive, (a tiny balding older man, who shook whenever someone looked his way), but she would humiliate him verbally, never let him touch her and made him sleep on the floor at the end of her bed. AND he PAID her for this. I only saw him coming and going, but heard in great detail about their sessions from my roommate. She thought it was funny, I thought it was terribly sad.

I'm sure there's S and M relationships that are perfectly lovely, but I bet more of them are like the one I witnessed. I know you're going to say it was consensual, that the man must have been getting something out of it or he wouldn't have paid. Maybe you're right, but heroin makes you feel good and addicts think they're getting something out of the drug, too.

I don't support censorship because I feel the public will let an author know when they've gone too far, and I wouldn't want someone else to tell me what I could write. It sounds like to me that in the matter of Grey, the public is speaking loud and clear....

smile

WELL SAID, DAGNEE!

Ladies, rest assured my quip about her money-making is meant to be sarcastic and was aimed at the writing, not the content. The writing itself is very amateurish. Yet, she has made a fortune. I didn't even like the Twilight books that she used for inspiration.

I've read some other erotica by folks I met on here. I don't think one is here anymore and one won't be visiting this forum, I'm sure. The former is, perhaps, more abusive in content than James. However, it's at least well-written with a plot, no matter how dark the "romance." I shudder to use that word for the tripe. The latter was sent to me with the request to read the "trash for cash" book and give my opinion. I did: Stick to writing your fantasy and sci-fi. I found nothing remotely "erotic" about this. It's simply vulgar and crude and completely degrading to women.

Take note that the first was written by a woman and the second by a man under a woman's pen name and was about a person forced into being a sex slave--literally sold--nothing consensual about it.

I for one, cannot imagine letting my sex partner hit me with anything. Maybe a tie-up with silk scarves IF we could take turns. But that would be where I draw the line. I must wonder about both individual's self-esteem in these "mutual" relationships.

Give me a good old-fashioned romance. I can even go to "fade to black" and let my imagination do the rest. I don't need a play-by-play. I don't need the crude words or onomatopoeia for the sounds heard during the act. Romance should be about lifting your partner up and making him/her feel like they are the most special person alive.

754

(13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Janet! I laughed my ass off about some of those questions. The first book is absolutely awful. Hey! She's a multi-millionaire now.

755

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Dirk, you have a looooooong explanation in a PM.

756

(4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Mike, 2-3 of yours made the top 10. Take a small bow.

757

(3 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

I just added you to my exhausting (Yes, not exhaustive) list.

758

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I think I've got it figured out. Publisher sent to B & N before telling me. The other thing is extended distribution in UK AND I just got a nice little deposit to my account.

Now, I need to know how to check sales with these two.

759

(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Writer friends, I have a question. My books are for sale on Amazon. Tonight I found out they are also for sale on B & N and AbeBooks.com (Out of the UK). Question--I have not submitted my books to these two entities. How do I ensure I am getting royalties?????

760

(260 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

JP, the option to upgrade when the trial is up. My renewal was supposed to be 6/3. Sol said I have another month, so we'll see if I can upgrade Friday.

761

(9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

I remember one thing about my neighbor but this was later. He was drafted at 18 b/c he didn't go to college.

762

(9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Not me, for sure. I bet some of our guys can though! Hey! John Deboer, John Byram, Mike Robertson, R. M. Keegan, help the lady out.

763

(13 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Lupus knitted his brow and ground his teeth. Windsor suppressed the urge to smile at causing him to bristle over the use of his first name.

No POV slip (But you know what I think about POV) b/c Windsor could see his physical reaction AND you show the reader his reaction.

764

(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Nice catch Spargo. I've just finished a 100-word piece. I'll wait to see what changes.

765

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

BTW, tweeted & shared on FB.

766

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Very nice. Congrats.

767

(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Wow! This has degenerated into a political stew pot. I happen to agree with Johnnie. I also think we should get over all the BS about the Confederate flag, I also dare anyone to try to take my .357. I also think Obamacare is a farce of the highest magnitude. This started out as an encouragement to max to seek whatever means he needs for his ailment. Why has it spiraled into the cesspool of politics?

768

(83 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I think fate/destiny is a staple of sci-fi and fantasy. So are prophecies and quests.

I agree with dagnee.

770

(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

It's not for regular Kindle, just lending and unlimited. I don't think I've earned a penny from lending and unlimited. It's like they checked them out of the library. This way, maybe, I'll get money for that. I've gotten paid every month for regular downloads.

771

(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

http://www.theatlantic.com/business/arc … ng/396269/

772

(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

What an excellent essay, max! Now copy and paste in essay form for review.

773

(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I have no idea where to post announcements of any kind anymore, max. Old Forums is where I posted a couple of announcements--probably unseen. That's what's missing--an announcement forum.   And F! the federal crime thing. If you don't transport it back, I guess you'll be okay. I hope it helps what ails you.

774

(3 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

1.    Jumper--Could be one of three things. A person threatening to jump off a tall building; a bail jumper; or something like coveralls.
2.    Pissed--angry or urinated.
3.    Trainers--sneakers
4.    Pudding--dessert or a soft person
5.    Kerb--maybe it's a curb?
6.    Crisps--potato chips
7.    Take-away--to-go food at a restaurant
8.    Estate car--a mini-van?
9.    Skivvies--underwear
10.    Biscuit--cookie

I'm in the U.S.

Add a few more to dagnee's list:

lift-elevator
flat-apartment
mate/chap-friend
wanker-jerk
arse-butt

775

(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Congrats!