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(60 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

She stared into nothingness, mind numbed by the effects of absinthe, but it was better than the alternative.

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(0 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

https://www.pinterest.com/pin/532761830 … edium=2034

Short and to the point with a brief synopsis. Add what makes you the person to write this story. You might want to end with a "From what I've read about you, I think we would be a perfect fit..." kind of flattery, but the whole thing should take one page, single spaced, 12 point font, in either Times New Roman or Ariel, one-inch margins. If it's an online query, print it out to see it it would be this.

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(8 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Ava Bond wrote:
MrsPiddles wrote:

A woman in a small town in East Texas found out that her husband was having an affair - while working out of town. Feeling betrayed and humiliated, she decided to leave him, but unsure of her future, she confided in a few of her friends. One day the constable knocked on her door. She invited him in for a glass of iced tea, but he said it was an official visit. He said "I've heard talk that you were thinking of leaving Billy. You know, stupid people can come up missing around here." Then he rocked back on his heels and stroked the .44 strapped to his side - and gazed across the highway at the Davy Crockett National Forest.

How do you make a novel out of what really did happen? To me?


Oh god. But did he mean the husband could go missing, or you? Husband surely? What a scary offer but I have a similar story.

For me, there wasn't a constable nor a knight in shining armour, it was a thug on a shiny motorcycle, the member of an infamous gang. A bearded scary creature twice my age. O_o No story there! But it was nice he was offering his service regarding a man that had hurt me. Thanks but no thanks.

It was however strangely comforting having someone big scary and strong telling me he got my back but... Well... No.

Yeah, my little Vice Lord would have taken out my ex in a heartbeat. I also had several students ask if I wanted them to jump him. Such a tempting offer....

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(186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

jack the knife wrote:

Although "snuck" is now an accepted alternative to "sneaked," I'm old school and won't use it (in non-dialogue writing, anyway). Same goes for "alright" instead of "all right." Thanks for the link. Can you think of other examples of previously unacceptable words that have wormed their way into the lexicon?

Agree 100%

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(59 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Welcome back, Rach.

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(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Yes, put the query info somewhere. There are those who need it on here. I wish I could hook you up with my friend Bill Wilson. He illustrates his own work.

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

VV, who is your biography about?

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(6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

#5 might have more than one answer since Bruce's character kidnaps the cabbie. I know I know the other one though and it's just at the edge of my memory.

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(6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

5    Bruce Willis, Collateral
6    Matt Damon, The Talented Mr. Ripley??
9    Danny Glover, Switchback??

Sometimes I just don't get the cryptic plot lines. I guess I'm dense.

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(6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Let me think on these at home. I'm about to leave my office & I've only thought of the first three.

1.    Robin Williams, One Hour Photo
2.    Bruce Willis, The Jackal
3.    Denzel Washington, Training Day

I'm sure I can get some more. At least I'm better than last time. smile

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I could do this, but I think you'll severely limit your contestants. A.T., I suggest you start a group for erotica and offer this contest.

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(8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I think you've found the place to be. Welcome!

I haven't read all of it yet, but I'm back in the saddle. Give me a little time & I'll let you know.

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(5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Stieg Larsson.

I probably won't any of the others even with hints.

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(5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Well, I know 11--The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo.

Warning--Black Rose is not the way to go. Talk to ceridwen on here.

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(0 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Last wedding of the year. View the bride & groom dancing:

https://l.facebook.com/l.php?u=https%3A … =aAQGIUh-c

And then watch me boogie with my kid.

https://www.facebook.com/janet.taylorpe … mp;theater

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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

TY. Can't wait til you post the same message!!!!

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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

https://www.amazon.com/Wilted-Magnolias … +magnolias

Print version now up!

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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

https://www.amazon.com/Wilted-Magnolias … ylor-perry

It's live! At least for Kindle. If you'd like a print copy, shoot me a check at Janet Taylor-Perry, P O Box 1344, Ridgeland, MS 39158. $18 US. I'll sign it and send it back. I'll pay shipping.

https://www.facebook.com/janet.taylorperry
Sol, as soon as it's live for print on Amazon, I'll send you the info to get it up on our published books.

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(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Good idea, Norm!

Not having seen each other in sixteen years, sparks fly immediately when April Chastain misrepresents herself and returns to her hometown of Magnolia Blossom, Mississippi, to work for Russell Dalton, a man she has adored since childhood. They find themselves caught up in a web of romance, mystery, and danger. 

Left for dead at the age of six, April was miraculously spared by a man-size teddy bear, a gift from Russell. As clues about the murder of April's parents trickle to light, evidence surfaces that points to trusted friends as possible murders. Several other deaths and a high number of cancer patients are linked to suspected illegal dumping of toxic, water-soluble cadmium. 

Through it all, the one constant is an inanimate teddy bear, which holds a secret. The world of investigative reporting proves to be a roller coaster of intrigue, secrets, and tumultuous relationships in Wilted Magnolias.

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(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Well, Tolkien's 16 years was a trilogy.

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Wilted Magnolias will be out next Saturday. Anybody who read it here and would like a signed copy, order directly from me at janettaylorperry@gmail.com. You can drop me a check to Janet Taylor-Perry, P.O. Box 1344, Ridgeland, MS  39158. I'll sign it and send it back to you. I'll pay shipping. Cost is $18. Just get me a shipping address. It will also be on Kindle, if you'd rather have the electronic version.

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Glad I never published with them. I can think of several others that need to be investigated.