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William Short wrote:
jack the knife wrote:

. My question to you - who admits being a reader, not a writer - why do you pony up the yearly fee just to read WIPs, some of which will never be completed? Your post puzzled me, so I felt compelled to respond. Besides you, there have been a few, I guess, though I can only remember one - Porgy - who only read and reviewed and didn't post. So why do you do it, William? This inquiring mind wants to know.


To more concisely answer the direct questions you pose.

Why does an audience watch a band perform?  Is the drummer baffled, wondering why the audience are not all at home in their garages playing the drums themselves?

Is the author whose novel I purchased in the bookstore on Saturday wondering why the hell do all these thousands of readers buy my book rather than write one themselves?

I am an avid reader. I’ve read everything classic, contemporary and commercial on every ‘top ten’ ‘top fifty’ and ‘top one hundred’ books you should read list, which I’ve ever read.

I don’t think that a writer should be surprised to discover that readers exist and are out there eager to consume good writing.

I think that several writers here on tNBW need to learn how to write for a reader rather than for another writer.

My bad, William. I assumed - wrongly - that you were a paying member.

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Well, William, you've been a member a year longer than I. I don't know if you ever read any of my novels posted here, but I don't remember receiving a review from you. We're talking 10 years, though, so perhaps I'm wrong, and you may be right about us not knowing how much you have staked us out. My question to you - who admits being a reader, not a writer - why do you pony up the yearly fee just to read WIPs, some of which will never be completed? Your post puzzled me, so I felt compelled to respond. Besides you, there have been a few, I guess, though I can only remember one - Porgy - who only read and reviewed and didn't post. So why do you do it, William? This inquiring mind wants to know.

Jeez, did he pay his admission fee?

Liberty has constraints. Your freedom to throw your fist out stops when it meets my face. You can't dump hazardous wastes into water supplies. You can't drive without seat belts or ride a Harley without a helmet without incurring a penalty. We live in a society, where the rights of all have to be considered. You can buy weapons, but not buy machine guns. Is it such a stretch that buying other weapons of mass destruction should be banned? For the public good? The wording of the Second Amendment can be debated until the cows come home, but the precedent (SCOTUS) has been established that one does not have a Constitutional right to have military-type people-killers. That mass -shooting incidents are a price we pay for "liberty" (Bill O'Reilly) is absurd. We, as a society, have established rules and regulations  in other areas of our contract with each other. Why gun ownership should have no constraints, as opposed to any other aspect of our compact as a civilization, defies logic.

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JeeZ! I can't answer any of them at first blush. And Googling it wouldn't be fair. I thought I knew all of Juliette Lewis's and Goldie Hawn's films, but I guess I didn't.

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Thanks, everyone. It came as a surprise. I thought the judging was long over. But it made my day, regardless of how it might fare in the subsequent rounds.

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Thanks, C.J.!

I just got notified I made the Short List for the award in the thriller category for When the Reaper Comes. Well, it's not a very short list, but still. smile

https://www.chantireviews.com/2018/02/0 … r-fiction/

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Hey, we're not dealing with teenagers here. Talk about spoon-feeding. If newbies don't get how to review and how to respond to reviews, they don't belong here. Sorry for being blunt, but that's the way I see it. We're not here to mollycoddle neophytes, but to suggest how they might improve their writing. The model of the site has already been made clear to all those who are considering joining. So Sol, if you want to add some small print and point to this thread, make sure this post is also included.

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To each his own. My contacts in FB will only know about my books from what I post there, and it has resulted in sales. I don't know of any sales resulting from my Twitter posts, but I still tweet-market occasionally.

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I've got FB friends who don't do Twitter, so, yeah, I use FB for book marketing. And to participate in my publisher's active author group.

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Thanks, Lynn. I'm certainly not a celebrity, with long lines of people waiting to get a signed copy of my book in a B&N in downtown Manhattan or D.C. I've done book-signings but, to tell you the truth, I've found them to be a waste of time. They are public relations events for celebrities, but do almost nothing for us wannabes, except for the few bucks made on sales at these events, emphasis on "few." So I focus on social media now for marketing. Much more bang for the buck.

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Thanks, Randy, Marilyn. Now that the writing, and the editing, and the cover art decision is over, it's time for my favorite part (not!): the marketing. (Sigh)

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It's only been a few hours since the book went live. Reviews don't come falling from trees. You have to go get them. Hence, my plea to TNBW peeps. Then it's on to Phase 2. Reviews are important to show that folks not only read the book but were stimulated enough by it (one way or another) to take the time to evaluate it publicly.

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The Telltale Tattoo is now live on Amazon! Available during launch week for $.99. I'll leave it up on site for two more days before I dismantle it. Originally, I was going to have the tattoo as the cover, but the more I thought about it, the more I was concerned it would make potential readers think it was in the horror genre! So I chose a Vietnam landscape instead. And it was more conducive, formatting-wise, to get the title and my name in without blocking the image. As yet, no one has left a review on Amazon. A subtle hint to those who have already read the story on TNBW. smile  https://www.amazon.com/dp/B079G57H6H

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Booker has omitted at least one basic plot that's  prevalent in popular novels/films: Revenge. Hero has been terribly wronged - family murdered, framed for a crime, etc. and must bring the perpetrator to justice.  Variation: hero must right a wrong committed on another party or parties.

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Sorry to hear about that, Bill. Follow the doctor's orders so you can get back in stride again. I agree that doling out computer time in separate sittings is a good idea - one I should follow!

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Welcome!

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If we're going to be libertarian here, sure, anyone can form any group and hope to attract members to that group. Sol wants to create a new group - fine. Members can join it. But what the practical benefit that would be escapes me. I created the Thriller, Mystery, Suspense group, but I didn't intend for members who joined it to post only in that group. It was meant only for a place for like-minded readers/writers to go for discussions or whatever. As it turned out, the only thing I've seen coming out of these myriad groups I'm associated with is the occasional quiz. Perhaps I should be more active administering my group (and if anyone wants to take it over, let me know), but my focus has been posting and reviewing in the Premium group, where the action was and (so far) is. I'm not privy to all the other groups' activities, but I'm not aware of any that have postings only to that group. That would kind of defeat the purpose of this site, IMO. Sol, though, seems to want postings for like-minded writers confined to this new group and for like-minded reviewers to seek those postings out. I guess we could change the mindset of the site and have all the subgroups serve as a minor league, as it were, where genre postings would first go to the applicable group before advancing, if warranted, to the majors (Premium). I don't know, this edict from on high has a "who cares" quality to it unless Sol is pursuing a radical change in the TNBW model, and this is the first step.

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I've read all the posts on this subject so far and, sorry, Sol, but I don't see the need for this shred group. If an author can't take the heat of unfavorable critiques, they can leave. If reviewers are mean-spirited and vitriolic, they can be removed from the site. And we already have a Fight Club group for members who like to duke it out. As far as I know, the Premium Group does not require "niceties" and "encouragement" from reviewers, though most reviewers will try to find something positive in their critiques. They chose to review it after all when they could have passed on it. Finally, I wouldn't want the Premium Group to get the reputation of the place where reviews aren't "honest."

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Great list. I've never used any of those in my books but am considering inserting "callipygian" when the opportunity arises. smile

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Congratulations, Janet, and to the other TNBW writers who made it into the top ten in their categories. And though there were only three entrants in the Writers' Workshop category, TNBW came in first. Sol - a suggestion: You can use the first-place medallion in your advertising. I certainly used mine when promoting my book during the last year. Doesn't hurt! smile

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Yeah, it's amazing what those twenty years of American history have done for the culture.

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Hold on, there, Janet. The final tallies have not been announced. Though I doubt the positions of you and TNBW will change, we have to wait for the announcement. Last year, it took at least two days to announce the winners.

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Whew! It sounded like TNBW was being disbanded, and I wondered how I missed it. It wasn't trending on Twitter.