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JP - BTW, Rope predated Compulsion. Okay, here's the answer to my trivia question: Tom Noonan played the Tooth Fairy in Manhunter (not Ralph Fiennes, JP). A different Tommy Noonan was in movies starring Marilyn Monroe, Mamie Van Doren, and Jayne Mansfield.

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I don't see a huge problem here. You review, expecting feedback; when you don't get it, you move on and forget about that author. No big deal. Coercion is not the answer, in my view.

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Good one, Dags. I think you're right.

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Definitely #!. When you combine such phrases, the "normal" comma rules don't apply, IMO. Commas create speed bumps and, when this is not the desired effect, should be uses sparingly.

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Mike, that was Robert Bloch. Okay, I've got a trivia question related to JP's quiz: Which actor with the same name as one of the answers in the quiz seemed to make a career out of playing in movies with buxom blondes?

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!. Psycho  Norman Bates  Anthony Perkins
2. Night of the Hunter  Reverend Harry Powell  Robert Mitchum
3. Death Wish  Paul Kersey  Charles Bronson
4. Rope  Brandon Shaw & Philip Morgan  John Dall & Farley Granger
5. No country for Old Men  Anton Chigurth  Javier Bardem
7. American Psycho  Patrick Bateman  Christian Bale
9. Manhunter (from the book, The Red Dragon)  Francis Dolarhyde  Thomas Noonan

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Since when do hedge fund managers struggle? smile But seriously, how about, 'She and her husband Zeke, a struggling hedge fund manager, considered the message a prank and decided to ignore it.'

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Well, he'd be charged with murder, of course. The degree would depend on his confession, the backstory gleaned by the detectives, the prominence of the victim, as well as the political aspirations of the DA. I'm not a lawyer, and I don't play one on TV, but I've seen a lot of legal thrillers, if that counts. smile

I'm rooting for you, Bill!

My novel Skeleton Run made it to #2 on the Amazon rankings for the genre. The criterion used to be a ranking in the top 100 on Amazon qualified one to claim Amazon Bestseller. If that's changed, I'm unaware of it. Although the number of books sold pales in comparison to that required to be a NYT or a USA Today bestseller, it is a venue where indie/ small-press authors can attain such ranking by selling a few thousand books. Anyway, I've put "An Amazon bestseller" before the summary of the book on my Amazon author page. As of yet I have not received an e-mail from Amazon questioning this.

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Randy, the "Look inside" feature of the book on Amazon doesn't seem to be working. Might check that out.

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Congratulations, Randy. A job well done!

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Congrats, Janet! And thanks for the plug! smile

I've heard that's the case.

Dill Carver wrote:
jack the knife wrote:

Anyone who has read Child's Jack Reacher books knows he uses "was" A LOT! Sometimes 5 or 6 times in one paragraph. Somehow he managed to get past the agent, publisher, and editor hurdles with his writing style.

I think that maybe his writing style matches the reading style of his readers. Within their daily language they probably use the word 'was' as readily, often and in the same places as it is written within the prose they are reading.

You probably have a point regarding common dialogue, but narrative, IMO, is a different matter. Anyway, my above observation was meant to point out that Child gets away with the "rules." And he's hardly the only bestselling author to do so. It would be interesting to see how their first-time manuscripts were received if they wrote then (before becoming famous) the way they write now. In other words, did they pay attention to the so-called writing axioms in order to get their feet in the door?

Anyone who has read Child's Jack Reacher books knows he uses "was" A LOT! Sometimes 5 or 6 times in one paragraph. Somehow he managed to get past the agent, publisher, and editor hurdles with his writing style.

Smelling salts applied. "Which" was correct in that sentence. smile Thanks for sharing your experience. I've had similar axioms thrown my way as well over the years.

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You had the best cover, Janet. I voted for you!  Jack

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Thanks for your support, Randy!

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The final results have just been published.
My Thriller novel, When the Reaper Comes, came in 1st! Another novel of mine published earlier in the year came in 8th, which surprised me, since I wasn't promoting it. And I came in 8th for Authors.

Janet Taylor-Perry also won awards: Wilted Magnolias came in 6th for Mystery novels, and King Satin's Realm finished in 6th place for Novels, other. And she came in 7th for Authors!

Alas, TNBW didn't win for Writers' Workshop, but it did finish 2nd.

Thanks to all who voted for me. It was a neck-and-neck campaign all the way through, and last-day votes were responsible for putting me over the top. And a special thank-you to JTP who, along with promoting her own works, took the time to shout out for me and TNBW.

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Remember, you can vote once per category for each e-mail address you have.

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Only two days to go!

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TNBW is down to second place for Writers' Workshop. As is my Thriller novel, When the Reaper Comes. Janet Taylor-Perry's novel, King Satin's Realm (Novels, other), is down to 5th, and her novel, Wilted Magnolias (Mystery novels), sits in 3rd place. Only four more days to go. Support your workshop and its authors. http://critters.org/predpoll/ Only a few votes can make the difference.

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And FYI, TNBW is still in first place.

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Thanks, Sol!