I agree that merely donating points can become problematic. That's why I suggested the alternative. That way it's not dependent on an exchange- it's just rewarding an author when things are done the normal way here. For authors like me, some of my posts require over twenty credits. I can hardly keep credits in my account. The reward for reviewing some of my posts are substantial sometimes. I rarely see other postings with such substantial credit rewards for the time and effort involved in a review (and people who get my reviews know I do spend time on them). I just think writing material that attracts a good core of reviewers should reward the author in some small way. Particular authors like me who can't hardly keep a credit in my bank. (How the hell do so many of you accumulate hundreds of credits? How many reviews do you do an hour?)

Perhaps for novel publishings, if a reviewer reviews each submission, then maybe there can be an exchange perhaps. A reward for 'sticking through it all'. I'd be happy to go for something like that. Of course, I ain't got doodly in my credit bank, so rewards from me might be slow in being doled out.

Also, anyone know of a way to run a search on posts using the credit reward? If not, then, Sol, is there a way to make the credit reward for a review visible in the list of material for review? That way those of us pressed for time can find credit-rich posts? It still takes time and attention to review those, of course, but sometimes I'm just 1.5 credits from publishing and need just one more review to get that. Be nice to see at a glance possible candidates, rather than having to click on the item to check. I'd rather do one 1.5 credit review, than two .8 reviews, when I'm pressed for time.

Hey, Sol!

We were able to buy credits with the previous site. Has that been done did away with?

Also, regarding Norm's comment above, there might be another way to reward authors who attract reviews through their brilliant writing. What if, for every review, they get a percentage of their credits back? This is regarding the credits it takes to publish. Say, each review garners the author a refund 10%. Thus, ten reviews and the author recoups the cost of posting. I hardly ever see ten reviews on my own stuff, but even a little back in my account would help tremendously (for me, anyway; I can hardly keep a credit in my account, but as a result some of my posts earn a reviewer over 5 credits!). And this way the author earns the credits, so it's all on him or her. Unless the author has a large following, this would still require reviews to get credits to post, preserving the site's original idea. And of course you can always limit the amount of credits back to the cost of publishing.

Just a thought.

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Are your neighbors hacking into your wireless network?

Shoot! I start my latest in the middle of a card game. Of course, I have a big-ass Prologue before that, to set the stage. But... right in the middle of a card game. And as kdot suggests, a lot of the backstory is told in slow moments through character's recollections, or in conversation between characters (when the moment is right for such backstory, of course). And did I mention... in the middle of a card game?

Like I said, there's always one... but in a 9500 word story, just one ain't not so bad!

I use WordPerfect (X8 user here) religiously and it does the same, but only when you run a grammar check with Grammatik, which I never do, to be honest. I like the typo indicator, though. Too bad neither word processor doesn't notify you of words you done forgot to put in! Especially those little two-letter bastards! Argh!

Hello!

Working on a new short story. The opening is kind of weak. What I have dives right into the story; still, it could be more gooder. That lack of up-front, gripping tension kinda stalled my writing. (That and a severe case of procrastinitis, which is an infection of the procrastination gland, in case you ain't not know that.)

I work overnights as a CT/MRI technologist. While working, I was tossing around ideas for a revised opening. I actually thought of additional front material (only a few paragraphs, including some dialogue) that would serve just fine--better than fine, actually. It rocked! It was like one of those BOOM! moments in your mind.  I was with a patient at the time and couldn't take the seconds necessary to jot my idea down. While bringing the patient back to the ER, a nurse asked me something, then I had to stop and do something else, then finish the patient's CT computer work, then another patient came up, and of course the phone was blowing up, and... Well, sadly, my glimmer of greatness was gone. I had remnants, but not that rockin' original flow that just spurted orgasmic-like from the deep hardness of my mind. (Some could argue it musta not been all that great then, but trust me, it was one of those 'Holy crap, did I just think of that? I, a mere mortal?' moments.)

Anyway, this ain't not the first time for me to lose something like that. I was wondering how many of my fellow scribes here have suffered the same affliction. I like to think of it as Lostis Idealitis, or maybe Chancus Blownuppus. Anyone else come down with a case?

I have read this and I enjoyed it. I have read the second novel in the trilogy, and enjoyed that one as well. For those of you who have been with the site for a while, you may recognize this as having been workshopped here. It turned out rather well.

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Marketing? What's that? Ha ha ha.

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Hello.

I like the idea of having contests. I haven't entered any myself recently, due to other writing projects, but the variety is always fun to see.

I was wondering about the prizes, though. While cash is nice, would it be possible for the reward to be credits? I don't know how others feel about it, and cash is always nice, of course. But rewarding credits wouldn't cost the site anything, would allow for more generous prizes, and for people like me, amassing credits with a well-written contest entry would be a far more rewarding... er, well, reward, were I to win or place. But that's just me.

Of course, I think one could always use the cash to buy credits- if that's still an option.

Anyone else has thoughts?

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Hello.

Like the red alert gif. From Star Trek 2: The Wrath of Khan, if I'm not mistaken.

Ain't getting reviews a fun thing? Especially when they're good reviews! Good jobs.

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A little off topic, but how many video streams are there? If the watcher is watching him walk toward the enemy blasting one after the other, I picture a video stream behind him somewhat. But if his eyes are bulging, there has to be a stream from ahead of him as he walks toward the enemy, sans arm. If that's the case, why so many video cameras in the corridor? How often does someone on the bridge have to keep an eye on the corridor outside the bridge? Or are these those floating video stream drone things always hovering about? Ha ha ha!

I tried to post the revised Prologue to my novel. I made sure it was version 5, as opposed to version 3. The new Prologue had about 2K more words, so it could definitely not be confused with ver3. However, when I published it and checked the link to the posting on the Home page, it linked to version 3. I could not fix it, so I just made version 3 unavailable. So, the version 5 (most recent) Prologue is the only one available for reviewers.

I think this bug is something specific to the Prologue, or chapter 0. Just putting this out there so people make sure the revised chapter being posted is linked correctly on the Home page. I haven't heard of anyone else having an issue similar to this, so it may just be me. Or my little Prologue.

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Hey!

I actually read that book recently and thought it worth the read. Another one I've read once or twice is one by Donald Maas about the Breakthrough Novel.

Funny thing about the Secrets of Story book: When I ordered it from Writer's Digest Books, I actually thought it was titled: The Story of Story. I was expecting something of a historical book about how story telling evolved over the years. Ha! Still thought the purchase worthwhile.

I am reading one called Just Write! right now. That one is pretty good, too.

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I type everything in WordPerfect X8 on a Windows 7 operating system. When it comes time to post, I open Word 07, cut 'n paste, then cut 'n paste from Word into the site here. This preserves all of my formatting, including hard returns and spaces and italics. The only thing I correct are centering the section break asterisks.

When I try to cut 'n paste from WordPerfect, I lose a lot of the formatting. That leads me to believe it's the styles thing in Word that this site works with. But I refuse to use Word as my main word processor since it doesn't have Reveal Codes, which gives WordPerfect users absolute control over their documents (among other numerous reasons).

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She's feeling a little blue. So, blue and green make... white!

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And a few years later, after the debacle at the accounting office, Lake-Ellen thought she might have been better off sitting beneath the Heart of the Forest as that storm approached after all.

Vern-

The squirrel attempted a divide by zero. Crash! Burn!

Happens every time.

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Hey, Norm d'Plume.

I think I told you already, but I do have plans for another story involving Lake-Ellen, this one sort of a prequel before the events of Dew Drops (or In Possession of N-ergy, if you're keeping track). I want to write about her two seasons as an apprentice to Radishal-Wren. I think it'll only be about novella length. But I think it should be pretty fun to write.

Also, I think I have a cool idea for a short story set sixty or seventy years after Dew Drops. It won't involve Lake-Ellen or the characters here, but I mention them tangentially. Anyone who knows this story will recognize the reference. Those that do not, though, won't miss out on anything.

But both are for tomorrow. Right now, my stock of credits is utterly depleted (0.15 left after publishing) so I got that to work on before I hammer out chapter 28. And a short Epilogue to tie things up. Just wish it hadn't taken so darn long to get this first draft done did up.

Thank you for reading. I appreciate your comments.

seabrass

Hey there!

In case anyone was wondering-and I wasn't until this evening-it costs 27.30 credits to publish an 8800 word post. Ask me how I know.

A review is worth 5.46 credits. 5.46? Yes, that's not a typo- 5.46 credits! You can scoop them up even with a fifty-word regular review. Ka-ching!

I'm glad this new site allows posts of such length. I didn't intend for the chapter to get so long, but a lot had to happen. I guess it took that many words. I did try to cleave some stuff out, keep things trim and tight. But everything there does have a purpose. So... well, it's long. Hopefully those who give it a go will find it worth the read. It's the second-to-last chapter of my first draft, in case anyone is wondering. I don't think the final chapter will be nearly as long. But it should be just a fun to write!

Thanks!

seabrass

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To those who've read chapter 15 already, I added a few paragraphs on the end. Nothing much, just some material I intended to include originally. But I thought I would let those who've read it know.

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No problem. Take your time.

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Why, yes! As a matter of fact, chapter 15 is up as well! Hope you like!

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Hello. Currently about halfway (or close to it) on my new fantasy novel. It's about a young woman who may or may not be possessed by a devil. It's slower than my previous works, but I feel it's coming along pretty cool. The ending will ramp up a bit, and I think will be worth the read.