Topic: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

In planning my next book, I have a character named Connor whose primary character trait is that he's supposed to be all good all the time. Connor may be Christ returned in the flesh and, until now, I had envisioned him as an angelic figure who doesn't sin. It's a Christian story, so I may have some leeway about creating a character who is sin free. The idea is that he is being pursued by the Antichrist, and there will be plenty of rabid dogs and suicidal crows chasing him. I should add that he will be traveling the Holy Land, where the Church hopes that he'll be able to jog his memory of his past life, assuming he had one. While there, he's able to see auras of Jesus in places where He went. What's missing is a character arc. While he will accomplish a few miracles I'm not sure he's compelling enough.

Suggestions?

Thanks
Dirk

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

This is going to be tricky. Normally compelling characters had flaws. How do you write a compelling flawless character?

First thing that comes to mind is he could be flawed at close relationships despite (or because of) being sinless. For example, maybe there's a prominent woman in his life that he can't bring himself to marry because he sees himself falling the way of lust of the flesh. Or he's just cool to her because he can't think on those levels and we see her increasing frustration with this until she gives up and leaves and he is left with regrets.

Could go the self-doubt route that seems baked into the central story

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

His "flaw" could be that he doesn't know who he is and is letting the church push him toward something he isn't sure of. He could also have flashbacks of memories of doing something terrible which he can't remember outright. You might also consider that stories outside the Bible which depict Jesus doing some pretty flawed stuff as a child. Your character could also have childlike outbursts of anger which he controls just in time to prevent a major "sin" or such. Or someone else could enter the picture and know things which others don't know about the character, even the character himself. And as Ann pointed out, the façade of perfection will be seen as a flaw by many; perhaps he flaunts it. Lots of angles. Good luck. Take care. Vern

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How are you setting up the story? Are there other main characters who are flawed? I went to a Michael Hauge workshop this summer and he talked about the movie Hitch - don't know if you've seen it. He said the character Albert didn't have a character arc as he was already living his essence and was already courageous. Everyone else had a character arc, but he didn't. He named some other movies where that was also the case. Of course, for the life of me I cannot remember them but I do remember he said some action movies/books didn't have protagonists with character arcs. Could your guy be the foil who changes everyone around him rather than have his own character arc??

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If he's all good, could his flaw be that he tries to please everyone? By trying to appear as everyone's version of a 'good guy', could he hurt others inadvertently until he figures out what 'good' means to himself? Eg he wants to help a struggling village so performs a miracle and provides them with lots of food, and only realises afterwards he put the farmers and fishermen out of business? By the end of the story hell have figured out that being all good doesn't mean making everyone happy.

6 (edited by Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons 2018-07-29 16:52:34)

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Dirk, although you may bristle at my suggestion, use Jesus as a role model.  Yes, Catholics think that he was perfect, but consider the portrait in the Gospels:  he was frequently on the run from the law, he, in a fit of anger, withered a fig tree because he wanted figs and they were out of season.  When awakened from a long deserved sleep by thunder, he railed at the storm until his apostles were "sore afraid."  He completely trashed the marketplace set up in the Temple. He didn't get along with his mother who thought he was possessed by the devil. He was accused of practicing witchcraft.

He had an intimate relationship with Mary Magdeleine.  And wasn't above giving her a little jolt when he first appears after his death.

Yes, I know, all of this can be explained Christologically, but that isn't the point.  He appears to have some serious character flaws, even though Christologically, he is considered all-good. If Connor is supposed to be his reincarnation, you have the perfect model.

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I think being all good all the time could be a flaw-one worth pursuing. I'm thinking about the Lucy show when she and Ethel swore to each other they would not lie, and all the horrible things that happened due to telling the truth all the time. For every sin, you can find ways to exploit how being sin- free can wrack it's own havoc and cause it's own complications. It will be tricky, but if you turn "good" on it's ear, it could be very interesting.

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Thank you all for your input. Ponder your suggestions, I will.

Rachel, I love your list. His innocence does make him enemies, but he doesn't back down. He gets beat up a lot at the orphanage, where one of the priests who doesn't like him turns a blind eye. I can then have events transpire that could be attributed to Connor. However, since there are supernatural forces at work in this story, it may just be them conspiring either for or against him (i.e. they either act to protect him or to get him in trouble).

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Dirk B. wrote:

Thank you all for your input. Ponder your suggestions, I will.

Rachel, I love your list. His innocence does make him enemies, but he doesn't back down. He gets beat up a lot at the orphanage, where one of the priests who doesn't like him turns a blind eye. I can then have events transpire that could be attributed to Connor. However, since there are supernatural forces at work in this story, it may just be them conspiring either for or against him (i.e. they either act to protect him or to get him in trouble).

Again, the story of Jesus, looked at biographically and not Christologically gives a model.  There were lots of supernatural forces at work in his story--from the temptation by Satan to his raising from the dead.  For the young Connor, you might look at the Infancy of Christ, a collection of scriptures that didn't make it into the Bible (for good reason, I might add).  Jesus used his supernatural powers in ways I'm sure would make the adult Jesus wince.  It made me wince, anyway.

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Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Nobody's perfect. As I recall from Sunday school, Jesus Christ had quite a temper. He lit into some money-changers at the temple, and even gave some pigs hell. Let him show his righteous anger, possibly get carried away, and maybe even get arrested for causing a scene in Starbucks.

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Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:
Dirk B. wrote:

Thank you all for your input. Ponder your suggestions, I will.

Rachel, I love your list. His innocence does make him enemies, but he doesn't back down. He gets beat up a lot at the orphanage, where one of the priests who doesn't like him turns a blind eye. I can then have events transpire that could be attributed to Connor. However, since there are supernatural forces at work in this story, it may just be them conspiring either for or against him (i.e. they either act to protect him or to get him in trouble).

Again, the story of Jesus, looked at biographically and not Christologically gives a model.  There were lots of supernatural forces at work in his story--from the temptation by Satan to his raising from the dead.  For the young Connor, you might look at the Infancy of Christ, a collection of scriptures that didn't make it into the Bible (for good reason, I might add).  Jesus used his supernatural powers in ways I'm sure would make the adult Jesus wince.  It made me wince, anyway.

I read about some of them a while back. I want Connor to maintain an angelic aura, so my best course is probably to have events occur at the orphanage that seem to be someone attacking Connor's foes. As noted earlier, it could be someone working to defend him from his bullies or someone working to get him blamed for revenge-like acts that happen to his bullies and to the priest who doesn't like him. I'm not sure yet how far to take it. It's a supernatural thriller, so a murder at the orphanage isn't out of bounds, although I don't plan to use much gore, since the target audience is Christians. The Catholic Church plays a large role throughout the book.

My thanks to everyone for their ideas. This was very helpful.

12 (edited by Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons 2018-07-29 18:51:06)

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

j p lundstrom wrote:

Nobody's perfect. As I recall from Sunday school, Jesus Christ had quite a temper. He lit into some money-changers at the temple, and even gave some pigs hell. Let him show his righteous anger, possibly get carried away, and maybe even get arrested for causing a scene in Starbucks.

Jesus was exorcizing a man when he put the demons into swine.  The demons asked to be put there. Yes, there are morally problematic elements to that--the Gentiles who owned the swine were out their herd, the swine, all two thousand of them, thundered to their death in the sea.  This raises both human and animal rights issues.  Neither property rights nor animals rights are absolute, though, so by itself, it isn't an immoral (or sinful) act to have demons possess pigs.  Although perhaps callus about the Gentiles and the pigs,  this wasn't an expression of anger on Jesus' part.  I had a valve repair using pigskin.  I'm sure the pig wasn't pleased that it had to die so that I might live.  However, the surgeons who performed the act, the insurance that paid for it, nor myself, who asked for this to be done were being sinful. It was in this spirit that Jesus "gave the pigs hell."  Imperfect?  Maybe.  (Although it could be a variation on the--Where were you when I laid the foundations of the Earth? That is, who are you to judge the divine?)  The Buddha wouldn't have done it, but he probably would have admonished the man to meditate and just sit and let the madness overwhelm him until he died.  Which way is better?  So I'm not seeing the pig parable to be a clear example of a character flaw in Jesus. Maybe a limit on his magic. He had no other way to perform the exorcism.(That, of course, raises theological issues, but my thought about Dirk's using Jesus as a role model was about the historical Jesus, not the divine one, although, taking the stories as true, there are inescapable supernatural, or at least paranormal, elements to Jesus.)

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Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

I read about some of them a while back. I want him to maintain an angelic aura, so my best course is probably to have events occur at the orphanage that seem to be someone attacking Connor's foes. As noted earlier, it could be someone working to defend him from his bullies or someone working to get him blamed for revenge-like acts that happen to his bullies, including the priest who doesn't like him.

Dirk, angelic isn't namby-pamby.  The angelic hosts that fought with the Hebrews weren't exactly Disney fairies (although lately, they've been growing a pair, too).  One could read the Infancy of Jesus as parables about someone who is developing supernatural powers and not knowing how to handle them yet.  You might want to make the supernatural attacks on Conner's enemies ambigous as to origin. Did he do it, like Morbius in Forbidden Planet, who didn't realize that the Krell monster was an objectification of his own Id?  Or is there Someone else involved.  If so, who?

In fact, the way to make any compelling character is to introduce conflict.  The conflict beween using and misusing supernatural power is a great one to play with.  In most people, there is a moral evolution--from good and evil based on fear to the few (like Jesus) who base it on loyalty to being.  Why not make part of the story turn on Conner's moral development into a truely good man?

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

If memory serves, Jesus cast out other demons without sacrificing animals.

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:

You might want to make the supernatural attacks on Conner's enemies ambigous as to origin. Did he do it, like Morbius in Forbidden Planet, who didn't realize that the Krell monster was an objectification of his own Id?  Or is there Someone else involved.  If so, who?

In fact, the way to make any compelling character is to introduce conflict.  The conflict beween using and misusing supernatural power is a great one to play with.  In most people, there is a moral evolution--from good and evil based on fear to the few (like Jesus) who base it on loyalty to being.  Why not make part of the story turn on Conner's moral development into a truely good man?

The vague origins of the supernatural attacks is what I settled on in an earlier post. However, for book one, I have to be vague about who Connor really is. It's revealed at the end of the book. The trilogy is his journey.

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In a writing mode,
callous = hard-hearted, unfeeling
callus = a thickened and hardened part of the skin or soft tissue, especially in an area that has been subjected to friction.

Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

Dirk B. wrote:

If memory serves, Jesus cast out other demons without sacrificing animals.

He was also seen reading the Book of Enoch, which has it that you are judged, not by the Son of God, as to whether you are worthy of heaven, but by all the animals you've ever met.  And he used the Davidic metaphor of the good shepherd. So, the speculation is that he sacrificed the pigs because they were "unclean" animals.  Of course, knowing that one comes back from the dead and that the Father restores--everything in Isaiah and all but his family to Job, he may have assumed the pigs would end up in pig-Paradise after some fear and pain, the fear and pain that his ministry was to show was at worst ephemeral.  Who knows?  I wasn't wanting to go into Christology, just pointing to a prototype for you that can be considered to be flawed but, at least by his followers, perfect. I was specifically addressing your dilemma with Connor.  If Conner is Jesus, there are a lot of "flaws" or weaknesses to be overcome and he being all-good, at least as all-good as his previous incarnation.

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If you read The Lost Books of the Bible and the relatively recently discovered Gospel of Judas, you will find flaws galore to include deceit which could fill the vacuum of goodness for an always good character. Interesting reading even if you don't get some fresh ideas on character development. Take care. Vern

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If Connor is Jesus, a Christian audience will expect him to be sinless (as defined by Catholics) although one can probably make allowances for the period between when Connor starts his journey and the end of book one, when he learns who he is. Nevertheless, I have most of that mapped out in my head. His primary opportunity to cause trouble is the acts of revenge which he may be responsible for at the beginning of the book. After that, his course is set by the Church. They send him to the Holy Land to protect him from the Antichrist and to hopefully jog his memory of Himself. From that point on, he's reacting to events as they come at him. He's not in control of his journey, although the reader will see how he handles himself during the trip. He'll also be moody at times because he can't remember, even though he's two years older than Jesus when the latter first showed any signs of being God.

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vern wrote:

If you read The Lost Books of the Bible and the relatively recently discovered Gospel of Judas, you will find flaws galore to include deceit which could fill the vacuum of goodness for an always good character. Interesting reading even if you don't get some fresh ideas on character development. Take care. Vern

Thanks, Vern. I'm familiar with some of those stories, but I can't use them. He has to remain Christlike except as noted above. I need it that way for story purposes.

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Re: How to create a compelling character who is supposed to be all good?

You might try reading =Stranger in a Strange Land=--the as-writtem version, not the abridged, originally-published version.   The full version has the phrase 'real as taxes' in the second sentence.
Point is, Valentine Michael Smith is the ultimate innocent ... in a dangerous way.

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Thank you, NJC.

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njc wrote:

You might try reading =Stranger in a Strange Land=--the as-writtem version, not the abridged, originally-published version.   The full version has the phrase 'real as taxes' in the second sentence.
Point is, Valentine Michael Smith is the ultimate innocent ... in a dangerous way.

NJC - Funny. I thought of the same book. It was so well done.