Norm d'Plume wrote:I have an elite force of guards in my story called the Elite Guard.
When calling a spade a spade at least there is no confusion as to what they are. Individual members of 'The Elite Guard' are guards. Just as members of the 'Plumbers Guild' are plumbers. This must be true, else when referring to an individual you'd have to write, 'The Guard's dagger' or 'the Plumber's wrench' which is wrong because it should be, The guard's dagger' or 'the plumber's wrench.'
This standard issue Guards Dagger, found buried up to the hilt in the prisoners eye socket is that particular guard's dagger i.e. her property. And this Plumber's Wrench, belongs to that plumber. It is from his toolbox and he asked that a colleague, a fellow plumber, pass him said Plumbers Wrench.
Forming a group of elite guards into a force called The Elite Guard presents another issue which is rank. Capitalize a military rank when used as a formal title before an individual's name but not in description. The Commander in Chief is a commander just as Private Benjamin is merely a private.
The British Army has regiments of Guards. (The Scots Guards, the Coldstream Guards etc.) they get around the issue by referring to the guards who serve in The Guards, as guardsmen because their rank is Guardsman.
This confusion was resolved in the year 423 BC when the Romans named their force of elite guards, the Praetorian Guard. The members can then be formally called Praetorians and informally guards.