Topic: That famous first line!

We are told to keep an eye on our first line. I've read the saying is applicable only to short stories, for in the case of novels we must keep an eye on the first paragraph,  but history has proven that first lines ARE important:

Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again.

Call me Ishmael.

It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.

It was a dark and stormy night;

All children, except one, grow up.

It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.

Etc.

Do you care about your first line? How do you chose it? Is it important for your at all? Do you rewrite it after your novel is ready, or do  you leave as a first line whatever you wrote weeks/months/years ago when you started working on your story?

Kiss,

Gacela

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My first line begins with "Battle stations!"  The whole first chapter (a prologue) is intended as an Indiana Jones-style opening.

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The first line of Chapter one of the first novel in my series: It was during that hot summer in ’35 when Mr. Crebs died.

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This is the opening line of my only published novel, Amber Eyes:

Before the 4 of July, I couldn’t be sure if I was a teenage lesbian.

Kiss,

Gacela

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Re: That famous first line!

Here are three of my most recent, still on tnbw.

The girl was dead.     from Bete Noire

I finish washing my dishes -- a plate, a fork and a Tupperware container.    from Smokey

I never even noticed her.     from At the Movies.

Yes the first line is important, as are the first paragraph, the first page and the first chapter. I have read different articles that claim if a writer hasn't introduced everything important by one of these (depending on who wrote the article), the agent, editor, or whoever wields the power of life and death over a story tosses the manuscript. I've also read that said person may be having a bad day, so the story gets junked.

I think you have to be concerned about all of it. There's not one that's more important than any other. Every single word, sentence, paragraph, page, chapter, and idea should be the very best you can do. There's no skating here.  JP

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First line from my novel, Root Hog or Die:

**Mom just sat there wringing her hands as if trying to squeeze mercy from God while Granny jabbered on betwixt sucking on a cigarette and taking frequent shots at her spit can.**

Of course it is subject to change depending upon which version I decide to query at any given time -- sometimes I start with a different chapter. Take care. Vern

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The first lines of my first and only novel:

Prologue: Mariah stood on the beach and watched the fog creep inland, as though it were searching for someone.

Chapter one: The car crept along the California coast highway, its fog lights cutting the thin mist like a knife though smoke.

I wanted the weather to set the stage, almost as a main character, because I love mysteries that begin on cold misty nights.
smile

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The first line of my WIP is "It was time."

First lines are very important not only for the beginning of a book but for each chapter. It's all about moving the story forward.

One of my favorite opening lines is - "People disappear all the time." Outlander by Diana Gabaldon.

Sherry

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I already had my say on the first line topic in my posted story "Famous First Words"
John