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Hey everyone, I'm originally from Perth, WA but moved earlier this year to Melbourne! I am enjoying my new city but consequently am only just starting to get back into writing after a long break. Im a psych student so often don't have much time to dedicate to my writing, which is why your comments and help is very much appreciated and used!! Any advice you can give, and pointers in grammer and spelling (of which i SUCK at) would be great! I have pretty much removed all of my stuff and may place some of it back on after some serious editing. I took note (saved and printed) of all the reviews given so thank you to all those who did review before. Thanks all >.<