The Sound of Seraphine

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The Sound of Seraphine

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The Sound of Seraphine

Short Story by: tallow

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Genre: Horror

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A lonely middle-aged man has an odd encounter while sailing on the waters of the Long Island Sound.

 

 

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A lonely middle-aged man has an odd encounter while sailing on the waters of the Long Island Sound.

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Submitted: November 01, 2024

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The Sound of Seraphine


 

The Long Island Sound was quiet, shrouded in thick, gray mist as Peregrine “Perry” Vale steered his sloop, the Zephyr, across the water. Fifty years old, Perry knew these waters like the back of his hand; his family had sailed them for generations. And yet, it was an odd day for sailing. The forecast had promised mild sunshine, but clouds had gathered instead, heavy and ominous, casting an eerie pall over the bay. Perry was used to the peculiar moods of Long Island’s weather, but today felt different, uneasy, like the calm before a storm. 

As he adjusted the mainsail, something unusual appeared through the fog. Emerging like a ghost from the haze was an old schooner, its two tall masts piercing the brooding sky, her hull ancient and weathered, bleached by years of salt and sun. Perry’s mind raced. The ship looked like something out of an old tintype he’d once seen, an image passed through generations of his family. The vessel's name, barely visible, read The Seraphine.

Perry suddenly felt very cold. The Seraphine had been captained by his great-great-grandfather, Elias Vale, a name cryptically spoken in hushed tones within the family. Supposedly, his ship had been lost during a heavy storm back in the late 19th century. Some claimed Captain Vale remained lost at sea, forever seeking sanctuary on dry land. Perry had never put much stock in family ghost stories, but as he drifted closer, the schooner’s outline felt as real as the salty air filling his lungs. 

“Hello?” he called, his voice barely audible amidst the fog. Silence. The Seraphine's deck looked empty, but he sensed he wasn’t alone. The back of Perry’s neck bristled, and memories surged: tales his grandfather used to tell him on dark nights, of a captain with gray eyes like storm clouds, a man forever searching the waters for home. He felt a pull, a whisper from the past, urging him to step aboard.

Then, out of the silence, a faint tune drifted through the air, a low haunting melody, one his grandfather had often sung, claiming it was an old sea shanty passed down by the ill-fated captain himself. Perry’s breath caught as the notes surrounded him, filling him with a strange yearning he couldn't explain. He tried to move closer, but his body felt rooted to the Zephyr’s deck.

And then, as the melody continued playing, the mist suddenly thickened, swirling around the Seraphine, obscuring her masts, then her hull, until she was gone, taken back by the sound. Perry stood alone once more, the empty waters and gray skies stretching before him. 

Yet, as he steered the Zephyr back toward shore, the haunting melody lingered in his ears, a dissonant echo from another time. And, thinking back to the phantom ship itself, just before it had vanished into the mist, he could have sworn he saw a figure on The Seraphine’s deck, watching him with eyes like storm clouds.


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