The Price of Invasion: A Seminole Elder’s Tale

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The Price of Invasion: A Seminole Elder’s Tale

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The Price of Invasion: A Seminole Elder’s Tale

Short Story by: I am Preacher Fo Real

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Submitted: July 10, 2025

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The museum’s air sat thick and heavy, like it knew what was coming. Bakari and Oshun leaned forward on worn benches, the smell of wet wood and old sweat clinging to the dark. Across from them sat the Elder, skin leathered like sun-scorched hide, eyes dark and unflinching as river stones.

"You boys wanna hear a real goddamn story?" the Elder growled, voice low, slow, dragging like something dead through mud. "Not the bullshit they teach in school. Not the polished lies with medals and flags. You wanna hear how it really went down? You listen close."

He leaned in as he gripped the cane between his knees.

"Fifty soldiers. Young. Dumb. Full of piss and powder. Thought they could stomp through our land, shit where they pleased, take what wasn’t theirs like it was owed. Thought their goddamn boots and guns gave ‘em the right. But the swamp?"

He snorted, shook his head.

"The swamp doesn’t give a fuck about your boots."

A pause, thick enough to choke on.

"The Ghost Warriors came for ‘em. Quiet. Precise. Like shadows stitched into the fuckin’ water. One minute, a man’s standin’. Next minute? Gone. No shot fired. Just a wet pop, a grunt, then silence."

The Elder tapped his cane hard once against the floor, made both young men jump.

"Sun comes up, what’s left looks like hell forgot to lock its gate. Warriors rounded ‘em up, fifty dead and eight still breathing. Hauled 'em to the trees, tied ‘em by the wrists with cypress vine, arms stretched so tight the joints looked ready to snap. Feet barely brushing the water. Close enough they could smell it, feel it. Close enough to hope. Dumb fucks."

He spat to the side.

"The swamp was waiting. It knew."

He leaned forward, voice growing, dragging the words like blades.

"First came the ripples. Then the goddamn gators, old bastards, bigger than canoes, jaws like rusted gates. Slid in easy, real casual, like they had all the time in the fuckin' world. One snapped a dead man in half like a twig, crack, spine snapping, guts spilling into the water like soup."

The Elder made a slow, tearing motion with his hands.

"Arms. Legs. Heads poppin’ like rotten fruit. The water turned thick and red, and the smell, sweet and metallic, like rust and death stewed in the goddamn heat."

Bakari swallowed hard. Oshun’s jaw set.

"But the gators weren’t just eatin’. They were working. Workin’ their way down the line, dead to live. Chewin’ through the corpses like wet paper, then getting real slow as they neared the ones still kickin’. Eight men, twistin’, pissin’ themselves, eyes wide, screamin' their fuckin’ throats raw."

The Elder’s lip curled in a grin that wasn’t a grin at all.

"And the Major? Oh, the fuckin' Major. Fat son of a bitch. Medals all clinkin’ on his chest. Watched his men get torn apart piece by piece. Watched their ribs split, watched their guts drape the trees like fuckin’ garland."

He leaned even closer, voice dropping to a rumble.

"That Major begged like a whipped dog. 'Please!' he said. 'Please, I swear to God, let me go! I'll resign! I'll leave! I'll never come back!'"

The Elder barked a laugh, sharp and bitter.

"And one of ours, white clay from head to toe, eyes black as swampwater, he steps forward. Leans real slow to that Major, close enough he could smell the piss. And in perfect English, calm as still water, he says: 'You’d have better luck asking that cottonmouth to bite you before the gators do.'"

He paused, let it simmer.

"The Major, poor bastard, he looks up. And there, coiled above him, fat and mean as the lies he told his men, a cottonmouth, tongue flickin'. Watchin'. Waitin'."

The Elder’s voice shifted, sharp and final.

"But the gators didn’t wait. One shot up from the water, jaws wide as hell’s gate, and snap, took the Major clean at the waist. Blood and shit exploded. Rained down like a busted gourd. Top half hangin’ limp, bottom half gone, gator chompin’ like a kid with a fuckin' turkey leg."

Bakari’s hand curled into a fist. Oshun sat frozen, nostrils flaring.

"And the cottonmouth?" The Elder gave a wolf’s grin. "Didn't move. Just watched. Like it knew."

He sat back, cane thudding against the floor, the final beat in a war drum’s dirge.

"You wanna know about power, boys? About respect? It ain’t in their laws, their papers, their guns. It’s in knowing the land. Knowing when to move, and when to let the land move for you. That swamp? It don’t forget. And neither do we."

His eyes glinted, ancient and merciless.

"You remember that next time someone talks big about freedom, about history. Remember who paid in blood, and who the swamp still waits to collect."

The silence that followed wasn’t silence at all, it thrummed, full and heavy, like the world holding its breath.


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