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Start or stop?

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Sooooo tempting. I'll see what I can do. Maybe there is a continuing ed thing that I can get to in that area.

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njc wrote:

Start or stop?

Aggggg fuck, you know what I mean! You've reviewed enough of my writing to know by now I have a scatter brain and thick fingers.

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amy s wrote:

Sooooo tempting. I'll see what I can do. Maybe there is a continuing ed thing that I can get to in that area.

Holy cow Ames ... are you serious?! You know I will come and visit you wherever you are and at least once before I even think about going back home ... But if it's a good thing for you and your career and the family ... consider it, for sure!

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It might not be until next year, but it is a possibility. If I switch jobs, it should be easier to travel.

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We're having another 'meeting' at work about keeping our team in place. I'm starting to make plans to decide how I can possibly stay at my present job and do all the work of 7 people by myself.

Show me the money, Promedica. Show me the money.

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Bummer.

This sounds like the ball player who says 'sign some other good players if you want me back.'

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(Beware Deux Ex Machina. Kirsey can't be the solution to your story. It has to be Merran and Melayne. Everyone else is just an accessory to the plot.)

I mean to build up Kirsey and the sorcerers he's trained.  Then I mean to show the limits to that kind of power.  (You've already seen previews.  Uemiska's skill at debate is another kind of power.)

FYI, I have a few titles for books late in the story.  If I can get that far, the last three are Dies Irae, Dies Illa, and Riot and Rest.  (The last comes from "It may be we are meant to mark with our riot and our rest ...".)

There's a mystery I've hinted at and some of you have half-caught it.  The book where that comes will probably be titled The Gate of Broken Seals.  ("In the Gate of Treason, in the gate of broken seals,/'Bend and bind them, bend and bind them, bend and bind them into wheels./Then once more in all my garden there may swing and sound and sweep/The noise of all the sleepless things that sing the soul to sleep.' "  Wonderful and terrible to declaim, and you can find the source easily enough.)

There's another theme to add, if you like: For the end of the world was long ago, And all we dwell to-day/As children of some second birth, Like a strange people left on earth/After a judgment day..

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Kirsey's character page:
http://i1065.photobucket.com/albums/u394/njGreybeard/Kirsey-character-page_zps8ygekpnw.png
There are details of history not there, but most of it is in longhand.  Nor is there a drawing--yet.

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Edits made.  They don't completely answer the reviews, but it may be a little better.

If someone really wants a repub I'll do it.

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OMG. I've browsed your reviews and need time to respond. Give me a bit of time to let these sink in.

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There will be more to come.

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I've got sketches for 25-odd scenes covering Melayne and Kirsey in Sgolyabank, taking care of the mountain.  Maybe 6000 words.  I'll write them in sequence, but they should be intercut.

By that time, Merran and Jamen have got the kids, lost Shogran, and gotten into the Academy by a back route (evading Parkol and Forsa, and out of sight of the few eyes that Threkesrom can muster).  Merran will have a few adventures, and her training back home in Pazot will serve her well.

There may also be a lesson in pitching horseshoes.

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Reaalized I was changing the geometry/geography of that mountain, so I've gone back to B1 =Fire and Water= to review it.  That peak is an igneous intrusion, plutonic, of granite or granite-like material.  Not mafic, I think.  I'm not sure what's in the hot chamber beneath.

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Who knew that the geology I learned in college would still be pertinent? I had to look up mafic, but everything else was understood. Yee-haw for that fine arts education!

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Seriously, you guys are the reason I've gotten back into the habit of watching documentaries on random subjects.


-Elisheva

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Elisheva Free wrote:

Seriously, you guys are the reason I've gotten back into the habit of watching documentaries on random subjects.


-Elisheva

*scratches note* This is a great idea! Now, where do you find the time to do that? wink

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Yee-Haw for Wikipedia!

Yee-haw for that fine arts education!

Yes, but can you draw a Free Body Diagram?

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Right between babysitting, sleeping, doctor's appointments, working, and.... wait... When do I find the time? o.0

I sometimes watch an episode of Planet Earth or some such when Writer's Block has given me the beating. smile


-Elisheva

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free body diagram? I only went as far as basic physics. Like figuring out the orbits of the planets and the formula that is used to know there has to be a planet somewhere near pluto.

The rest of my astronomy is from watching PBS. Hey, it let me convince one of the writers that two moon orbiting the same planet couldn't be at different phases. Took me a while, but they finally got the visual and why their scenic moons weren't possible.

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Free Body Diagrams are a lot  more basic than orbital mechanics.  I'vd never done OM, but I could derive the basics from the basics.   I could not demonstrate the stability of the LaGrange points (which speaks to your out-of-phase moons).  There are good Wikipedia articles on FBDs and LaGrange points, and I'd give pretty heavy odds on there being a good OM article out there.

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Oh.  You can see it, you can copy it.  I don't plan on wiping it.

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Oh, the reason for a feldic or intermediate rock is because mafic rocks are usually dark.  I want a tan-to-orange rock.  I think granite, grandiorite, or dacite would work.  All are plutonic and found in dikes and sills; all can get the color range that I want.

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Okay, I've got two scenes from Kirsey and Melayne in Sgolyabank (the lurymant world).

Elisheva, you won't like it, so let me say these dragons are not your dragons.  These dragons are in quote marks and you'll get a better picture of them from reading Book 1, Chapter 34 (Rite of Return).  The dragons are only a small part of the story there, but they are a major danger.

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I love dragons of all sorts. wink That's one of the neat things about dragons. As long as it's a winged reptile, it pretty much counts as a dragon, so there's a ton of variety when it comes to different dragon "species".


-Elisheva