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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

janet reid wrote:

Too late, he posted links, and I had to look!  And I thought the drive through Seattle was nail-biting ...  *scratches road-trip to NY from the west coast off the list*

(Insert fiendish laugh.)

Seriously, so long as traffic is moving, these interchanges are fun.

Oh, if you have to take a road test, practice parallel parking and get very pedantic about how you check around you before you move the car.

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There is a standard booklet available at every license testing station.  It's probably online as well. Get one and read it. This is a big priority for safety so you'll know the rules (four and two-way stop signs) etc. then you'll know what other people are supposed to be doing for right-of-way. Also, most states require you to wear seat belts. How old are your kids? If they are less than a certain height or weight, they need a car seat. If they are a certain height or less than (I think it is 32 kg) they need a booster seat. Some states will give tickets for not having these. If the cop is being a dick, he might refuse to let you drive away and make you call a friend for a ride (who has car seats) It's really for the child's protection, and the officer has probably seen incorrectly restrained kids killed in accidents, so try to understand.

Deep breath, babe. Look up the car seat rules online and see if they apply.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Oh, 'indicate' is pronounced 'signal' and no, most of us are inconsiderate boors who only signal a turn for form AFTER we've begun to brake or even come to a stop.  Nor do we know to take our cars out of reverse and shut the backup lights off when we are waiting for someone else to cross behind us.

You have a splendid chance to instruct the teeming millions by example every time you set out on the roads.  Please take it.

In many states, when you are driving (car in gear) with the wipers on, your headlights must be on.

Know that many American drivers will tend to lock speed with you in other lanes, blocking others from passing, and even drive alongside of you, preventing you (or them) from escaping in an emergency as well as blocking others from passing.  Your defensive driving should be one step ahead of these insensate and dangerous louts--about 40% of  the drivers on the road.  People who would never let a spring-loaded door close in someone else's face can't transfer this awareness to the highway.

Never make the other driver react to you if you can help it.  Always make his choice easy and obvious.  We 'mericans need it.  We drive the way we handle carts in the supermarket--and vice versa.

I don't know if Australia uses the UK term 'High Street'.  The US term is 'Main Street', notwithstanding that the most common street name is actually 'Broad Street'.

Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

I loved (note the tense) parallel parking!  Now, I think roundabouts just got a whole lot "easier" ... 

I will practice parallel parking as it can only be fun feeling 17 again (and because I need to - I'm still getting use to sitting on the left hand side of the car too, it messed up my spatial awareness AND it's an unfamiliar car to boot)!  At this rate, the person who is going to do the test will need nerves of ionsdaleite (steel will not do) ...

I always use headlights, even on bright sunshiny days - other drivers can just see you so much easier that way - I honestly think with technology these days headlights should just switch on when you start the car and switch off when you switch off the car.  Especially back home where the roads are really well lit (within city/town boundaries) and you can see well enough without headlights (although other drivers still do!) - have seen many a time cars without headlights late at night and when it was well and truly dark hours ago.

One day I should tell you about Australian carts (trolleys where I'm from - another thing I had to describe using more than 1 word first time around here) - all four wheels can swivel.  Apparently that way you can drive the thing using one hand only ...  In reality it's beyond stupid, because now EVERYONE struggles to control those things.  The Aussie trolley manufacturers haven't realised yet that if it was such a brilliant idea, the whole rest of the world would've been using it by now.  Since they're not, including our Kiwi friends on the other side of the ditch, clearly it should mean something ... *sigh*.  Also, that's how Perth drivers drive, so that's why I probably haven't noticed any louts yet ...  :-)

After just under 3 weeks, I can now listen to music and the radio - in other words, I can adjust the volume and skip tracks or change stations without veering off the road.  I'm really worried that in about 6 months I'll be so used to this driving on the wrong side of the road thing (some might propose it's the right side of the road, but that's for another day) and default back to my old ways.  I can only hope that day the other road users around me are awake and alert ...  And from then on I think I'd be okay.  Well, that's the theory for now at least!  :-)

And we don't use High Street or Main Street.  The main street is usually the road with the same name as the town.

Checked the booklet (and passed the on-line sample test just because I wanted to see if I can do it before reading the book *high five myself even though it was close*).  Thanks Amy!  And kids don't need booster seats.  phew  *breathes again*

The really good news is that we have finaly sorted out our bank accounts and we have received our Social Security Numbers today -  so now we can buy a car!!!!  And yesterday was the first "normal" day in a very long time - got up, went to work, went home, had dinner, talked crap with the family and went to bed - no shopping, sorting out admin or having to do something.  It was awesome.  It also means I'm one step closer to getting back on track with Matty and Kate ...  :-D  And reviewing of course!  And a few other things like getting some grape juice to the other side of the US!

But so far the whole experience is really great - Americans for all their faults (said with love of course) are extremely helpful and in general really friendly!  This weekend we should be able to go sight-seeing for a bit - I'm really excited about that!  So yeah, it looks like we're going to make it (not that I ever doubted it, but you can never be 100% sure)!  :-D

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Most new cars have DRL's, or daytime running lights. You shouldn't have to turn them on manually. The only time you need to activate your lights is at night or in fog.

Carfax is a service that lets you know the history of any used vehicle you want to buy. (Like accidents and how many owners). If getting a new car, look for the motor trend recommendations for safety and JD Power recommendations for customer satisfaction.

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I don't think DRLs satisfy the foul-weather requirement.

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Point.

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The next chapter of Mandates is up.  Lordy, I'm tired, but I got past the hump.  Here you go!

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it is coming together in Mantle. In previous books, faulter is revealed to be alive. The Chronomancer got Faulter banned from the Guildhouse to slow the bad guy down. We know that Faulter had necromancer materials in his private rooms. Active necromancy is going on within the Guildhouse and Sosol's body was retrieved during the short time that Alina's funeral was going on.

In Mantle, Anver has figured out that Vaulters Pass (big carved pathway through the mountain) was made to weaken Behira and change the flow of the nexus. He realizes that the attack on the sister city(across the pass) was likely organized by Faulter and cronies. Since Faulter is dipping into the power well of gods, he is likely sitting on a piece of the nexus. That means the bad guy is in the city of the dead (Binen).

Anver knows where to find his enemy. The Mage guild is now oath bound to go to war. Katerin has to help because of her vow while in the crypt. Geron (the Mage master) has been brought in line by Anvers argument. Kha has incentive to shut Faulter down.

The Wolves are closer together and they have to be the answer. This problem can't be solved by gods.

That a good enough answer?

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

What, you didn't see all the pieces moving in that direction?  The kidnapping of Sil is the tipping point.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

I dunno.  I made a pretty good case that Draco and Dudley were switched shortly after birth when Lucius Malfoy's son turned out to be a squib and Petunia gave birth to a magical child.  Oh, and the fact was hidden from Lucius and from Harry's uncle.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

In your review reply, you wrote that everybody needs a hobby.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Note that in response to TW's inline, I pointed out three 'that's that I think should stay, and said why.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

OK, New Jersey. I cut 900 words in the first pass.  It's now at about 2900 words. Should I whack out more?

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I'll have to go over it in detail.  There are places where I think you may have cut good stuff, and others where I think you need to close up seams.

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njc wrote:

I dunno.  I made a pretty good case that Draco and Dudley were switched shortly after birth when Lucius Malfoy's son turned out to be a squib and Petunia gave birth to a magical child.  Oh, and the fact was hidden from Lucius and from Harry's uncle.

Oh yeah, I figured McGonnagal was in on it.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

I still think more might be better. Chomp...chomp.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Polish at this level first.  Well, not so much polish as smooth out.  If you don't you won't see clearly what you're chom#pping.

I need sleep now.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Incidentally, a certain reviewer TW is an absolute stickler on certain points of style.  Most of these 'rules' aren't, and I disagree with her at least half the time.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

How often do you disagree with me? Hmmmm? Ya old coot!

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Don't feel you have to follow TW's lead in eliding 'that' or dropping a comma before every new phrase or clause.  She's doctrinaire and rigid on the matter (says the guy she blocked from reading her work).  Trust your ear.

I don't hammer the same points of grammar over and over, nor do I put an iron case over what should be supple and flexible rules.

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Good point there.

Oh, for the Cop Shop mystery contest, JP said that I can write in any time period, as long as there is a double cross involved. You're going to get some backstory on Katerin :-)  Just thought I would taunt you a bit so you'll nag me to finish writing what I have in my head. :-)

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Janet,

Tell me the name of the vinter again. I've perused the wine section of the local store and have enough selections that I don't dare picking at random. I want to get the kind that has the Janet-seal-of-approval.

Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

http://www.jacobscreek.com/

If you can find anything from the Barossa Valley, you can't go wrong!

Yeah, rules and stuff that doesn't allow one to drink at work.  No fun  :-(

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Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread

Now that I've done a couple of Collin reviews, I suddenly (maybe more miraculously because this is me after all!) understand what this TW and that's that you and njc are talking about are about ...
                           ^^^ did you see what I've done?  ;-)

I should probably but out, but what the heck, here is my opinion in any case:

Your Collin stories are something else than pure literature.  Given the subject, and the emotions, laughs and tears associated with the tales of your journey together, I think readers will be a lot more forgiving if the "rules" are not followed to the letter.  Not saying you can let go and leave spelling mistakes, crude grammar and poor punctuation as is and all over the place, but like using "that" more than once, it's a non-issue.  I haven't noticed it at all until I saw the review.  And after reading again after noticing it, it still didn't bug me.  Now, if this was Dictates, I'd be over you like a bad rash probably, it will be pure torture to read "that that that that that" if the book is 300 pages plus.  But your short stories about Collin is short, it's in your voice and it's from your heart.  It's DIFFERENT, so different rules apply.  So take that into account before you take up anything any reviewer suggests, present company included.  And some reviewers, more so than others, are really inflexible when they are reviewing the work of others that have a completely different voice/writing style than them and tend to rewrite the piece like they would've done it instead of just reviewing it.

If TW sees this, she's likely not going to take it well.  So hopefully I haven't make things worse, but I just thought to let you know what I think for what it's worth.

And by the looks of it, you're in an elite TNBW group that hasn't been blocked by her yet!
                                                                              ^^^ *smacks myself over the knuckles*