Topic: New member

Hi!  I am new to novel writing, but I have written lots of non-fiction. 

I have just posted my first draft of my second novel, I haven't even completed the second chapter yet.  I worked in victim assistance a long time ago and always fantasized writing mysteries about a victim advocate who solves crimes. 

I have also completed a full draft of another novel, my first, but it does not fall neatly into a genre.  I call it a feminist fantasy.  It's about witches who have no real powers other than being very old and very wise.  It's satirical, humorous and political.  I'm trying to develop the guts--and amass the points--to post the entire novel. 

Meanwhile, I'd love any feedback on Expert Victim Chap 1.