Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi → WIP: Exile in Time
Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:It's not true that build it and they will come.
Noah had this problem too.
lol
Rachel, I decided to add a scene 0 that shows part of the climax of Connor's tour of the Holy Land. It's intense.
Thanks for the suggestion
Dirk
Dirk. I'm glad. You have a nice take on the Second Coming, and you need to grab the reader so that they can appreciate it. I'm sure you know how to write the scene w/o revealing Conner's secret identity.
Ya... you could totes swap chapters 82 and 0. Not joking-- Opening with "This is where we got" closing with "This is how we started". It's not done oftern
Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:It's not true that build it and they will come.
Noah had this problem too.
And look what happened to those who didn't listen.
Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi → WIP: Exile in Time
