123 Hail the Almighty Amazon!

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128 Indenting with Kindle

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135 another comma question

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136 The evil prologue

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137 How to leave a group?

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138 Comma before "as if"?

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139 "Event" transitions?

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141 How many scenes per chapter?

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142 Naming minor characters

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146 Guard or guard?

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148 Guard or guard?

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149 Lupus's blue eyes burned with exasperation

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150 Bitten by an old bug

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