It's no secret that I'm a "greenie" when it comes to this writing gig, so please forgive my ignorance of the game.

Last night I attended my first "live" writer's group ... and I was a bit overwhelmed by the response I received for my first chapter.

Questions started flying - "Do you have a blog?"  (Uh, no ...)  "Why not?"  (I kinda think I haveta have a product first.)  "Are you planning a newsletter?"    (Huh?  See my previous answer.)  "Are you on FaceBook?"  (Well, yeah ... I have a whole 18 friends!  If I count my family too.)  "How do I follow you on Twitter?"  (Excuse me, isn't 'follow' another word for 'stalk?')  And on ... and on.

I finally had to plead my ignorance, but promise that I'd look into everything that was mentioned.  (All while thinking, "I don't have enough time to write NOW, and people want alla this other stuff too?")  I'm not totally (just mostly) naive about the need for marketing my work, but I've always been of the mind that one has to first have a (complete) product to market.

What th' heck am I missing?  Am I totally off-base with the whole "complete product" thing, THEN the marketing stuff?

Color me ... confused.

Blood loss and shock, my dear ... blood loss and shock.

Of COURSE Matthew gallantly insists that Catherine ride before him (hey!  watch the hands, sir!)

Alas, I'm going to have to stop posting and start writing more.  Just put up Chapter 4, now I have to jump back to my work-in-progress Chapter 13 ... hopefully I can have that draft finished before my first meeting with a real live writing group tomorrow evening (yep, anxiety runs high and I don't believe they'll appreciate if I tipple a bit of liquid fortification ... this IS Utah after all!)

Dos centavos -

Would your sniper of an archer have used a bodkin point?  Just who in the heck was he laying in wait for, anyway?  Oh, okay ... so if the premise is that Anthony cried "wolf" to lure Matthew into an ambush, then an armour - piercing bodkin point would have been the ammunition of choice by any archer that would dare call him-/herself such.

But if the ambush was intended to catch Matthew, why did the archer shoot a lone rider?  With the cry of "Reivers!" as the bait to lure Matthew out, surely the archer would have known that Matthew wouldn't be responding alone, but surrounded by a small army.  (Unless he really IS that much of a badass, in which case the shooter needs a bigger arrow, lol.)  So again, why did the archer shoot at a lone rider who could not logically be Matthew?

In the late 16th Century, firearms were becoming more and more common, rendering heavy plate pretty much obsolete.  The art of the English longbow was quickly falling by the wayside as well, typically being relegated to the ranks of the poor farmers, hunters, woodsmen, etc. who couldn't afford something better.  If I were the one effecting the nefarious deed (I respect snipers by the way, contrary to many who consider such as 'cowards' ... it takes a special psyche to literally look a target in the eye then pull the trigger) my weapon of choice would be a crossbow - quiet, much less skilled than a longbow, and capable of defeating any armour of the day.  The one abiding danger would be the possibility of the bolt passing completely through the target, and while almost certainly fatal, the one so shot might linger long enough to have his/her minions exact revenge ... or change a will.

If the shooter were a mercenary, a crossbow would have almost certainly been used.  If a sneaky, professional assassin then possibly a longbow would be in play.  If a longbow, then two types of arrows are in play, either a bodkin point or a more common broadhead.  The former would suggest the shooter were military, or at least expecting to use force against a military style target.  The latter would lend itself more easily to "I swear it was an accident, Officer!  I thought she was a deer!"  But again, distinctions can be made in the broadheads as well - an arrow intended to hunt four-legged game will have the tip mounted parallel to the nocking point; a man-killing arrowhead will be perpendicular.  It's all about the ribcage of the intended targets - a four-legged animal's ribs will be vertical while a human's is horizontal, hence the arrows are designed to 'slip' through the ribs with a lesser chance of getting stuck in a bone.  Plus, a broadhead will cause a much more horrific injury, after all it's designed to cut and 'bleed out' the target as quickly as possible.  Sure, a longbowman could further muddy the evidence by using a normal hunting broadhead and just holding the bow parallel to the ground ... a crossbowman?  Not so easy.  S/he's either using a mankiller or not.

So, to cut my early morning ramblings short (WAY too early ... 4:00 a.m.) if I were playing a game of Medieval Clue ... I'd pick the shady gameskeeper employed by Anthony.

(Wow, reading this back ... WAY too nitpicky.  But a fun exercise!  Throw it out!  LOL)

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Thanks, Sol!

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I'm a bit (okay, truthfully more than a 'bit') confused as how to post/add chapters to a work in progress and ensure they're still reviewed.

For example, I've posted Chapter #1, applied the feedback that I deemed to add value (THANKS, btw) but what I'd like to do now is "inactivate for reviews" the first chapter and publish the next chapter for review.

Does that make sense?  Can it be done?

Or do I have to publish each chapter as a standalone "book?"

Skip

Hi!

I'm new (raw, actually) both to the site and trying to put coherent and entertaining thoughts to pen.  I'm a whole 13-chapters into a book that I started around 4-years ago.  Family has been urging me to keep working on it, but hey ... Life, right?  Anyway, my daughter posted a meme to my FB page the other day which formed the basis of an epiphany for me:

"Life is going to get hard sometimes.
So get the f**k up and get your s**t together.
You're either an ocean or a puddle.
Don't be a puddle ... people walk through puddles like they're nothing.
Oceans f**king destroy cities."

A bit crass, but it struck a chord.

So ... here I am, in all my vulnerability.  (I'd never considered the anxiety I'd face when putting "my story" out for people to actually read and comment on.  I have this pervasive vision of "the cool kids" huddling in a corner and tittering, 'and he thought he could write?')

Maybe I can.  Maybe I can't.  The jury is in deliberations, but closing arguments have yet to be made in the case.  My only goal is to pass along something my granddaughter can point to and say, "My Papa did this!"  If I can share my journey with a few others as well, then so be it.

I've just posted the first chapter of my book.  Please jump in and let me know what I did well, and what I need to improve.

Thanks for the welcome!

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Hi, my name is Skip and I'm a writer ... sigh, okay, I play at being a writer. I'm in desperate need of the nearest "12-Step Program" that can help me get these stories that have been bouncing around my predominantly empty skull for the past few years out and into some semi-intelligible form.

When I actually stop to read the fore- and after- comments of the current authors I'm reading, I notice a number of acknowledgements given to members of his/her writing group. D'oh! I'm old and a bit slow, but the obvious does eventually worm through my density affected cranium ... although I might need to be beat about the head and shoulders occasionally to make it so.

It's been four years now since I began "My Book." My wife's cousin, Angela Horning Archer, says it took five years for her first to be completed ... so I'm still on schedule, LOL! But as I've only been averaging a chapter every four months or so, that particular deadline is looking pretty dismal. I certainly enjoy the storytelling, just not so much the process.

Long story short (if only I could make it so!) ... I need help! First and foremost, an unbiased eye to let me know as to whether I should keep fanning the embers, or just drop it and take up a more productive hobby, say like underwater basket-weaving or the like.

I don't aspire to the stature of a George R.R. Martin, Terry Goodkind, Robert Jordan, et al (well, maybe just a bit ... in my wildest fantasies). I just want to leave something behind when I go. I'd sure smile if my granddaughter could someday look at a couple of tatty paperback books on the shelf and then say "My Papa wrote these!"

So ...

Please help me lengthen my stride?