826

(28 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

The monkey puzzle tree, what a coincidence! I've seen The Enchanted Cottage too, and it is a real tearjerker.

~Tom

max keanu wrote:

on this subject of logos, brand names, etc. I am going to blow up Disneyland in California, but way in the future, in the year 3976 or there about.

I'm thinking of avoiding this problem of writing negatively about Disneyland, by using Wally World (of National Lampoon movie fame), or some other theme park name.

However, I see the action at that theme park and have constructed the plot and characters with constant references to it (novel is 75% complete in revision).

Who knows, maybe the novel will be a bestseller and I wonder about trashing Disneyland in territorial gang wars of the future and legal problems associated with maligning such an institution.

The novel, Aphrodite's Rainbow, I will be offering for free on Amazon, since it has previously been published (in India, on line, in serial installments— what a joke that was), so I'll receive no money for it.

Max:

In Clancy's novel Rainbow Six, he had a terrorist attack at Euro Disney, with plenty of shooting and hostage-taking. I don't know what arrangements (if any) he had with Disney, but shouldn't this set a precedent?

~Tom

828

(28 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Resurrecting this thread, TCM just presented a movie I should have included in my first post: "The Ghost and Mrs. Muir" (1947). Gad! How could I have forgotten that one? I haven't the foggiest how many times I've seen it. Wonderful movie.

~Tom

Wonderful, JP!

Just goes to show what a little research will do. I wrote my poem about the very first thing that popped into my head.

~Tom

830

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

njc wrote:

On a regular review, if you inadvertently type a carriage return/ENTER in the subject field, the entire review is posted, empty or not.

This is probably not expected by the user nor intended by the web designer.

That has happened to me too. AND I lost the points because I didn't give enough words.

~Tom

Mikira:

After reading the "Use in fiction" paragraph, I would agree with you. I'll leave the logo on the sketch and if we hear negatively from nynative1 I can scrub it off. I am sure that you mentioning that the shuttles were built by Volkswagen would be a fair use and, as you say, it gives them something to shoot for in the coming centuries.

~Tom

I have a question concerning the use of a logo and a name. Mikira and I were chatting about her novel, and I made a sketch of what her planetary shuttles aboard Aurora might look like. Playfully, I added a "VW" symbol at the front of it. We both now think that it is a cute 'Easter Egg' (if the pictures ever get published), but I am wondering if I would have to get permission to use that symbol. One sees it all the time on Internet memes and such, but that is usually with the car attached to it. As far as I know, Volkswagen AG doesn't make space shuttles. She said she might mention in the story that Volkswagen made the shuttles.

Has anyone else run across this situation? If so, how did you solve it?

~Tom

833

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thanks, Dirk.

I use Pale Moon, which is a derivative of Firefox, and the add-on called Tab Mix Plus. I've setup the tabs so that if I leave a page, it will log me out. When that happens, I have to log back in to TNBW. True, the review is still there, but it is still a pain and can be avoided.

~Tom

834

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

This is really getting out of hand, Sol. In three separate instances today, I was in the middle of an in-line review and blew myself out of the water, sending the browser back to the last page I visited (and worse, on one occasion), by not having the cursor put into the comment block when you highlight text to comment upon.

Having to explicitly click the cursor into the box is really a pain. #2 pain is not being able to float the box to the side so I can see text beyond what I'm commenting on.

~Tom

835

(8 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

I have a service-related hearing loss in both ears (Morse code and static crashes for 20 years will do that). So, when I get ready to do some serious writing, I take my hearing aids out and go for it! Music, at that point, does not compute. Sometimes, to put me into the mood, I listen to classical or very old rock (circa 1950's) records on my turntable. Ear buds cannot compete with suitcase-sized speaker enclosures and a recliner between them.

~Tom

836

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

There it goes again. My review, when I posted it, told me I'd written 61 words. When I went back to look at the response, my post was listed at 57 words. Why the disparity?

~Tom

Strange as it may seem, I'd like to meet someone who was on 'the other side' of my struggle against the Soviet Union while I was in the navy. Someone who was in the trenches, running the same kind of gear against me and my country. Someone of equal rank with whom I could hold a frank discussion of just how effective we really were - or thought we were. It may seem rather pedestrian, but I'd really like to know that my 20 years was worth it.

~Tom

838

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

KHippolite wrote:

mmm yes. I'd fold everything except connections content, only peeking in the rest from time to time

Taking that a tiny bit further, once folded, have to title bar change color to indicate new entries.

~Tom

839

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Would getting a small bonus of points for reviewing a non-connection work? Or reviewing a new writer if s/he is within, say, two months of joining?

~Tom

840

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Yup. That's a good point, Sol. I didn't think of it that way.
~Tom

841

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Norm d'Plume wrote:

It looks good, Sol. My personal preference would be to have writing from my connections at the top. When I have the time (if ever), I go through the other lists for new authors to read from. Not sure how others feel about the order of the lists.

Thanks.
Dirk

I also prefer to have Connections at the top. Those are the ones I'm most interested in. New entries (not of my connections) could be next.

~Tom

842

(46 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Norm d'Plume wrote:

Sol, do you know if there is a keystroke combination that jumps to the bottom of a web page?

Thanks
Dirk

You can also just hit the space bar (in Firefox/Pale Moon) anyway. That zips you down to the bottom.

Control-End and Control-Home work also.

~Tom

dagnee wrote:

.......
As for English, I am still ignorant, I know more about the splitting of an atom than I do an infinitive and wouldn't know a dangling participle if it bit me on the ass.

big_smile

Boy, do I identify with that! I'm the same way. I do know what "looks good" and "sounds good" to me, and that's what gets put down. My own personal albatross is writing passively and not actively. I struggle, but I sometimes fail.

~Tom

Me too, Karen. I type at the speed of light (around 120-130wpm) and since I'm a touch-typist I am looking at the screen. Word takes quite a while to catch up to where I am, so I sometimes miss the tiny red underline. But, spell check doesn't help me that much either - I need a reliable checker for 'passive voice'.

The toughest word I always misspelled was "restaurant".

~Tom

Funny, Dagnee. I hereby find myself guilty of at least three infractions. I won't say which ones, however.

~Tom

846

(9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Good question, Dirk. My stories tend to run a linear timeline: start to finish. I am not a big fan of flashbacks, but they can be done in a manner that that makes it clear to the reader what just happened.

In your case, perhaps some sort of date/time header (a la WEB Griffin) mgiht be devised for those chapters with alternate scenes taking place simultaneously or nearly so.

~Tom

847

(8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

Everyone in my family says I'm a little unbalanced anyway, so why not live the role? I spend a lot of my days sitting here on my computers writing, editing, programming, or working on a web site. Mikira is right. If a person is in balance, that person is a pretty dull person. It's the imbalances that spice up anyone's day. Some things that will tilt you off-center are strange, some a great, most of them you can deal with right away, but some take a while. Go with the flow.

~Tom

848

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Something is wrong with the word counts. I just reviewed on of Lesley's chapters and saw it was 55 words. I clicked the Post Regular Review button and when it posted, I found it was only 49 words - and I didn't get the points.

So, which is it? The word count in the edit box of the review, or the final count when posted? How could they be different?

~Tom

Hey, Dirk! Why not have the operator push a button and turn the aircar into a briefcase? This worked for George Jetson.

~Tom

850

(6 replies, posted in Spirituality & Religion)

Sounds like a great idea to me. I don't see many songs posted here.

~Tom