Linda Lee wrote:

Janet, it's the same principle at play as when you choose a car you like ...and suddenly you start noticing them all over the road. You learn just enough about something to suddenly take notice. It takes a while to adjust too. You may never stop seeing the flaws, but sooner or later you'll learn to adjust your perception enough to read past them for enjoyment sake.

Or I'm just getting cranky-er as I'm getting older?! smile

I'm definitely going to try Janet TP's suggestions with an open-mind. She's given me enough for the rest of this year and probably most of next year too, so don't hold your breath for any recommendations soon. The only reason I've been able to "read" this many books lately is because I haven't been finishing them!

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I would quibble with a few others ...

Put your desk in the corner of the room, and eliminate all possible distractions, from phones to open windows.

In ideal world. When you have to write while your kid is playing a cricket game or taking swimming lessons or golf lessons, it's best to learn how to shut the world out rather than to try and eliminate the world.

So I agree with what he is saying, just differently.

Take your writing seriously.

This is one of the many things I've learned here on TNBW. And for me, it started with Sol's advice (on the old site, not sure it came over to the new one) - When you do a review, use the character's names, don't use he or she. This approach makes characters real. And from then on (for me at least) it started to get serious.

Finish your first draft in three months.

I agree, but again, differently. In an ideal world, where I'm a full-time writer, I can see this happening. In the real world, after a 10-hr work day, having kids with sports/birthday parties and other family commitments, I'd be happy with twelve months. I've long ago realised I'd be lucky if I can finish a 100,000 word novel (first draft and second revision) every two years. I don't think I'm special or the only one. Or that not meeting this target = failure. This also means that you need to put other systems in place to avoid it from "taking on an odd feel" ...

Stay married, be healthy, and live a good life.

See the previous point ... sometimes you need to compromise. And I'd rather compromise and take 12 months to write a first draft than compromise where my marriage and kids are concerned. In an ideal world, you can have it all. I'm glad if this works for him, but I'm not so sure it was entirely written with "part-time" writers in mind.

Good luck with the release Janet! smile

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(59 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Thanks for joining Mike! My arm was getting tired from all the waving, Tom still looks good though (thanks Tom!)! LOL

And by all means, if you have any questions, you know where we are - feel free to start a new topic!

As a side-note, you and anyone else are more than welcome to start a thread for your writing or books, but I'm not really pushing this aspect of the group as most of us already have similar threads going in other groups and having it in multiple groups make it really complicated. So all up to you.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

LOL! We'll find it a niche b/c Amazon doesn't let you have that many categories.

Kindle Count Down for Broken (book #3 in The Raiford Chronicles) in honor of book #4 in The Raiford Chronicles, Whatever It Takes, release date 9/16/15.
9/11/15 $5.99
9/12/15 $ .99
9/13/15 $1.99
9/14/15 $1.99
9/15/15 $2.99
9/16/15 $3.99
9/17/15 $4.99
9/18/15 $4.99
9/19/15 $5.99
http://www.amazon.com/Broken-Raiford-Ch … ylor-perry

This is shockingly shameless Janet!!!! I've created a beast! LOL

But seriously, all the best with the new release! I believe it will be a huge success.
Janet

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(5 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Mike Roberson wrote:

Ok, Janet, your shameless marketing worked so I joined.  I read about you flinging books across the room and now I'm scared.  Hunter is  a Christian Lifestyle, Action Adventure, Crime Drama, Love Story.  I got so much goin on you've got to like some of it.  It's posted complete. I'm doing a last read through before I send it to JTP for editing.  Hope you could make it past page 10.
Mike

For shamelessly joining the Romance Group and plugging your story, I've added you to my review list Mike!

And don't worry, I only throw bad novels at walls and people I don't like! wink

Norm d'Plume wrote:

I have a science fiction story about a resurrected Roman Empire, Christianity, mental illness, and a gay dead kid who keeps trying to make out with living guys. Probably not Romance, huh? ;-)

Just think of this as a shameless plug for more readers. :-)

By all means Norm, this is a shameless post, so jump in and "market" your writing as much as you like, why not?! smile

Making out is sort of related to romance?! So who knows, you might have a question one day ... and now you know where to find us! smile

Karin Rita Gastreich wrote:

I'm with KHippolite. I've never had any patience with books that don't grab me from the get go, though I usually allow up to 3 chapters before deciding whether or not to toss the novel.

Even so, I do run into the occasionally novel that starts out well and then suddenly takes a dive half ways through, or (even worse for me) totally cops out at the end. Maybe you're just having a run of bad luck, or maybe you are becoming a more critical reader as a result of fine-tuning your "editor's eye" on tNBW. Either, I wouldn't worry about it. Time spent reading a bad novel is time wasted, imho. Life's too short for that. Hopefully, you'll find something you can sink into and enjoy again soon.

There is something to learn from reading bad novels, but I can't read it to "The End" no more, so I'll just pick up on the lessons I can get up to that stage. smile And hey, reading 70-100 pages is proof that at least I have really tried to give them some chance! wink

What I can also add - it's nothing compared to the number of books I returned to the shelf after reading the first few pages - something I've never done before either. I used to base my reading decision on the back page blurb only. I'm turning into one of my nightmares ... a critic! LOL

Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

Maybe it's that you're becoming aware of the shortcomings of many of today's authors. I can't stand "formula" writing, As much as I hate to say it, MANY romance authors write by formula. A + B = C. BORING. Therefore, it is up to us and the new wave of writers to give our readers something bigger and better.

I'm going to PM you a few books to read. If you don't like them, tell me I'm nuts.

I'm considering to venture back to my second preference again ... crime/mystery! It's that bad! smile

I'll look for that PM - and if I like them, I'll share them with everyone ... smile Thanks!!!

This is also my biggest fear, that readers and writers will not be able to finish my books ... At least I can say in all honestly I'm trying my best to keep readers engaged and can only hope I get it right!

KHippolite wrote:

Page 80?

If the book hasn't married me by page 10, I'm out.

Baby-steps K! I used to FINISH every.single.novel.
But I'm thinking at this rate, even page 10 might be a stretch one of these days!

Hi to all writing romance novels, woman's fiction (that's read by both sexes despite the official genre classification), love stories, love scenes or anything remotely or not remotely (because you never know!) related to romance ...

This is just a reminder that we have a Romance Group on TNBW and anyone is welcome to join. smile

http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/group-romance-inc-32

And yes, this is an effort to get the group noticed by new site members! I have no shame ... tongue

Janet

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(59 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Helloooooooo!!!! *waves hand*

crickets ...

In any case, to all the recent members joining the group, welcome. And please, introduce yourself and what you're working on! We don't bite (hard)! smile

I've just threw (Janet TP household style!) the seventh novel across my living room after I've managed to get to page 80ish.

SEVEN NOVELS! IN A ROW!!!! INCLUDING MY FAVOURITE ROMANCE AUTHOR OF ALL TIME! No further than page 100 MAX .... And I've NEVER left any books unfinished before in my life!

These days, my time is really really precious and I can't stand books where the words aren't flying off the pages. So it's not so much a case of finding nits or "reviewing" the writing (I think), it's a case of me getting bored. Easily. Quickly. It feels as if the story goes on and on and on, yet nothing is happening, nothing is moving forward and any forward movement is little/tiny/minuscule. And then the book flies without wings or a parachute to halt it's trajectory to a fast approaching wall.

I'm really worried now. Is it me suffering from TNBW "pox" or is it the books I've been reading? Because if it's not me, it means I will have a lot of difficulty finding good (or what I deem good) novels and I have been struggling with that for quite a while now!

If it's me or TNBW, is there a cure?!

*end of rant*

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(520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

KHippolite wrote:

You: Yet, Humphrey’s objection to the suggestion he was at fault was convincing
Me: Unable to parse this one. Did he agree or disagree?
You: If you object, you disagree?
Me: I disagree with the suggestion that I'm wrong about my ability to convince?
...
...
... Did I agree with myself? I'm not sure which side won

Yes, you just agreed with yourself! But that's because I understand "Janet's English"! tongue

I'm going to change it next revision, I don't want readers to object to agreeing with themselves after all! smile I'm optimistic it will take re-arranging of the sentence structure and changing one or two words at most ...

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(520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

General update on NS:

I've decided to make a slight change to Matthew and Catherine's history/past. So next revision, she would've followed them around instead of them being asked to look after her - this will suit her impulsive/rebellious nature better IMO. So I'm going to bring in more/better/slightly different flashbacks where it's shown Catherine always cared about people and had taken a few "hits" for Matthew and Black John to keep them out of trouble - despite their natural "boys" resistance to playing with "girls" - that might still go, but for now, I'm keeping that aspect. This also mean that they haven't seen much of each other during the eight years of her marriage. Most of this will be flashbacks from Matthew's POV where he notices subtle differences, less than subtle difference like her curves, and also the things that's still the same.

These changes will be incorporated in the rest of the chapters to be posted, so hopefully it's not big enough to create too much confusion, panic and chaos! smile

Thanks!!!!

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(520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Norm d'Plume wrote:
KHippolite wrote:

No need to panic and post the next... you got time before I get on your back. I have others in my cross-hairs right now (*cough*Norm*Judy*cough*)

Norm's out of commission until the household has been downsized by about 90%. Word of advice: don't ever buy those rolls of packing tape with the builtin plastic dispenser. I could've sworn I checked the Amazon reviews before buying it...

Is Norm back yet?! Hope the downsizing was a success!

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

njc wrote:

Okay, there's a sketch of an episode up in Book 2, chapter 40, A Lecture at the Academy.  It's mostly scenery and power moment.    Amy, you may OD on it, even though you'll spend more words telling me what's wrong with it.

When it becomes a real chapter (Book 2 or 3), the phony names will get filled in and there will be more meat.  Right now it's meant to be very pretty bone and appetizer.

Are you looking for reviews or is this just a placeholder njc?

I could win a comp like this!!!! LOL

I'd read #4 and #2 ... And #1 is brilliant! Except, it could probably do with a few more adverbs! wink

On a side note, there's a similar "competition" for the worst romantic/love scene paragraph or sentence. I'll see if I can find that again. Let me know if I should also post it here (I'm definitely going to post it in the Romance Group!)

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(6 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I write for the same reason I breathe—because if I didn't, I would die.
—Isaac Asimov

Maybe not die (too dramatic for my more balanced/reserved personality tongue), but the sentiment agrees with the reason why I'm writing.

So maybe more like really unpleasant to be around me because it'd frustrate the hell out of me walking around with all these ideas in my head and not getting it on paper and I (might) take that out on other people around me. And that's also the reason why my family supports my writing - they know what's it's like when I'm hungry, and this would be like me, hungry, ALL THE TIME! LOL

So my quote would be something like:

I write for the same reason I eat - because if I didn't, I'd be a hungry miserable cow. smile

Some myths I've never heard of before. But yeah, it just proof again that you should never take something on face value (especially on the internet) - maybe some of his stuff needs to be checked too, who knows and who has the time?! On a side note, the guy's voice will drive me crazy if I have to listen to another one of his lists!

Speaking of cleaning habits:

The best/simplest advice I've come across was that human nature hasn't changed all that much. It rang pretty accurate to me. So just like today you get people that bath twice a day to people that don't bath that often, you'd get them back in the day too. Granted, running a bath was a b#tch those days, but that's about the biggest difference (and might at most changed the twice a day person to a once a day person, maybe, even then, if you ever roughed it, you know you can do wonders with a bucket of cold/luke/warm-if-you're-lucky water and a cloth).

The old tribes in Africa had really good teeth for people that didn't have fluoride toothpaste. Reason why - they sat for hours a day cleaning their teeth with sharp sticks. It was time consuming, but worked just as well if not better.

Also, I'm sure that if riders ran out of ale/wine, they would drink water from the streams. So some might have taken a liking to it too, who knows. But only a few probably, with that much beer around, who'd prefer water?! LOL Side note, one of these days Amy will be able to tell us how much beer $50 of TNBW prize money can buy! No pressure Ames!

And then this ... slightly different reason for not taking a bath, but related to the topic of bathing:

http://www.news.com.au/lifestyle/beauty … 7519995565

So who's with me?! No more bathing. Yay!!! wink

But yeah, my characters bath and wipe and clean themselves. If they didn't ... *shudders, I'd probably never read or write a historical romance novel ever again*

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Elisheva Free wrote:

Is anyone else experiencing a false-positive on connection requests? Mine is bright red on my homepage, but after clicking on it, nothing shows up.

-Elisheva

I've been having the same problem for quite a while now and up to now, Sol couldn't find the source of the problem. I've tried to log out and in again, maybe you have more luck?

hehehe, just kidding! LOL

I like Lotyie more!

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(520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

njc wrote:

But he's talking about loyalty to Anthony.  He'd undermine that by saying outright that he doesn't trust Anthony.

I don't think so. Anthony's change of heart is very sudden ... and making 100% sure is better than just assuming. Anthony has a lot to answer for and proof ... I think you can be supportive/loyal, while still being careful?

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(520 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

njc wrote:

You DO have M say it, near the end, in the conversation before the wench gets involved.

No exactly though, and not in reply to Anthony?