Oh, Sherry. One thing I did notice. You don't have any profile info. It might help if you added a bit about yourself. I know when I read, I like to get an idea about the person. Like where they're from and how long they've been writing or just some silly something that lets me see the type person they are. That's just a suggestion.

Sherry,
Some reviewers only review first chapters. I do that a lot. Mainly because no matter how good the writer, the story might not be a genre I like, so I don't want to commit. I usually tell those authors NOT to read my work because I can't promise to keep reading theirs. Of course, if they do, then I keep reading theirs because guilt gets the best of me! When I first joined the site, back in the dark ages, I read as many as 35 novels at one time. That was before I had any books published. Once you publish, you spend a lot of time marketing, blogging, on social media, doing book events, and in some cases, like mine, speaking.
It seems members just don't have the time they used to have. When I posted a story, I'd start with maybe 20-25 reviews of the first chapter. By chapter 4, that amount would dwindle to maybe 15. Then by chapter 10, I'd have maybe 6-8 regular readers who'd stay with the book until the end. If you get that many, then that's about normal.
For me, it isn't the point incentive. Like so many others who have been members a while, I have more points than I'll ever use. It's simply that new members join all the time and some of us older folks like to help them out by reading their work. It's a time constraint. It isn't anything you are doing wrong.
Heck, if you can get just a few good reviewers, then you're in good shape. In addition to being a member here, I also belong to a local group where I read my work and get critique. I suggest you do that if you have a group in your area.
Also, some of us are slow to read. So you may still get readers who started your story to come back later. Sometimes, like you say, life gets in the way, and we have to neglect the site for a while.
Hang in there. ~Ann

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Jack,

Why can't you just edit the chapter content? Delete the content of chapter 26 and then copy and paste in the correct chapter content. Do the same with the other chapter. No need to worry about the numbers just change the content.

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Thank goodness I never let anyone read the first thing I wrote!! I should probably destroy it before I die so none of my relatives find it!!

Y'all are too funny! In my local critique group, there is a husband/wife writing team and they publish at least two books a year. I tell them all of the time how envious I am they both write! My husband doesn't have a writer's bone in his body. I've often wondered how it would be to write with someone else. One of my favorite authors, Jennifer Cruise writes with Bob Mayer. She writes the "love" part, and he writes the action. I love their books!
However, I doubt I'd be much of a partner. I struggle to get one book a year written!

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BIG congratulations to all the winners!!

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Give it a few days. My new one took some time before it changed.

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Welcome, Karen.
Ditto to everything Marilyn said!!
~Ann

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I could almost say Amen to everything Marilyn said. However, I like total silence when I write, and I like to be alone, which is hard since my husband is retired. He does his best to leave me alone, but just knowing any moment he can step to the door to ask me something, keeps me from writing most of the time. Like Marilyn, my characters are always in my head. My bed gets really crowded most nights!! I also like to have a title first and always have except for one book. I had a working title but didn't decide on a final until that book was finished. Even ran a contest to name it. Many times, I'll come up with one scene I intend to put in the book that will include the title, usually in dialogue. Like one of my characters said to the other...Say You'll Never Love Me...that was the title. One said, Tell Me a Secret, something you've never told anyone else...Tell Me a Secret was the title. That title pivotal scene may not occur until late in the book, but it reveals the title. In my latest book, Chirp, that title came from the first scene I wrote in my head, which didn't happen until chapter 16 in the book. Turns out, readers loved the reason behind the title! I was so glad because it is my most favorite scene I've ever written.

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Hello.
Later today I will review your short story. I agree with Marilyn. You need to post your work so readers can get points for their efforts. Like Marilyn, I have more points than I'll ever use, so I read regardless. But...most members need the points to post their work.

Welcome to the site. I hope you like it here.
~Ann

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I especially like After Nightfall. I also like...Comes the Night, Darkness Descends, Poisoned Heart, Heart of Stone, ...titles are hard. Luckily, I usually have a title before I start a story. Usually. With one, I had to have help. Dags, here on the site came up with it. Tied With a Bow and No Place to Go. It's a humorous mystery. So like me,  you may just get a suggestion that will work! Good luck.

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Thanks to all for such kind remarks!
And, BIG Texas thanks to Randy for sharing his book with my readers.

You know I'm in! :+)

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Thank you! I did that on a whim. When I first started speaking at conferences and workshops, I used to hand out the list of verbs for "said" and attendees just thought that was the greatest thing ever, so I decided to write the book. Believe it or not, it sells copies every single day! (It's a big seller in India) It stayed on the Amazon's best seller list for 8 months without any promotion.  I was shocked. Still am at well it does.
I'm so glad it has helped you. That makes my day!!

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Amber Eyes, by site member, Mariana Reuter is featured on my blog today. Read to find out if she ever writes naked...and be sure and leave a comment! Here's the link:
http://www.anneverett.com/2017/06/23/ma … on-friday/

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I also think the cover is great! Nice color combinations!!

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Your manuscript is both good and original, but the part that is good, is not original, and the part that is original, is not good. ~Samuel Johnson
If I owned a bookstore, I'd make all the mysteries hard to find. ~Demetri Martin
If the #2 pencil is the most popular, then why is it still #2?  ~George Carlin
I wrote my book in fifth person so every sentence can start with, "I heard from this guy who told somebody." ~Demetri Martin

Have you checked Amazon to make sure someone hasn't already used it? You might do that.

You can't copyright a title of a book, song, or movie. You also can't copyright a phrase. That's why so many books have the same lines in them.

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Big congratulations, Janet! I agree with Norm about the background photo. But the rest of the page is great.

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Well, damn. Now I've got to go look to see who y'all are talking about!!

Here's a great article with valuable info on what to expect from traditional publishing.

https://janefriedman.com/books-become-bestsellers/

Congrats, Janet!!

Wonderful news!! Congratulations!!

September is full and half of October, so tell them to get busy and contact me!!