Actually, John, the police department in your story cedes authority to the county sheriff with nary a wimper. There might be a turf battle later, but that would be the chief of police's fault for letting it happen in the first place. I do like your premise, though, if both law enforcement agencies have agreed to this beforehand. Then the chief can decide the arrangement isn't fair, and he should be responsible for major crimes committed within the boundaries of the town that pays his salary. And that's where the conflict comes in.
652 2015-03-06 03:01:27
Re: Wishlist Cont. (212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I checked out the forums on that site, Janet. Not a lot going on over there. So maybe you could stir things up in that group.
653 2015-03-06 02:22:18
Re: Wishlist Cont. (212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Ah, yes, Janet - good point. Before the American colonies developed their own lexicon, the British dictionary ruled! I already feel kinda bad about chiming in on what is supposed to be a "Wish list" forum, but it was here, so what can I say? No telling where these threads will spin off to.
So, Dags, I agree, this isn't the place for such a discussion. If there is another, more appropriate venue, I'd be in favor of it. So what group are you referring to, Janet?
654 2015-03-06 01:00:53
Re: Wishlist Cont. (212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
For you Aussies, Canadians, and Brits - you have to decide which market(s) you want your book in. I've read Higgins, Forsythe, Follett, Le Carre, Greene, and let's not forget about Ian Fleming. I might have glided over it, but I can't recall their using UK, as opposed to American, spellings for their words. Obviously, their target was the American audience. "Highschool" and "storey" might be fine in London, but "high school" and "story" are what New York expects to see. I let these separated-by-a common-language examples go when I review, but any authors seeking an American publisher should keep that in mind. Or not, and let the American editor worry about it.
Now, "bonnet," and "lift," and "bangers" are appropriate terms for English characters to use; the American eqiuivalents wouldn't be appropriate.
The O.E.D. is quite a tome - wish I had one, JP - but it has a British basis. Give me Merriam-Webster any day! This has started an interesting thread, and I hope to see more of it.
655 2015-03-04 23:33:10
Re: Wishlist Cont. (212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I know who that reviewer was who said it should be "rearview." And he was right! He set me straight about that, too. Since then I've read scores of novels that had it as "rearview." Even Sandford's novels, as I recall, Dags. Sorry. See what your editor says.
656 2015-03-03 23:11:25
Re: Mikira could use a bit of help (43 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hey, Mikira - I don't understand your need for funding. If a publisher is demanding money up front, that's a publisher to avoid.
Jack
657 2015-02-28 00:19:02
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
When you highlight a passage and make a comment, then decide later you want to delete the comment, you can delete the text of the comment, but the highlight remains. This shouldn't be. In addition to being a visual glitch, if you decide you want to then highlight another section that includes the deleted section, you can't, because you can't select text already highlighted. When you delete a comment, the highlighting should go and it should be fully deleted.
Yes, that's an annoyance, and it would be nice if the highlighted areas would also be deleted along with the unwanted comment, but no biggie. It just requires an additional comment to explain such to the author.
658 2015-02-28 00:13:14
Re: Wishlist Cont. (212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Double amen!
659 2015-02-23 22:28:16
Re: Hello, I'm new (hist fiction writer) (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome, Tonya! I'm not trolling for reviews, but if you want reciprocation for your stuff, you'll get it by reviewing my stuff!
What period in history does your story encompass? Characters in pre-1980s' stories make it tough for writers addicted to cell phone conversations to move plots along quickly. So I'm always interested in reading about life before modern technology. Jack
660 2015-02-20 12:35:28
Re: Tidbit 2/19 (3 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Okay, but females came in second!
661 2015-02-19 18:27:52
Re: Missing Persons (7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Okay, R.M. You're right; we've gotten off the original thread, but I couldn't resist this one: If you're playing poker and look around the table and can't identify the obvious sucker, it's you.
662 2015-02-19 17:47:03
Re: Missing Persons (7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Ha! There are lies, damn lies, and statistics. When I was going through my residency, one of my mentors gave me an old expression which I'm sure is just as applicable in law enforcement: When you hear hoofbeats behind you, don't think of zebras.
663 2015-02-19 13:07:24
Re: Section Breaks and Flourished Section Breaks (3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Those guidelines are pretty much what I've used in my manuscripts. But then I was told by three different publishers to nix the space breaks in favor of using all asterisk breaks in order to avoid formatting miscues in the printing process. Yet I've read many novels that do use space breaks, so it depends on the publisher. So my advice would be to continue using the space breaks as outlined, and let the publisher worry about it.
664 2015-02-19 02:03:03
Re: Missing Persons (7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
That's an old one, Allen. A little sleight of hand/narration to make it seem a mystery. There isn't an extra dollar. All the dollars have been accounted for. It's the individual multiplication factor that makes it seem a puzzle. The men, as a group, did, indeed, pay thirty dollars for the room, five dollars too much. The group got three dollars back, and the bellhop kept two. That's a total of thirty dollars.
665 2015-02-17 22:07:48
Re: Bullitt (5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Yes, but I figure TCM will be the same in any time zone. Check your local listings. And after you see the flick, tell me what you think, love.
666 2015-02-17 20:35:09
Topic: Bullitt (5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
There was someone in this group who said she (I'm pretty sure it was a she) had never seen "Bullitt" with Steve McQueen. It's on TCM tonight at six. Good cop movie, and the best car chase (on the streets of San Francisco!) ever filmed, IMO. Watch and enjoy!
667 2015-02-17 11:02:24
Re: New Quiz (9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
A capital offense is a crime capable of carrying the death penalty if convicted. And I don't think those codes were "made up" by TV shows but are actual shortcuts used by cops around the country. An affidavit is a sworn statement, but it doesn't have to be administered by a court clerk; a notary public or other official authorized by law can do it. And I would consider a felony as a crime punishable by incarceration in prison, as opposed to a misdemeanor, that is punished - at the most - by incarceration in a local jail. The other answers
JP gave seemed right to me.
668 2015-02-16 20:30:01
Re: Cop Shop quiz (9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Hey, JP and Philisha - I didn't mean to sound peevish. But more participation would mean more interest, and I didn't see that. That's okay. I happen to like puzzles and trivia, but many don't. To each his/her own. No regrets!
669 2015-02-15 22:25:35
Re: Cop Shop quiz (9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Due to the overwhelming lack of participation, I'm calling an end to my quiz. JP, I do believe it was Marlon Brando's line in Godfather I that was the correct answer to #4, though, Janet, Pacino may have repeated it in II. So I'll give you both credit for that one. No one got numbers 7 & 8. Here are the answers:
7. The Sting Robert Redford (when Paul Newman tells him the marks aren't so tough)
8. Bullitt Steve McQueen (when Jacqueline Bissette wants to know what investigation he's so involved with)
I'm retiring from the quiz business.
670 2015-02-15 12:08:44
Re: Cop Shop quiz (9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
Excellent, Janet! And yes, you caught me with that mistake for #10.
671 2015-02-15 02:03:48
Re: Cop Shop quiz (9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I won't reveal the answers yet, JP, but you got three of them right!
672 2015-02-14 22:46:27
Re: Welcome (30 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
I ditto that, Allen. Alas, some members oif this group don't practice reciprocation, at least as it applies to me. I won't mention names - you know who you are. This is one of my pet peeves on the site, but I have a no-negotiation policy: If I review an author multiple times and receive no or only a token review in return, that author gets nothing more from me, even if I might like what he or she has written. Time is limited, and we're all here to improve our writing. I'll only expend continuing effort if I can get a like reward. One hand scratches the other. One-way streets don't work. There has been a not inconsiderable number of authors on this site who know that I will be a loyal reviewer for anyone willing to do the same for me. Anyway, that's my story, and I'm sticking to it!
673 2015-02-14 22:28:01
Topic: Cop Shop quiz (9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
JP gets my juices flowing whenever she posts a new quiz. So I got a new one. too. This one involves quotes in crime movies. Name the movie and the actor saying the line. Some are easy, some, not so. Extra credit if you get more than five correct!
1. "Has it occurred to you that I'm having a hard time keeping my hands off you?"
2. "If he brings a knife, you bring a gun."
3. "Do you still arrest Chinamen for spitting in the laundry?"
4. "Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer."
5. "Whatever you do, don't sell that cow!"
6. "Who are those guys?"
7. "We're not so tough, either."
8. "It's not for you, baby."
9. "Cause he looks too damn good, that's how!"
10. "I got a motive which is money and the body which is dead."
674 2015-02-14 16:36:30
Re: POP COP QUIZ #7 (6 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
1. Goodfellas Ray Liotta
2. Dillinger Warren Oates
3. (No idea!)
4. Zodiac Mark Ruffalo
5. American Gangster Denzel Washington
6. Heavenly Creatures Kate Winslet
7. Reversal of Fortune Jeremy Irons
8. (A wild guess here) Menendez: A Killing in Beverly Hills Edward James Olmos
9. A Cry in the Dark Meryl Streep
10. Donnie Brasco Johnny Depp
675 2015-02-08 12:54:37
Re: POP COP QUIZ #8 (4 replies, posted in Cop Shop)
1. Natural Born Killers. Woody Harrelson
2. .
3. Dog Day Afternoon Al Pacino
4. Monster. Charlize Theron
5. In Cold Blood. Robert Blake
6. Wall Street. Michael Douglas
7. The Onion Field. James Woods
8. Catch Me If You Can. Leonardo Dicaprio
9. Foxcatcher. Steve Carrell
10. Any of several movies about the James gang
(I didn't peek at the other answers first)