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(5 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Yup.

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(5 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Sodium thiopental causes unconsciousness in 30-45 seconds. It's used in the induction of anesthesia but has largely been replaced by propofol.

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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

For all those of you who took the time to read "Teammates," wanted you to know that it will be released as "Skeleton Run" on April 14. For a look at the cover and a peek at the first chapter, visit: www.facebook.com/redadeptpublishing.

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(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, you might have covered this in the old site, but when do the judges for the entries start reviewing them? When they come in, or do they wait until the deadline and then start? The latter would make more sense, since it would allow for revisions based on reviewers' comments to be included in the final product.

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(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

That's "In the Electric Mist," Allen. Based on the answers deemed correct already, I'd have to guess that John Goodman is the character actor who appeared in all of the movies on your list.

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(2 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

What do you call cannabilism of relatives?  Eating Grandpa out of house and home? smile

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(22 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Good for you, Claire! As one who read the story on TNBW, I can attest to its excellence, so better late than never! smile

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(10 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Actually, John, the police department in your story cedes authority to the county sheriff with nary a wimper. There might be a turf battle later, but that would be the chief of police's fault for letting it happen in the first place. I do like your premise, though,  if both law enforcement agencies have agreed to this beforehand. Then the chief can decide the arrangement isn't fair, and he should be responsible for major crimes committed within the boundaries of the town that pays his salary. And that's where the conflict comes in.

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I checked out the forums on that site, Janet. Not a lot going on over there. So maybe you could stir things up in that group.

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Ah, yes, Janet - good point. Before the American colonies developed their own lexicon, the British dictionary ruled! I already feel kinda bad about chiming in on what is supposed to be a "Wish list" forum, but it was here, so what can I say? No telling where these threads will spin off to. smile  So, Dags, I agree, this isn't the place for such a discussion. If there is another, more appropriate venue, I'd be in favor of it. So what group are you referring to, Janet?

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

For you Aussies, Canadians, and Brits - you have to decide which market(s) you want your book in. I've read Higgins, Forsythe, Follett, Le Carre, Greene, and let's not forget about Ian Fleming. I might have glided over it, but I can't recall their using UK, as opposed to American, spellings for their words. Obviously, their target was the American audience. "Highschool" and "storey" might be fine in London, but "high school" and "story" are what New York expects to see. I let these separated-by-a common-language examples go when I review, but any authors seeking an American publisher should keep that in mind. Or not, and let the American editor worry about it. smile  Now, "bonnet," and "lift," and "bangers" are appropriate terms for English characters to use; the American eqiuivalents wouldn't be appropriate.

The O.E.D. is quite a tome - wish I had one, JP - but it has a British basis. Give me Merriam-Webster any day! This has started an interesting thread, and I hope to see more of it.

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I know who that reviewer was who said it should be "rearview." And he was right! He set me straight about that, too. Since then I've read scores of novels that had it as "rearview."  Even Sandford's novels, as I recall, Dags. Sorry. See what your editor says.

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(43 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hey, Mikira - I don't understand your need for funding. If a publisher is demanding money up front, that's a publisher to avoid.
Jack

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(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Temple Wang wrote:

When you highlight a passage and make a comment, then decide later you want to delete the comment, you can delete the text of the comment, but the highlight remains.  This shouldn't be.  In addition to being a visual glitch, if you decide you want to then highlight another section that includes the deleted section, you can't, because you can't select text already highlighted.  When you delete a comment, the highlighting should go and it should be fully deleted.

Yes, that's an annoyance, and it would be nice if the highlighted areas would also be deleted along with the unwanted comment, but no biggie. It just requires an additional comment to explain such to the author.

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(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Double amen!

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(15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Welcome, Tonya! I'm not trolling for reviews, but if you want reciprocation for your stuff, you'll get it by reviewing my stuff! smile What period in history does your story encompass? Characters in pre-1980s' stories make it tough for writers addicted to cell phone conversations to move plots along quickly. So I'm always interested in reading about life before modern technology.  Jack

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(3 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Okay, but females came in second!

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(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Okay, R.M. You're right; we've gotten off the original thread, but I couldn't resist this one: If you're playing poker and look around the table and can't identify the obvious sucker, it's you.

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(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Ha! There are lies, damn lies, and statistics. When I was going through my residency, one of my mentors gave me an old expression which I'm sure is just as applicable in law enforcement: When you hear hoofbeats behind you, don't think of zebras.

Those guidelines are pretty much what I've used in my manuscripts. But then I was told by three different publishers to nix the space breaks in favor of using all asterisk breaks in order to avoid formatting miscues in the printing process. Yet I've read many novels that do use space breaks, so it depends on the publisher. So my advice would be to continue using the space breaks as outlined, and let the publisher worry about it.

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(7 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

That's an old one, Allen. A little sleight of hand/narration to make it seem a mystery. There isn't an extra dollar. All the dollars have been accounted for. It's the individual multiplication factor that makes it seem a puzzle. The men, as a group, did, indeed, pay thirty dollars for the room, five dollars too much. The group got three dollars back, and the bellhop kept two. That's a total of thirty dollars.

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(5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Yes, but I figure TCM will be the same in any time zone. Check your local listings. And after you see the flick, tell me what you think, love.

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(5 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

There was someone in this group who said she (I'm pretty sure it was a she) had never seen "Bullitt" with Steve McQueen. It's on TCM tonight at six. Good cop movie, and the best car chase (on the streets of San Francisco!) ever filmed, IMO. Watch and enjoy!

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(9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

A capital offense is a crime capable of carrying the death penalty if convicted. And I don't think those codes were "made up" by TV shows but are actual shortcuts used by cops around the country. An affidavit is a sworn statement, but it doesn't have to be administered by a court clerk; a notary public or other official authorized by law can do it. And I would consider a felony as a crime punishable by incarceration in prison, as opposed to a misdemeanor, that is punished - at the most - by incarceration in a local jail. The other answers
JP gave seemed right to me.

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(9 replies, posted in Cop Shop)

Hey, JP and Philisha - I didn't mean to sound peevish. But more participation would mean more interest, and I didn't see that. That's okay. I happen to like puzzles and trivia, but many don't. To each his/her own. No regrets!