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vern wrote:

Another line of thought would be that what possible good would a prize of points be to the many on site who have already accumulated more points than they will ever use. Could be a problem, so I'm just throwing things out to ponder should it be of interest. Take care. Vern

Agree.  Back all those years ago I would not have been interested in points when I joined because at the time I wouldn't have known how important they are to survival on here.  And still wouldn't be interested in points because my current ones will long outlive me.  Which, by the way, I think we should leave a Last Will and Testament here designating who should get our points when we croak.

"I hereby bequeath two thousand points to..."

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Perhaps I should use myself as an example.  I came here in 2008 because of the Strongest Start contest.  Though I didn't win, it sure made a better writer out of me when I received those reviews.  The 'regulars' on here have some great ideas and through the years have made very helpful suggestions since we are blind quite often when it comes to our own work.

Ray is correct when he says the old gray mare ain't what she used to be.  My first year here was filled with one review after another, some flowery and full of BS, while others stuck the knife in. I think it's not so much that the membership is falling below normal, but that we as reviewers are also slacking off. It takes both to make this site work.  I for one am guilty.  I'm not reviewing as much due to life at my Animal Sanctuary getting in my way, but when someone posts and gets zero reviews, whether good or bad, it doesn't encourage them to stick around. 

As for the "fly-by" reviews Ray mentioned, I for one have been guilty of starting an in-line, but only getting part of the way through it and realizing I'm rewriting the story, which I don't want to do.  I always leave the door open and in my remarks tell the writer I don't want to rewrite their work and have given examples of what I feel they need to work on, but if they want more help from me, to reach out and I will be happy to help.  And many have, both through private messaging and quickie notes.  I don't do it just to grab points because, after being here for eleven years, I've got more points than I will ever use in a lifetime.  If I point out to someone one time that they need to make sure quotation marks are both before and after their dialogue, I don't feel it necessary to highlight it every time in the remainder of the chapter.  If I point out they are constantly changing tenses, then any writer who is serious about their work will go through the entire chapter and make necessary changes.  I don't see the need to keep pointing it out.  Therefore, your 5,000-word chapter with 25 paragraphs may only be highlighted by me in the first 10 paragraphs if you repeat your mistakes throughout.

MJ

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Usually when we have a lull, we have a contest to perk up interest.  Strongest Start, a flash fiction...
Contests always bring in new blood, and some of them actually stick around a while.

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Ah, sad.  I hate to hear that.  I had no clue.  Thanks for letting us know.

MJ

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This group started with a bang, but for some reason it went out as quickly as it came into being.  Where is everyone?  It was such a good idea (or at least I thought so) to get all us 'oldies' back together, and so refreshing to read your new work.  But then...bam!  Gone.  Some of us are still here, but what happened to the rest?

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https://publishedtodeath.blogspot.com/2 … ction.html

https://artplusmarketing.com/15-magazin … c738f850a6

Just a few I found doing a google search.  I'm sure there are hundreds of others that pay you and not the other way around.  Unless, of course, you choose Vern's contest.

I do my best writing after midnight, sitting in my den in my recliner, feet up, laptop open, cat tucked underneath my left arm, sleeping. Snoring dog on the rug underneath the recliner.  Soft Indian flute music mixed with rain and thunder playing in the background.  Cup of Maxwell House Hazelnut Cafe coffee getting cold on the table beside me.  Then I fall asleep.  Oh well... so much for writing tonight. 

Goodnight, all.
MJ

Don' make me no nevamind.  I's reads longs or shorts, jus' whateva I's in da mood fo'.  Too long fo' you, den don' read it.  Too sho't, den read two.  It be dat simple.

MJ
(Just practicing for my character, Sam Woodard.)

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Congratulations, Randy!  Way to go!  So happy for you!

MJ

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So sorry to hear this, Alan.  I hope things go well for Di, and for you, too.  Please keep me informed as to how things are going with her.  Prayers and hugs to you both.  You've got my phone number...

Marilyn

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M. Farkas Fowler wrote:

Hello, All

Hello, M. Farkas Fowler.  Welcome aboard.

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I realize most of you seasoned writers don't need this, but for some of the newer ones, here are some great ideas and suggestions for publishing your first book. 
https://www.dailywritingtips.com/how-to … sh-a-book/

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Congratulations!  I like audiobooks as long as it's a male narrator who has a sexy voice!  Then he can whisper in my ear for a few hours!  LOL!

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Mariana Reuter wrote:

2. "Ce qui embellit le désert c'est qu'il cache un puits quelque part."
"What makes the desert beautiful, is that somewhere it hides a well."

1.     The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupery
2.    "You can lead a horticulture, but you can't make her think."

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Alza wrote:

2. "... never did we dream that thought could arise from the lonely animals who cannot dream each other's dreams.”

1.  Orson Scott Card, Ender's Game
2.  “I wish I knew how to quit you.”

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That means he didn't post the story in this group, even though you're both members of it.  He chose to only post it in Young Adult Writers.  You can join YAW and read it there. 

Before hitting the post button, he would have picked the groups he wanted to post the story in, and he didn't pick this one. He could have posted in both YAW and here, but obviously he didn't.

Hope this helps. 

MJ

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So glad you're safe, Bill.  Weather that's so unpredictable this time of year is nightmarish to say the least.  We've narrowly missed a few tornados and hurricanes the last couple of years, and to me, there's nothing any more frightening than the force of Mother Nature.  She can be a bitch sometimes.

I smiled when you said you were cat-sitting!  Good for you!

MJ

Oh, wow!  Have your feet touched back down on earth yet???!!!  I am so stinking proud of you, Randy!  What a fabulous honor with sooooo many opportunities opening up for you because of this!  Please keep us informed!  I am delighted and excited for you!

MJ

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Just in case anybody cares:  I'm taking a break from reviewing and/or posting for a couple of months.  I have a list of things I need to accomplish with the animal sanctuary and will be working into the wee hours for a while.  If I'm reviewing your stuff, I will be back soon! I'll be checking in frequently, so if you need something, send me a message. Keep writing.

MJ

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Carry on

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killer

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Need a vacay

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268 days until Christmas.

I'm using Word 2013.  I've had no problems with it.

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Is it "biggly" small or "very, very, very yugely big?"  I suggest it's a national emergency, but you don't really need to call it one because Sol is most likely working on it.  So go play a game of golf, and when you get back, it'll be fixed.